How sweet will it to be lOved by U...??? |KR TS| Last part pg 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
awesome... waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Loved the first part!
Kriya's love for Rey and Rey finding her dairy...
The Rey reading it...wow he actually saw what was written at the edge...
So he's curious too to meet her and she's hell excited to get a glimpse...
Waiting for the next part...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Something really nice and different!!!
Awesome update!!!
Live kri's love towards rey and the diary nicee!!
Cool update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Awesome update
Loved loved it aloottt...
Awesome starting...
Loved it alottt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
the first part is damn good and really fabulous... do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Hey this is really cute and lovely one dear!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏

Like the sweet way Rey was reading Kria's dairy!!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉

Please continue it soon!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Apa update de do naaa plzzz...😳😛😉🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Dear Readers,

I'm here with the 2nd part and a little bit changing that this two-shot is
now a three-shot as I wasn't able to finish the story line in two parts.
I'm really sorry for the delay in the update as I had some family functions
in the past few days. I'm really happy with the response I got for the 1st
part. Thank you so much for your liking, encouragement and support.

Happy Reading!
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Part 2


"Reyaansh...Reyaansh wake up dear. You are getting late for your show.", a
girl drapped in a blue saree woke her husband up lovingly.

She turned around to go but was stopped by the tight grip of a manly hand.
He caught her hand and looked at her with pleading eyes.

"Kriyu Jaan is it necessary to wake up from this cosy bed and then leave
the house for some stupid TV show. You know we can have a very good day
instead if you don't make me go."

"Ummm whatever your plans are, I'm not interested." She showed him her
tongue and again turned around to go. He aimed to hold her hand again in
order to stop her but the pallu of her saree came in his hand instead and
it fell down from her shoulder revealing her backless blouse. Her mouth
opened wide and she tried to get hold of her pallu and get it back on its
place but she found it in his hand so she didn't dare to turn around. He
was wide awake now and got up from his bed. He touched her with his eyes
from head to toe then ran his finger on her back, sending shivers down her
spine. She closed her eyes due to his touch. He gently turned her around
and dragged her closer by holding her from her waist. He then kissed on her
forehead.

"Tum mujhe itne ache moments chod kar jaane kaa keh rahi thi", he almost
whispered in her ear. His hot breath was touching her face making her loose
her senses.

She just smiled and opened her eyes but found him dangerously close. He
looked at her as if asking for some permission. She just blinked her eyes
signalling him to continue. He captured her lips
gently...

Rey got up from his sleep holding his head and breathing hard. "Damn what
did I saw. She...she was the same girl from the diary. Oh God how can I
dream that...with some other girl. I have a girlfriend."

His phone rang but he ended the call by seeing the caller's id. At this
time he wasn't in a state to talk to her. He proceeded for washroom but
again turned back because of the phone. He let it ring for a while in his
hands and finally picked up.

Rey: Hi Champa

Cham: Hi, utha li call! Kahan thay itni dair se.

Rey: Woh, main so raha tha.

Cham: Acha 2 din pehle tou mujhe keh rahe thay k tumhe neend nahi aati
aajkal sahi se.

Rey: Nahi aaj raat buhut achi neend aayi mujhe. (He said smiling
remembering the diary and the dream)

Cham: Whatever! I just called to let you know that we have got an interview
together on 'D' TV so don't be late.

Rey: Yeah I won't be late.

Cham: Bye!

Rey: Bye Champ!

He got inside the washroom and stood under the shower. Cold water was
running through, giving him relaxation but the thought of last night's
dream and the words on that diary were not leaving his mind. He still tried
to shake away his thoughts.

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"Mom...Maa...Mummy", Kriya shouted.

Kriya's Mom: Kya hua beta, kyun chilla rahi ho?

Kri: Mom meri diary nahi mil rahi. Har jagah check kiya.

Kri's Mom: Arey beta tumne Alisha se poocha..kal uske saath gayi thi naa
bazaar tou uske paas reh gayi hogi.

Kri: Oh yaa...Maa you are the best. (She pulled her cheeks)

Kri's mom: Acha acha ab ziada maska naa lagao.. Aur dinign room mei aajao
lunch k liye.

Kri: Okay Maa jee...

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Good Afternoon my dear viewers! I'm Sneha here with your favourite show
'Spices of Life'. Today I have a personality here whom people get crazy
for. He doens't need an inroduction because his name explains it all. So
without any delay I would like to say welcome Mr Reyaansh Singhania!

Rey: Hello and Thank you so much for having me on your show.

Sneha: It's our pleasure and dear viewers not to forget that we have
Reyaansh's very dear Girlfriend,The Beautiful Champa Arora with us today as
well.

Champa who was fuming from the time host was only concentrating on Rey but
now she smiled.

Cham: Hehehe Thanks for the lovely intro dear.

Sneha: Uh yeah...So Reyaansh please tell us how's your life going? What are
you doing now-a-days?

Rey: My Life is going good. I have got a contract for a hollywood dancing
film so I'm just looking forward for working hard to get some quality work
for my fans.

Sneha: Wow, that's impressive! So Champa would you please like to tell us
that what are you doing these days?

Cham: Ummm I'm very busy these days. I have got a fashion week coming up
and my brand will launch its summer collection.

Sneha: Nice! So Reyaansh and Champa, your relationship is counted as a
perfect relationship not only in India but in other countries as well so
please tell our viewers something about your lovely relationship.

Cham: Yeah yaa of course our relationship is more than a perfect one and we
are deciding about our marriage which will take place after Rey's film.

Sneha: Really?

Rey: No, not really Champa we are not deciding anything like that. Are we?
(Shocked and Confused)

Cham: Come on Baby! Our fans are watching thsis how, why hide anything from
them?

Rey: They should know the truth Champ...We don't have any plans for
marriage yet.

Sneha: Woah Woah wait a sec. So you guys don't have any marriage plans or
you do.

Champ: We totally do!

Rey: Champa why are you saying something that we never even disscussed.

Cham: Mr Reyaansh, you will pay for this. Making my drama on a live TV. Oh
my God! How can you do this to me? (Faking Crying)

Rey: Oh God...Go and get a life Champa. You are the one who's creating the
mess on a live TV.

Sneha: Dear Viewers, we will get back to you after a short commercial break.

Champa walked out of the studio stomping her feet hard and Rey gave an
appologetic look to Sneha and the cameramen.

Sneha: Rey, do you wanna go to the change room and have a bit of time for
yourself.

Rey: Yes actually I need it. Thanks a lot! But the show?

Sneha: Oh don't worry we'll manage.

Rey gave a weak smile to Sneha and walked towards the changing room. He
took off his jacket and threw it on a chair. How could this girl make a
mess of his life? Since the time she came in his life, she just needed
fame, money and attention. May be that was the only reason, she came in
relationship with him but he never realised. He kept giving her all the
love and care but where is he standing now? He banged his fist on the wall
in front of him. It did hurt but not more than his heart was hurting.

"Oh, I thought that coming in a realtionship with you after I lost everyone
would bring a freshness in my life. I was tired because of all the fake
action in my life. I needed affection! I thought...Oh gosh what have I
done!"

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Kriya sat on her bed with a crying face. She searched every nook and corner
of the house, checked with Alisha but didn't find her diary. She really
needed it at that time. All of a sudden, her eyes fell on a random, blank
piece of paper on her side table. She picked it up and grabbed her pen.

"Magic is in the words and not that diary, right!"

Kriya always thought that her diary brought luck to her. She kept it with
her all the time. She was used to write everything in that diary but today
when she saw a random piece of paper, she realised that its her words that
matter and not the type of paper she writes them on.

She wrote a heading, "How sweet will it to be Loved by U"

Yes, that was her next series of diary entries. Since her childhood, she
used to write a diary entry everyday on the thing that used to be important
in her life in those days or some issue that used to bug her. She put them
in series of entries and the thing that was on her mind these days was that
if someday he fells in love with her, how sweet it would be?

She continued her diary entry with a huge smile on her face.

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Rey got out of the studio and sat in his car. He was out of control and was
driving madly. He didn't know what to do. He was driving in a very fast
speed and stopped his car with a halt on a red signal. As he stopped his
eyes fell on the pink coloured diary on his passenger seat. His heart felt
a bit relieved and he grabbed the diary. He saw the address on the page
with the details and put that address in his mobile's navigation system. He
drove off according to that address and stopped in front of a small but
beautiful house. He went to the main door with the diary in his hand. He
knocked and waited patiently.

"I don't know why I'm here but I know that I will not regret it."

A middle aged lady opened the door and stood there with a confused
expression.

Rey: Hi

Lady: H..ello

Rey: I'm sorry to disturb you but...

Lady: But??

Rey: I'm Reyaansh

Lady: Kriya k room wala...

Rey: What??

Lady: Aap Reyaansh Singhania ho? Woh Kriya k room k poster wala? Woh Kriya
jis ki fan hai.

Rey: Ummm jee shaed main wohi wala Reyaansh hoon.

Lady: Arey aap yahan kese? Please andar aaiyee naa! Main Kriya ki Mom hoon,
Smriti Ghai.

Rey: Oh okay Aunty main bus ye diary...

Smriti: Aap please bethain naa main Kriya ko bulati hoon.

Kriya desecended down the stairs and was shocked to see the person in her
living room.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
luvd d update...
luvng kriyaansh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
wonderful update...

just loved it...

beautifully written..

waiting for the next part ..

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