SANDHIR FF - TA RA RUM PUM ( UPDATED PART 12 ' NEW ' PAGE 64 ) - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2

Hey smily...
I am back again yr...i am hell busy that hy i cant read or comment on your story
Likin ...m firr gayab ho jaogi ...likin...brech beech me aake nd story pad ke
Comment jarur karugi...
First nice banner
Second ...rd nd sanyu ne shadi kar li
I an shocked
Bcoz mjhe laga abi to dreama hoga..but yaha to sab kuch fast forward chal rha h .
Home car...company...ek sath sab kuch..
Lagta h rd ki lotry lag gayi..
Plz pm
Nd keep writing

Heheheh 😆Haan lottery mai sanyu mil gyi ...thnq payal ...age bhi padna ek surprise hai 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

This part is dedicated to Pritha (pritha072angel) just want to say u read this ff a few days ago only but ur love for my works has left me spellbound ...thanks a lot dear fir ur awsm support


Happy reading !!!


Part 11

Sanyukta ws not able to register anything ...just a few minutes ago she was laughing heartily with her husband and now their workshop ...the place that had given them so many moments to cherish was on fire and moreover her life ...her husband ...her randhir was in the flames of the fire ...she was crying bitterly

Randhir ...sanyukta shouted ...she immediately called the fire brigade and in no time they were at the workshop since it was an emergency case ...soon the firemen brought the fire into control and safely brought out rd also ...sanyu came rushing t rd whose whole face was black

A fireman - thnk god mam he ws wearing fire proof jacket ...otherwise their would have been a lot of problem

Sanyu remembered an incident from the past

Flashback

Sanyu nd rd were coming out of the house ...just then rd spoke up

R - sanyu aaj tumne meri jacket dekhi

S - haan black leather jacket ...achi hai ..isme kya new hai

R - special hi to hai sanyu ...ye jacket fire proof hai

S - kya fire proof ..pr kyu ?

R - socha kuch naya try kru ...aur kya pata kb kya ho jaye

S - huh!! Very funny ...chalo ab

Flashback ends

Fresh tears made out their way from her beautiful orbs remembering the incident ...she was brought back to her senses by a fireman

F - mam ...mam

S - yes sorry

F - it's ok mam ...we understand ...mam now plz excuse us ..we have other emergencies ...we pray that mr shekhawat gets well soon

S - thank you so much

F - but please rush him to the hospital ...he needs medical surveillance urgently

S - yes thanks a lot sir

The firemen leave and sanyu covered rd with a blanket and immediately calked yoyo

S - hello yoyo

Y - hey hi sanyukta ..kaisi ho

Sanyukta did not reply anything ..instead she kept crying

Y - hello sanyukta tum ho wahan??

S - yoyo wo rd ( she again started crying ) ..and she described the whole incident to yoyo

Even yoyo was in tears

Y - sanyukta plz apne aap ko sambhala ...jldi sanyu rd ko hospital leke jao ..mai bhi aa rha hu

S - haan yoyo plz jaldi aao ... pr usse pehle tum plz princess aur champ ko pick up krlo aur kaustuki ke pas chod do ..unhe is baat ke bare mai kuch mat batana

Y - haan tum tension mt lo ...mai bas abi aa rha hu

Sanyukta carefully picked up rd and kissed him gently

S - bas 5 mins more jaan ...she carefully placed rd on the back seat of the car and quickly drove to the hospital ...she was continuously shouting for the doctor ...the ward boy came and quickly rushed rd into the operation theatre ...yoyo also came there running

Y - sanyukta !!! Kya hua randhir kahan hai ?

S - yoyo wo doctors use operation theatre mai le gaye hai

Y - it's ok sanyukta sab thik ho jayega

S - yoyo champ ...princess ?

Y - maine unko kaustu ji ke pas chod diya hai ...aur sanyukta maine unhe sab bta diya hai

S - kya ?

Y - aur pata hai unhone kya kaha ...yoyo took out his phone and opened a voice message ..

' HELLO MUMMA ...HUME PATA HAI AP BOHOT RO RAHE HO ..BUT PLEASE MUMMA MAT RONA ..KYUNKI HUMARE DADDY SUPERMAN HAI ...AUR SUPERMAN KO KABI KUCH NAI HO SAKTA ...MUMMA DADDY SE KEHNA KI CHAMP NE MERI NEW DOLL TOD DI AUR REVENGE LENE KE LIE MAINE USKI CAR ( sanyukta smiled between her tears on listening this line ) ISLIE AB DADDY SE KEHNA KI HUMARE LIYE JALDI SE EK NEW DOLL AUR CAR LE AAYE ...WE LOVE U BOTH MUMMA ..MUAHHH

Sanyukta was laughing in between her sobs ...she kissed the phone and whispered ...daddy loves u too champ princess

After 5 mins the doctor came out of the operation theatre

D - mrs shekhawat

S - ji mai hi hu sanyukta shekhawat ...kaisa hai rd ..wo thik to hai na ...usne muje bulaya ? Nai bulaya hoga ...pkka usne champ aur princess ko bulaya hoga

D - mrs shekhawat relax ...dekhiye randhir to thik h ...kuch burns aaye h ..wo jldi hi thik ho jayenge ...thank god he ws wearing a fire proof jacket ..nhi to kuch bhi ho skta tha...ye medicines hai jo unhe roz leni hongi ( sanyu takes the list and yoyo tajes it from her )

S - thnk god ..thank you so much doctor ...ap jante nai hai ki apne muje kitni badi tension se free kr diya hai

D - mrs shekhawat muje apse kuch aur baat bhi krni hai ...plz ap dono mere cabin mai aayai

They both nod their head in agreement and move towards the cabin

CABIN

They all settle themselves and the doctor spoke

D - dekhiye jo ab mai bolne jaa rha hu wo dhyan se suni yea

Y - kya boliye jldi plz

D - dekhiye jb workshop mai fire lgi thi tb rd andr hi the ...aur fire itni zyada thi ki wo dar k mare behosh ho gye nd nw he is in a great trauma ...unko machines ka fire ka phobia ho gaya hai ...i don't think ki ab 1 saal se pehle wo machines pe kam kr payenge ...

S - kyaa ( shocked )

D - ji aur 1 saal k baad b koi guarantee nhi h ki wo puri tarah se thik honge ya nahi

S - nhi ye possible nhi ho skta ..rd machines k bina nhi reh payega ...yoyo kuch bolo na

Yoyo was crying ...y - sanyukta plz apne ap ko sambhala

D - dekhiye mrs shekhawat i know its very hard to register but i promise ki i will try my best to cure rd as soon as possible ...now plz excuse me

The doctor went and sanyu and yoyo came out if the cabin

Sanyu ws continuously crying ..nd looking at rd through the window pane

Y - sanyukta ...( sanyukta hugged yoyo )

S - yoyo rd machines k bina nhi reh payega ..company ko to mai sambhalungi ...rd ko bhi kisi trha mana lungi pr jb rd ko ye pta chlega ki wo parth kashyap se hr gya h to use koi nhi sambhal payega ...koi nai

Y - nai aisa nai hai ,,,,koi hai aisa jo rd ko Sambhalega ...champ and princess

S - hope so yoyo

Y - aur dekhna jab 1 saal baad rd waps aayega na ...tb fad dega Sabki

A liitle Ray of hope enlightened in SANYUKTA'S heart and she was feeling a bit relieved

AFTER 1 YEAR

Rd ws sleeping in his king size bed when princess and champ came and sprayed shaving foam in both his hands 😆someone started licking his face and rd rubbed both his hands on his face thus putting all the foam on his face 🤣

R - ummm champ plz babu sone do ...mmm

Rd woke up wid a jerk ..nd ws surprised to see a dog sitting beside him

R - yeyeye kya h

P - hehe daddy ye hai humara new member Bruno

R - kya Bruno ..princess u know na i don't like dogs

P - plz dady ye iska b ghr h

R - no ye iska ghr nhi h .,infact ye kisi b kutte ka ghr nhi h ..ye sirf champ princess daddy aur mama ka ghr h

S -are itna shor kyu macha rhe ho ..(sanyukta looked towards the dog ) aww such a cute dog ...

P - haina muma aur daddy keh re h hum ise nhi rakhengi

R - ok so let's vote kon kon is doggy ko nai rkhna chahta wo hand raise kre ( rd immediately raised his hand but no 1 else did )

R - champ

C - plz daddy rkh lete hai na

R - no champiii plz

S - nhi hum rakhengi ...umm chlo princess ise kuch khane ko dete h ...common champ ( and both champ and princess went along with sanyu )

R - godd ab ye kutta kahan se aagya ..aur mai princess ko mana b nhi kr skta .huhhh

NEXT SCENE

rd ws exercising on d trendmill ...nd ws watching news

NEWS REPORTED - to aaj ki sbse badi khbr RANDHIR SIngh SHEKHAWAT aaj waps machines k samne aane wale h ..ji haan 1 saal phle unka prototype blst ho gya tha aur wo trauma mai chle gye tha ..bt aaj wo waps aa rhe h aur aaj unka face off sidha unke arch rival PARTH KASHYAP se h ..to dekhte h ki rss waps apni no 1 position pr aa pte h ki nhi

R - of course isme b koi puchne ki baat h ..nd he switched off d tv

Sanyukta was looking towards rd and she witnessed the whole scene ..she came to him

S - rd tum sure ho na ki tum waps kaam krna chahte ho

R - haan sanyu 1 saal ho gya h bs ab aur nhi ...aaj mai us PARTH KASHYAP ko Hra kr hi rahunga

S - i trust u nd all d best ...( she kissed his cheek )

R - i love you sanyu ...aur promise ab tumhe koi problem ko face nai krna hoga

S - i love u too ...acha mai champ aur princess ka lunch pack krke ayi

Sanyu was going but. She calked back rd and gave a flying kiss to him..while Bruno who ws sitting there barked showing dat sanyu gave d kiss to him 😆

R - hey wo mere lie tha ..pta nhi is gnde se doggy ko kb tk jhelna hoga ..huh

Precap - R - Y - tu bhi muje taunt krne aaya hai na puri duniya ke sath ..do hell with ur friendship aur aaj ke baad muje apni shakal mat dikhana ...

😆😉Ab bas yahi kehna chahti hu ki comments dal do aur ek ques kya rd apne trauma se bahar aaya hoga ki nai ..??


Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! me first...??? 😳

look Smiley here also me first 🤣 🤣

lovely chappy it was smiley...

I loved the doggy wala part ...

Amazing update...

Excited to read the further parts ...

Do continue soon...


PS: Iss bar maine jaldi unress bhi kar di.. 😊
Edited by BornAries - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khush ho jaao yaha jldi aa gayi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awersome prt precap padh ke tih lagta nahi randhir out of trauma
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome yar...loved it thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! It was amazingly written! I really loved how yoyo was being supportive towards sanyukta. And now Randhir is traumatized by that incident. Gosh, hope it all gets well soon!
Yay! A dog's entry finally! Bruno is such a cute name! My neighbour's puppy is also named Bruno!
I loved the spirit and enthusiasm of Randhir to get back to the business!
I really loves the shaving foam and doggy licking waala incident!
The precap, my gosh, it is thrilling!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Continue pretty soon. Thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey bhagvaan ek hi update me itna kuch😲
kaha se start karoon samajh nahi aa raha hai 🤣
i luv doggy wala scene 🤣
then blast i was crying😭
but precap super shocking
haye bhagvaan aur bhi bahut kuch hai but likhoon kaise???
chalo koi nahi smily toh khud samajh jayegi meri feelings 🤣 🤣
thanks for pm
lots of luv
bori
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Posted: 10 years ago
The update was superb
Luved it to the core yr

Sanyu luvs rd so much

Champ n princess so much understanding

Sandhir r lucky to hve dem

1 year leap
Rd ready to face parth

Bt I m sure he's gonna lose

Sandhir bad phase gonna start

Wtng for next
Update soon

Luv u yr
Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am in love with this ff...!!
And your writings 😛

Sanyuktas love for rd is not expressible ..!!
And how can I forget champ and princess..!!
They are too sweet

1 year leap...!!
Can't wait for the upcoming parts..!!

Update ASAP
And ASAP means jaldiii...!!!
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi

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