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I promise ki kal tak main unres karungi... i don't want to write a comment know because it's the middle of the night and I'm sleepy and I know the comment will be half-hearted and bakwas. So please be patient and i'll write it very very soon 😃
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Sooo sorry for the delay again Moony.. I was supposed to unres yesterday par time hi nahi mila.. anyways here's my review for this VIDARTH-PACKED chapter!
Originally posted by: Moony87
Now Finally Chapter 6... This is dedicated toRae (sweetbutbroken) 😳😳😳 and to all the Vidarth lovers out here who follow this FF. Hope this one is worth the hype I created.. 😆
Thanks so much for the dedication... this was by far my favourite chapter in the FF so i'm really glad to have it dedicated to me 😆 Also, i actually wrote a review for the whole chapter but then i clicked back by accident and it all got deleted.. so i'm going to try and write it again to the best of my ability but I doubt it will be as good.
CHANT MY NAME - I love the name of the chapter... title itself built up so much excitement (and also sent my mind straight to the gutter)
The more I read about Maya the more I start to like her.. seriously she is to coolest dean ever, so engrossed in Vidarth's love life... and her teasing is one of the best aspects of the story.
"And they are official." awww that's so cute. I'm not "awwing" at the fact that Vidarth are together (I fangirled over that plenty) but i'm "Awwing" at the fact that Maya is getting so much pleasure out of seeing them together.. Still not sure why she is so interested in their love story though, but that's a minor point, the fact is that in a way she's been playing Cupid for them so I automatically like her 😛
Hehe the Juniors... I'm starting to like them a lot also. They're like little versions of Randhir and Jiggy, constantly teasing Vidarth.
"Yeh Spidy kon hai?" another thing I love about your FF... that's there is constant continuity. A lot of the time people throw in small scenes here and there, but then leave it at that. But you've used the Spidy thing, and continued to build it up.
"Tum log Parth ko Spidy bulaate ho" 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 that was one hilarious scene with Parth and the juniors... man cuteness overload. And Vidushi's blush... aww I can't get over how cute it is that she blushes whenever Parth is mentioned. She pretends to be this strong and powerful woman (she is of course) but a small comment like this can reduce her to a bashful and blushing girl.
"Ab agar tumne fir se parth ko Chidhaaya to" and the strong and powerful Vidushi is back again, getting all protective of Parth. Seriously this girl is the perfect girlfriend. She went from blushing straight into defense mode in a second, just to protect her Parth from further teasing.
"To main tumhaare room mein 2000 pataako ki ladi fod doongi" WOW kya threat hai boss!! Seriously Vidushi's should be given a new title... Vidushi Kumar, master of threats. 😆
"Green Goblin..." Maya suppressed her laughter standing behind the canteen door and scribbling on her notepad." Ok i'll be very honest here... the first thought that came to my mind was "wow that's super creepy." I mean i know Maya is interested in Vidarth's love story but seriously, keeping a track of her without Vidushi knowing... that's a little wierd na,
And then Vardhan comes in and I'm like "Abe yeh kya ho raha hai?" You name should really be changed to Chandu... master of mystery, because not only was i shocked at Vardhan's entrance, I was beyond confused. Still their initial interaction was kinda cute, especially when Vardhan calls her out from hiding behind the door and spying.
"Stop chanting my name." I'm not sure if you did that deliberately because of the title... but if you did then that's very clever of you... and if you didn't then it's very clever of me to notice the similarity 😆
Once again i was confused as to why Maya and Vardhan are suddenly a major part of this chapter (i guess I assumed it was only Vidarth) but when Vardhan opens up the book Maya was scribbling in... I was gushing and laughing at the exact same time 😛 Kaisi professor hai yaar, she's keeping track of how many times Parth and Vidushi have blushed... that's beyond cute! It was a little hard to picture though, considering how Maya is really like on the show.
I've never really been a big fan of Maya and Vardhan, actually I've never really been a fan at all.. but after reading their interaction here i think i might just start to become one.
"Jealous because my girl is ahead of your boy by 2 blushes" awww Maya is so cute when she acts childish like this. Hehe now they will turn this into a competition and slowly they will also fall for each other. I'm calling it now only.
"Smirking when you see a CCTV footage of your students kissing" ok what kind of professors are they.. they're focused more on the love lives of their children rather than actually teaching them 😛 and what is this about CCTV footage and all?? WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN? Did it even really happen on the show because i don't remember it (but that doesn't say much because I hardly watch anything other than Vidarth)??
Maya and Vardhan's little fight was nice comedic relief... especially since things start to get pretty heated up from here onwards. I hope they continue to be a part of this FF.
"Parth ki shakal... Baje hain na poore 12" 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 I will never get enough of these boys and their constant teasing... it's a wonder how you come up with new lines for them each time. And I've always loved bromance more than girl friendships, it's just more entertaining. I like how right now it's sort of a roommate thing, but hopefully YoYo and Sahil will also join in the teasing.
Aww Parth sulking is so adorable ekdum baccha ki taraf hai vo... maybe it's just the effect that Vidushi has on him 😆 And then he automatically brightens up after getting Vidushi's text, sooo cute!
"12 baj ke 1 min ho gaya" 🤣 🤣 🤣 Jiggy and Randhir look for any excuse to start teasing parth don't they... but i think Parth secretly likes all the teasing they do, that's why he never says anything 😉
Vidushi is getting more and more cute... she took so much effort to make things perfect for Parth. Not sure what she did exactly as you didn't say, but I'm sure it was beautiful.
"Coz you remind me of that night in the store room. Sweet, cute, adorable and tempting all in one go." OK parth needs to stop before i start comparing every single guy i meet to him... seriously, he's built up this picture of a perfect boyfriend that anyone i ever find in my life will never be able to match my expectations. I really hope this FF continues on forever and ever and ever.. until Parth and Vidushi have kids, and their kids have their own kids. Bas khatam hi na ho!
"Haan Hai" this time i can see what's happening from the start only... not like how Vidushi tricked Parth into saying he loves her 😆 One of these days I really need to try this method out for myself because it's super sneaky and super smart.
"Bloody assholes" 🤣 hahahaha i will never be able to stop laughing over that Spidy wala comment.
"WHAT THE HELL" the first thing i thought was "That's Vidushi's line" 😆 then i realised he was hanging upside down and immediately though "What the hell" 😆 And kaka's in on this whole plan 😛 But still, I didn't understand why exactly Vidushi was hanging him upside down... kaisa payback tha yeh 😕
Just when i thought you couldn't throw in any more surprises... then came the SPIDERMAN KISS!!! Damn i was so not prepared for that at all!! One minute I'm confused as to what exactly is going on, next minute I'm melting into a puddle at how romantic the kiss is.
And the kiss itself... Main describe bhi nahi kar sakti... in fact i don't even want to try because you described everything to PERFECTION... all the tracing with tongues, the angling of heads, and damn the sucking of lips. I was sure that I had died and gone to Vidarth heaven (for like the 50th time in this FF alone).
"Parth kissed her with all the passion and intensity she invoked in him" and in the middle of all this heated passion, you threw in such a sweet and beautiful line..
"That was just so little" MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY PARTH... my thoughts exactly. As usual, I thought that it got over way too quickly for my liking (but don't take it the wrong way, it's just me being greedy for more Vidarth).
"Things go slightly out of control every time we kiss" slightly??? understatement of the year!! "I have a solution to this" yeah my mind went straight back to the gutter here... and the first think i thought was "SHOWER ROMANCE" you built it up soo much and i'm already half way through the chapter but there has only been romance... no shower.
So the mood was romantic and Vidushi was acting flirty and next thing you know... SHE SLAPS HIS BUT?? say whaaattt? Only you Moony, only you can change the temperature from 100 degreess to like -10 in one second 😛 I would have seriously hated you for ruining the mood, but the slapping part was so damn hilarious that i couldn't do anything else but laugh 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 That was by far the funniest scene in this chapter 🤣 🤣 🤣 And she just kept on slapping him like he was a pinata 😆 and i just kept on laughing like i couldn't stop.
"108 baar Om Vidushay Namah ka jaap karne se you'll be free yourself" 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 hahaha what even? I never thought I would hear Vidushi say anything like that. And why 108 times?
"Chinese Dandiya" ... what? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 where did you come up with that comparison from? Seriously, I showed my brother this because he's learning Chinese (Mandarin) and even he couldn't control his laughter. 🤣🤣
"You get ready to Chant My Name" the capital letters signify that it was a reference to the title, so nice work there... also, my mind has spent so much time in the gutter that I don't think it will ever become clean again. After the whole slapping incident i had to prepare myself before reading on, just in case Parth didn't mean what i was thinking, and started slapping her instead 😆
Vidushi acts all innocent as if we all don't know that she completely understands what Parth is insinuating. "My jalebi jaisi seedhi girlfriend" 😆 i will never get sick of that line, no matter how many times i've heard it... and just thought I'd mention that i absolutely adore it when Parth calls her his girlfriend. It's a constant reminder that they are actually together.
"You WILL chant my name TONIGHT" ☺️ SHOWER ROMANCE!!!!! Wasn't it enough for you to build it up prior to posting this chapter... no you have to build it up here also 😛 (Love you Chandu) And Vids gets all flustered and runs off... cutie pie 😃
"... she kept her clothes on the hooks behind the door" OH.MY.GOSH. the shower romance part was so close I couldn't hold in my excitement... but there was one thing I didn't quite understand... She puts her clothes on the hooks, so is she wearing anything or not??
"The entire hostel had gone black" itna buildup kyun tha yaar... i was this close to exploding because i waited so long for this... also how cute of Parth to turn the off all the lights of the hotel... so romantic
"Someone hit her shoulder" HERO KI ENTRY... "I didn't know you were so eager" Trust me Parth no one is more eager than me at this moment... You're descriptions are like drugs to me... no matter how much you give, it's never enough. I'm scared that I'm getting addicted to this Chandu.
Do you heart that? It's the sound of my heart exploding because all this hotness is too much to handle (bahut bura tha, I know)... His hand around her waist, and her back hitting his chest... and damn that dreaded neck kiss which gets me every time. Then when he nibbles her earlobe... and FINALLY they kiss!! This feeling is ten times better than any feeling I've ever experienced, even better than waking up on Christmas morning to a tree full of presents (and trust me I get very very excited about that).
"Parth stumbled back with the force that Vidushi kissed him" Vidushi is taking charge and just when i though it couldn't get any more hot in here... you wrote this "She would give him all and would make him want more than all" somehow words have this way of getting to me more than a visual image ever could... and your words are absolute GOLD! Please do tell me where you get your inspiration for all this from because damn I want to read/watch whatever you are.
I really need to stop describing the kiss... i went through all these emotions twice already, once when I read it the first them, then once when i wrote the review that got deleted... and now again.. It's getting way too much for me to handle.
He turns the shower on and then she grasps his shirt... ☺️ and the kiss, oh man the kiss the kiss is indescribable. Kiss isn't even the word for it anymore because it's so much more beautiful and meaningful than a simple kiss.
When they break apart and Parth suddenly feels back for ambushing her like that, but on the contrary Vids feels bad for attacking.. that's one of the cutest scenes in this entire FF because they're both concerned with pleasing the other that they fail to realise they both want the same thing.
But thankfully she pulls him back and once again they kiss so intensely and so passionately. And Parth PUSHES HER AGAINST THE WALL... this is like all my Vidarth fantasies put together in one scene. ☺️ He's back to kissing her name and I'm back to blushing like crazy.
Then he shocks me by asking her to come on a date with him (FINALLY) and my heart rate increases rapidly when she pulls his hair (I'm not sadistic i swear) and pulls him back to her. the ADAM'S APPLE PART!!!! I think now even I'm developing a fascination with adam's apples because every time i meet a boy now that's the first place I look 😆 (thanks for that Chandu)
"Resting his palms on the wall" and shes trapped between him.. the amount of times this has happened on the show, and every single time i've wished for something like this to happen.. I think Vidarth just have a thing for walls because all Parth seems to do is push her against them.
"I formed a Tag Team with Watchman Kaka" God bless watchman kaka's soul 😆
THIS CHAPTER WAS MUCH MORE AMAZING THAN I IMAGINED CHANDU!!
Seriously, everything was so perfect there is no way you could have made it any better (longer maybe, but it's perfect the way it is)... Thanks for dedicating such beautiful and hot chapter to me. Now i'm desperately waiting for the next update toh jaldi karna ok.
Love you,
- Rae
Edited by sweetbutbroken - 10 years ago
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