CHAPTER ONE UPDATED ! NEW Varya fanfic : about new beginnings .. - Page 12

Originally posted by: crazy_sweeto

I think this FF is getting better day by day and I can't stop myself from writing a long comment. So yeah coming back to the update, I just didn't expected the first chapter to be so... well, you know, amazing. Usually first chapter is always like an introduction to the story even after a prologue but I am amazed that the first chapter itself is giving a whole view of the story ahead which is very appreciative. Keep it dear you are going so well.

Love

Aparna

Originally posted by: anuaskif

Wowww.. I mean Wowww...

I like it how you have kept their characters intact... yet Maya's vulnerability does not sound illogical... You put in a good plot to support it..

Good work girl... can't wwait to read the next part...

And pluuueeez let it be a long one..

Luv,

Anu

Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand

Amazing update Pari 😊
bathroom part awesome 😆
flashback 😕 maya suffered a lot
vardhan's character is interesting very interesting 😉
loved d update very much
pls continue soon dear :)

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Hi Pari 😃
Yeah you updated 😃
Yes *dancing on my seat* 😆😃
Dedicated it to me. 🤗 Thanks I so love this FF 😃
Awwe, I asked you to write and I myself disappeared. Sorry for that 😳
Coming to the update, even if you say it was small it was quiet informative 😃
So the marriage is coz of dean issues 😕
Interesting very interesting 😆
Loved the way you expressed the "Cold War" between them through their mockery 👍🏼
Bathroom scene was hilarious 😆😉
Maya suffered a lot 😔
Awe you gave a small chappy coz of me, means you will update soon. Yay 😃😃😃
Well the plot was really awesome and you wrote it very well 👏
Thanks for PM
Update soon
Love Manu 😃

Originally posted by: draco_is_mine

Thanks manu (I finally got to know your name ) ... Thanks *_* It was a BIG comment and I have a smile plastered on my face now cuz of it .. thanks so so much

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85

Whoa! 😉

Well written as always.. 👏

Flashback was a bit confusing .. but d rest was FAB.. 👏

Do keep writing..

Update next ASAP..

Luv #Purvi..

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

U r welcome 😃

Originally posted by: SWA1992

really loved it to the core...soo nicely written...mayas helplessness, vds arguments-- all are superb... plz continue soon..