Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #4 [ Completed ]

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Beautiful this just a complete fairytale

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

The story is amazingly cute, sweet and awesome. You have narrated a very beautiful story wonderfully. I just loved it. Thanks. Please PM me whenever you write anything new.

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Edited my comment on pg 50.

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Thats really one of the best endings...
Loved it.

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

nice

thank u for pm

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

I had been waiting for you to finish the story and read it at a go...

Lovely story Mints...

Enjoyed it very much.

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Wow...

What a journey..

As u said..

Arhi have come a long way..

From strangers to acquaintances..from frnds to lovers..then husband n wife n finally parents..

I liked Sumer-Payal jodi very much though it looked a little odd...

Sumer should be Aakash n Vice versa...

I like Payash in IPK..😛

Anjie n Sumer(in that case frnd of Khushi n Payal)should be together..

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I m laughing like crazy now..

But I hope u got my point..

WHAT THE ???//???///

U r taking break from writing...

NO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLS COME BACK SOON !!!!!!

Fauzia..

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Read all the last 3 parts in one go.. ❤️ Payal is a real sweetheart, the way she helps them meet.. So so sweet.. 😳ArHi married and the prank..🤣 Poor Arnav.. 😆 And then their moments together.. Their honeymoon..❤️ And their Kriya.. Everything is so so perfect.. ❤️

Gonna miss this story..😭

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Such a beautiful Awesome Story...With lovely ending... 👏👏

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#370

Chapter 36:

Arnav and his desperateness for Khushi makes me want to laugh, but then sigh at how cute and romantic he truly is! Khushi is definitely one lucky girl as she will get the man who will love her the most! And his loving family is just an added bonus😃

The mehndi and sangeet has gone great - hope the rest of the wedding functions follow suit!

And now to the passion shared between Arnav and Khushi - you truly did a great job expressing it. And true to Arnav's gentleman side, he stopped himself at the perfect time. Loved loved loved how he held himself back and promised Khushi the first night she wants and deserves!

Can't believe the story is coming to an end so soon😭