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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! This was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. ! It was so damn funny yaar!
The way parth is making things right and impressive for the 'perfect' date is awesome! The way he wants to confess it on their official perfect date is lovely!
And OMG! This maya is really a great dean yaar! The way she is pulling their legs, and when she gave a 3-2 score for blushing to vidushi, I was like :O ! I loved Maya's easy-going, fun nature! She is a perfect dean for a college! :p *smiling sheepishly*
And vardhan! <3
I also loved the comic factor you added in the situation of parth carrying her and snapping on her butt! :p These cute funny things are a big hit!
Loved this chapter! The ending was perfect!
Continue asap chand!
Sorry for being this late!
Keep writing, thanks for pm'ing and scrapping!
Lots of love and kisses,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
sry firse moi late😭
it was hiliarious
how do u write so awesome chp yaar
romantic n funny both
I especially loved maya she is just awesome the way she teases them
'm the official blush refree'🤣
n then her convo with vd😉
jiggy n rd wer too good 'spiderman spiderman'
remebering this I was laughing in the middle of lec n every1 was looking at me lik hv u lost it
unhe kya pata ur ff has made me mad
n vids this gal aakhir parth se bulava he liya😆
their date was so cute
loved it
update asap


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovearohi

sry firse moi late😭
it was hiliarious
how do u write so awesome chp yaar
romantic n funny both
I especially loved maya she is just awesome the way she teases them
'm the official blush refree'🤣
n then her convo with vd😉
jiggy n rd wer too good 'spiderman spiderman'
remebering this I was laughing in the middle of lec n every1 was looking at me lik hv u lost it
unhe kya pata ur ff has made me mad
n vids this gal aakhir parth se bulava he liya😆
their date was so cute
loved it
update asap


Buahahahah.. Really???.. Then this is going to be a torturous FF for you in future while in class coz Varya are gonna join this ride soon.. 🤣🤣🤣

Heheh yep Vardhan ka saara focus Sandhir par rehta hai isliye Maya ko maine Vidarth ke liye recruit kar liya. 🤣🤣

Heheh.. Yep.. Uff.. In SH they show everyone's reactions as so civil about kiss and all.. LOL .. in college frenz rip you off with their teasing.. 🤣🤣🤣.. So Jiggy and Randhir ka desi spiderman par dance karna banta hai. 🤣🤣

Yo.. Vidushi ki tikdambaazi 😆..

Love you for such a wonderful comment. Will update ASAP.. LOL .. Class mein read karna haaan.. 🤣🤣 ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! This was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. ! It was so damn funny yaar!
The way parth is making things right and impressive for the 'perfect' date is awesome! The way he wants to confess it on their official perfect date is lovely!
And OMG! This maya is really a great dean yaar! The way she is pulling their legs, and when she gave a 3-2 score for blushing to vidushi, I was like :O ! I loved Maya's easy-going, fun nature! She is a perfect dean for a college! :p *smiling sheepishly*
And vardhan! <3
I also loved the comic factor you added in the situation of parth carrying her and snapping on her butt! :p These cute funny things are a big hit!
Loved this chapter! The ending was perfect!
Continue asap chand!
Sorry for being this late!
Keep writing, thanks for pm'ing and scrapping!
Lots of love and kisses,
Karishma. :* <3


Karishmaaa... I am so happy that you are liking this FF..

Heheh.. Spidy on the roll. 😆

Yep, MAYA aur bhi dhamaal karegi with the rocking Vidarth.. 🤣🤣🤣

LOL Vardhan ki aur band bajegi.. 🤣🤣🤣.. Like student like professor.. Dono ladkion ke maare.. 🤣

Thankss.. 😆.. Will update ASAP.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Moony dii..🤗
What an update!!😃 It was soo cuutee.
Randhir-Jiggy were too funny. Spiderman song and nagin dance...!!🤣
But the show stealer or the chapter stealer has to be Maya. Refereeing their blush game.!!! I'm sure its an entertaining job.😆
Aww..Vidu tricked him o say that he love her..!! That was a smart move.
And watch man." Beta tumhaari girl friend hai ye..??" "Haan hai"😆
I really loved the chapter. <3
Now just waiting for 6th chapter. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just scrolling down, it looks like a long update 😃 can't wait to read

"Vidushi walked the corridors rubbing her butt vigorously." 🤣 🤣 🤣 i still can't get over how he literally picked her up... he said he would pick her up and bring her back to FITE, but he actually PICKED her up 🤣 🤣 sorry but it's just so random and funny

"Abhi tak toh main Parth ke saath date par bhi nahi gayee" trust Vidushi, the very first thing she thinks off is that she hasn't gone on a date with parth, not that she's barely achieved anything yet, or that she still has a whole life ahead of her... bas Parth ke saath date par nahi gayi 😆

"Hmm I am impressed... A man of his words, Parth Kashyp" woah there Dean, someone's complimenting Parth a little too much... would so love for Vidushi to suddenly get jealous.

"are you both playing who blushes more game?" i don't really like Maya too much on the show but I'm loving her in your FF... she's like a catalyst for Vidarth's relationship at the moment... not to mention the fact that she's absolutely hilarious.

"How many times Mam?"
🤣 Vids needs to get a filter for her mouth because seriously she's just blurting out anything she's thinking... and it's damn adorable. I can just imagine Maya maam sitting there with a knowing smirk on her face. Both Parth and Vidushi are making it so obvious 😆

"So that, Parth doesn't scream in the corridors horrified at your return timings." OK in all seriousness, why can't the Maya in the show be more like your portrayal of her. She's so witty and it's almost like she support Vidarth as a couple?!?

"The score is 3 - 2. You are officially leading with full 1 blush." 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 that did not just happen... 🤣🤣... MAYA SAID THAT? 🤣🤣 Aww poor vids must be so embarrassed right now.

"Kya boloongaa.. Kahaan gaya tha.." abbe gadhe bol ki tu Vidushi ke saath tha... why is he so scared of telling everybody 😔 jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya... Moony mujhe lagta hai ki tujhe dekh ke main bhi thodi filmy hone lagi hoon 😆

"OI SPIDERMAN.. SPIDERMAN.. TUNE CHURAAYAAA MERE DIL KA CHAINNN"🤣 yeh kaunsa gaana hai... did you write that yourself? I even sang it out loud to myself to the tune of Spiderman 😆

"This time with pelvic dance movements..
" oh golly gosh that is one sight that i can never unimagine no matter how hard i try 😛 are they drunk or something? because I have NEVER seen, or even considered, them acting like that... especially Randhir 😲

"Unhi dono se gala dabaa doonga tera.." Parth hissed." hahah dosti ho toh aisi yaar... forget dost ke liye mar jaayenge and all that... Parth dosti mein toh dosto ko mar dega... (i suck at making jokes ok... its genetic)

"Bloody JUNIORSSS.. Parth cussed." OH MY GOSH... NOW I UNDERSTAND... they were referring to the incident with the juniors and Vidarth earlier on.. oh my gosh i'm such an idiot. This whole time i was thinking to myself, what the hell happened to Randhir and Jiggy, why are they acting like this.. But now I get all the teasing and singing 😆

"Maine abhi tak Vids ko date ke liye bhi nahi poochha hai. Kal poochhoonga." Good, so next time someone nearly gives her a heart attack it won't matter because she'll have gone on her date with you 😆

"Spidy called us" Juniors are my new favourite people... they're like Maya except more naughty and teasing..

"Aur nahi to kya.. Kyun?.. Umm.. Do you love me?" confident Vidushi is back... i seriously love her. She's the perfect mixture of daring and cheeky, but at the same time shy and sensitive.

"Kyunki MAIN DREAM TEAM KA CAPTAIN HOON" Parth kya pagal ho gaya hai... Yeh kaisa reason hai. Go on a date with me because I'm the Dream Team Captain 😆 Moony you seriously come up with the most random lines sometimes, but they still end up being funny. How do you do it yaar?

Maya Maam comes in at just the perfect time... i really wanted to see where exactly that converstation was going with Parth and Vidushi, and how exactly he planned to dig himself out of the grave he just dug himself into with that Captain walla comment 🤣

"And yes, Mr. Kashyap you can PICK her up."
hahaha Oh God not again... Is he planning on "picking" her up like that every single time.. I like the little touch of Maya and Vardhan you added in there.

Aww damn, we didn't get to see their makeshift date. I would have so loved to see Parth surprising Vidushi was a date as they walked back to the hostel, and then feeding her also

"Parth stopped dead behind her as his heart sank." awww poor Parth really thinks that his date wasn't good enough for her. See if this was Parth from the show then he would have turned around and said something about how she's a gold digger... but this Parth's just so adorable that his heart sank at the thought that he wasn't good enough.

"Tum part time coolie the kya pehle?" 🤣🤣🤣 trust Vidushi to say something so random during such a romantic moment... THEY KISSED... Moony the kiss was at such a perfect time, especially the way he pulled his sleeves up and went after her but then surprised her by kissing her... Just wish you had described the kiss a little more, like you usually do.

WAIT... I spoke too soon before because I didn't read on. I take back everything I said, the kiss is amazing (expect it's so short). The way she wraps her legs around him ☺️ but then it gets better because she strokes his adam's apple and he calls her out on it. And when Parth says "You fascinate me" oh gosh it's all just so romantic.

But this one line was the most perfect thing ever, "Every time she confessed something, he would just lose it. The control, the Sense, the rational thinking... Every thing." LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!

And the kiss is still going... who said anything about short, I'm seriously eating my words now. He's sucking her lower lip ☺️ damn when you said hot kiss you really meant HOT KISS.

Baby doll se yaad aaya ki Nisha is actually an amazing dancer. I really liked her baby doll performance, but man Kamli was the show stopper...

Hahah Vidarth are so CUTE!!! Singing that song, and reversing the roles so Parth is female and Vids is male. It's so childish but so adorable at the same time.

"Gender change kar sakte hain to ending bhi change kar sakte hain" hahaha kuch bhi 😆

Awww Vidushi's so concerned for Parth... so concerned that she's acting really wierd and asking the same questions over and over 😕 not sure what's going on... AWWW THAT'S PURE GENIUS RIGHT THERE. She tricked Parth into saying that he loves her and even I didn't realise what was going on before it happened 😛

That last part with the watchman 😆 and Parth literally sulks away. He was going to say it anyways wasn't he? he just wanted to wait for a better date. Toh sulk kyun kar raha hai

😛

Hey Chandu guess what? Next chapter is... CHAPTER SIX!! I can't wait any longer. I loved this chapter a lot, but you better make sure there is a lot, and i mean a LOT, of Vidarth romance in chapter 6. And that dreaded shower scene which i have been thinking about ever since you mentioned it to me... well I'm waiting desperately for it. Love this update a lot, especially the kiss 😉 Good luck writing the next chapter.

- Rae


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetbutbroken

Just scrolling down, it looks like a long update 😃 can't wait to read

"Vidushi walked the corridors rubbing her butt vigorously." 🤣 🤣 🤣 i still can't get over how he literally picked her up... he said he would pick her up and bring her back to FITE, but he actually PICKED her up 🤣 🤣 sorry but it's just so random and funny

"Abhi tak toh main Parth ke saath date par bhi nahi gayee" trust Vidushi, the very first thing she thinks off is that she hasn't gone on a date with parth, not that she's barely achieved anything yet, or that she still has a whole life ahead of her... bas Parth ke saath date par nahi gayi 😆

"Hmm I am impressed... A man of his words, Parth Kashyp" woah there Dean, someone's complimenting Parth a little too much... would so love for Vidushi to suddenly get jealous.

"are you both playing who blushes more game?" i don't really like Maya too much on the show but I'm loving her in your FF... she's like a catalyst for Vidarth's relationship at the moment... not to mention the fact that she's absolutely hilarious.

"How many times Mam?"
🤣 Vids needs to get a filter for her mouth because seriously she's just blurting out anything she's thinking... and it's damn adorable. I can just imagine Maya maam sitting there with a knowing smirk on her face. Both Parth and Vidushi are making it so obvious 😆

"So that, Parth doesn't scream in the corridors horrified at your return timings." OK in all seriousness, why can't the Maya in the show be more like your portrayal of her. She's so witty and it's almost like she support Vidarth as a couple?!?

"The score is 3 - 2. You are officially leading with full 1 blush." 🤣 that did not just happen... 🤣🤣... MAYA SAID THAT? 🤣🤣 Aww poor vids must be so embarrassed right now.

"Kya boloongaa.. Kahaan gaya tha.." abbe gadhe bol ki tu Vidushi ke saath tha... why is he so scared of telling everybody 😔 jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya... Moony mujhe lagta hai ki tujhe dekh ke main bhi thodi filmy hone lagi hoon 😆

"OI SPIDERMAN.. SPIDERMAN.. TUNE CHURAAYAAA MERE DIL KA CHAINNN"🤣 yeh kaunsa gaana hai... did you write that yourself? I even sang it out loud to myself to the tune of Spiderman 😆

"This time with pelvic dance movements..
" oh golly gosh that is one sight that i can never unimagine no matter how hard i try 😛 are they drunk or something? because I have NEVER seen, or even considered, them acting like that... especially Randhir 😲

"Unhi dono se gala dabaa doonga tera.." Parth hissed." hahah dosti ho toh aisi yaar... forget dost ke liye mar jaayenge and all that... Parth dosti mein toh dosto ko mar dega... (i suck at making jokes ok... its genetic)

"Bloody JUNIORSSS.. Parth cussed." OH MY GOSH... NOW I UNDERSTAND... they were referring to the incident with the juniors and Vidarth earlier on.. oh my gosh i'm such an idiot. This whole time i was thinking to myself, what the hell happened to Randhir and Jiggy, why are they acting like this.. But now I get all the teasing and singing 😆

"Maine abhi tak Vids ko date ke liye bhi nahi poochha hai. Kal poochhoonga." Good, so next time someone nearly gives her a heart attack it won't matter because she'll have gone on her date with you 😆

"Spidy called us" Juniors are my new favourite people... they're like Maya except more naughty and teasing..

"Aur nahi to kya.. Kyun?.. Umm.. Do you love me?" confident Vidushi is back... i seriously love her. She's the perfect mixture of daring and cheeky, but at the same time shy and sensitive.

"Kyunki MAIN DREAM TEAM KA CAPTAIN HOON" Parth kya pagal ho gaya hai... Yeh kaisa reason hai. Go on a date with me because I'm the Dream Team Captain 😆 Moony you seriously come up with the most random lines sometimes, but they still end up being funny. How do you do it yaar?

Maya Maam comes in at just the perfect time... i really wanted to see where exactly that converstation was going with Parth and Vidushi, and how exactly he planned to dig himself out of the grave he just dug himself into with that Captain walla comment 🤣

"And yes, Mr. Kashyap you can PICK her up."
hahaha Oh God not again... Is he planning on "picking" her up like that every single time.. I like the little touch of Maya and Vardhan you added in there.

Aww damn, we didn't get to see their makeshift date. I would have so loved to see Parth surprising Vidushi was a date as they walked back to the hostel, and then feeding her also

"Parth stopped dead behind her as his heart sank." awww poor Parth really thinks that his date wasn't good enough for her. See if this was Parth from the show then he would have turned around and said something about how she's a gold digger... but this Parth's just so adorable that his heart sank at the thought that he wasn't good enough.

"Tum part time coolie the kya pehle?" 🤣🤣🤣 trust Vidushi to say something so random during such a romantic moment... THEY KISSED... Moony the kiss was at such a perfect time, especially the way he pulled his sleeves up and went after her but then surprised her by kissing her... Just wish you had described the kiss a little more, like you usually do.

WAIT... I spoke too soon before because I didn't read on. I take back everything I said, the kiss is amazing (expect it's so short). The way she wraps her legs around him ☺️ but then it gets better because she strokes his adam's apple and he calls her out on it. And when Parth says "You fascinate me" oh gosh it's all just so romantic.

But this one line was the most perfect thing ever, "Every time she confessed something, he would just lose it. The control, the Sense, the rational thinking... Every thing." LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!

And the kiss is still going... who said anything about short, I'm seriously eating my words now. He's sucking her lower lip ☺️ damn when you said hot kiss you really meant HOT KISS.

Baby doll se yaad aaya ki Nisha is actually an amazing dancer. I really liked her baby doll performance, but man Kamli was the show stopper...

Hahah Vidarth are so CUTE!!! Singing that song, and reversing the roles so Parth is female and Vids is male. It's so childish but so adorable at the same time.

"Gender change kar sakte hain to ending bhi change kar sakte hain" hahaha kuch bhi 😆

Awww Vidushi's so concerned for Parth... so concerned that she's acting really wierd and asking the same questions over and over 😕 not sure what's going on... AWWW THAT'S PURE GENIUS RIGHT THERE. She tricked Parth into saying that he loves her and even I didn't realise what was going on before it happened 😛

That last part with the watchman 😆 and Parth literally sulks away. He was going to say it anyways wasn't he? he just wanted to wait for a better date. Toh sulk kyun kar raha hai

😛

Hey Chandu guess what? Next chapter is... CHAPTER SIX!! I can't wait any longer. I loved this chapter a lot, but you better make sure there is a lot, and i mean a LOT, of Vidarth romance in chapter 6. And that dreaded shower scene which i have been thinking about ever since you mentioned it to me... well I'm waiting desperately for it. Love this update a lot, especially the kiss 😉 Good luck writing the next chapter.

- Rae


Hey Rae.. Heheh I am so damn relieved that the kiss was worth it.. 😆
Heheh yep Maya will make you laugh more and more in the coming chapters.. 😃😃😃
Acchi waali date aani baaki hai.. This was the adjusted one you know.. 😃
Yo Maya se bachna mushkil hi nahi naamumkin hai.. 🤣
Oh next chapter.. I'll make it a furnace for you.. 🤣 🤣 🤣 ..
Oh and yeah.. Another surprise for you in the next chapter.. I'll blow you off with that... 🤣 🤣 .. Hehe yeah.. Shower romance.. Mazaa aayenga likhne mein hi.. 🤣 🤣
Edited by Moony87 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Moony dii..🤗
What an update!!😃 It was soo cuutee.
Randhir-Jiggy were too funny. Spiderman song and nagin dance...!!🤣
But the show stealer or the chapter stealer has to be Maya. Refereeing their blush game.!!! I'm sure its an entertaining job.😆
Aww..Vidu tricked him o say that he love her..!! That was a smart move.
And watch man." Beta tumhaari girl friend hai ye..??" "Haan hai"😆
I really loved the chapter. <3
Now just waiting for 6th chapter. 😛


Aimyy.. 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Heheh Perfect combination na... Makdi aur naagin 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Yeah Maya will rock and shock Vardhan also in the future parts.. 🤣🤣🤣

Yo my SMARTY Vidu.. 🤣🤣🤣

LOL watchman ki lottery lag gayee.. full show par bumper entertainment.. 🤣🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

THAT... WAS...DAMN...FUNNY...🤣🤣🤣,I LAUGHED A 😆😆LOT,

HMM,WELL I THINK UR WORKS ARE HARMFUL TO MY HEALTH...😆
IF ANY ONE CATCH ME IN THE WAY I LAUGH, READING UR WORKS ON TAB..,I AM DAMN SURE THAT I WILL END UP IN FRONT OF PSYCHIATRIC FOR SURE🤣

GOOD JOB👍🏼DIDI...👏

JIYA😛


Jiyaaa.. 🤗🤗🤗🤗

LOL Thanks for liking it.. 🤗

LOL Fikar not.. Saath mein Psychiatrist ke paas jaayenge..

You for laughing while reading and ME for laughing while writing. 🤣🤣

Thanks yaar.. will update ASAP
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Now Finally Chapter 6... This is dedicated to Rae (sweetbutbroken) 😳😳😳 and to all the Vidarth lovers out here who follow this FF. Hope this one is worth the hype I created.. 😆
CHAPTER 6

CHANT MY NAME
"May I come in, Mam?" Vidushi said with excitement and broad grin.
"Ofcourse Vidushi. Hmm.. So much happy and excited to see me." Maya smirked. Sensing that she had been smiling more than usual, Vidushi straightened her face.
"N.. No mam. Nothing like that." Vidushi tried to cover up.
"So, you are NOT happy to see me. Is that what you mean Vidushi?" Maya raised her left eyebrow and took a dig.
"No mam.. Definitely not. I mean.. I mean.. Mam... I am on time." Vidushi said being caught off guard.
"Hmm. Good Night Vidushi."
"Good night, Mam". She smiled.
"And they are official." Maya smirked to herself as Vidushi left the cabin.
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As Vidushi walked towards her hostel, she saw some of the juniors sitting in the canteen. Spidy called us, the words from the morning came to her mind. Walking up to them she commanded, "Ye Spidy kon hai?"
The students getting caught off guard, remained quiet throwing nervous glances at each other.
"I asked ye spidy kon hai?" she asked crossing her arms.
"Umm.. Spiderman" came a mumbled reply.
"What? Spiderman? How did Spiderman call.. Wait a minute, TUM LOG PARTH KO SPIDY BULAATE HO?" she demanded.
"Hum nahi wo hi keh rahe. Main kya spiderman hoon jo pipe chadta firoonga", the group laughed lightly.
Vidushi cleared her throat to suppress the blush that had again crept up. And then seeing the group laughing and giving a hi-five to each other, she roared, "SHUT UP. AB AGAR TUMNE FIR SE PARTH KO CHIDHAAYA TO.." she stopped thinking of the appropriate threat.
"To?" a guy nervously asked.
"To .. To main tumhaare room mein 2000 pataakho ki ladi fod doongi. GREEN GOBLIN ki tarah", she threatened with a smile.
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"Green Goblin..." Maya suppressed her laughter standing behind the canteen door and scribbling on her notepad.
"Maya"
"Huh".. She gasped holding the notepad close to her chest as Vardhan's voice freaked her out.
"What the hell Vardhan. What are you doing here?" she hissed.
"Technically, I should ask you this question. What are YOU doing here hiding behind the door.?"
Suddenly realizing what she was looking at, Maya sharply peeped into the canteen again.
"Look what you have done Vardhan. She is gone." Maya hissed.
"Ok.. we need to talk", Vardhan sighed.
"Exactly. WE need to talk. In My Cabin Vardhan." Maya ordered as she stomped off in anger.
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"Maya", Vardhan spoke as he saw her glaring at him.
"Stop chanting my name.. You.. You SNEAKY professor", she accused.
"What?... Sneaky.. I am Sneaky.. You are a sneaky DEAN", he shot back.
"Don't you dare, Suryavanshi"
"Oh I will. And we have a proof here." He said snatching the notepad kept on her table.
"That is mine. Give it back.", Maya roared.
"Exactly it's yours. And look what we got scribbled here...
Blush Meter.
Vidushi - 4 Parth - 2
Like really Maya. And I AM SNEAKY", he said bewildered.
"Yes. You are SNEAKY and JEALOUS", she said pointing her finger at him.
"JEALOUS..!!!", he said incredulously.
"Yes. Jealous because my girl is ahead of your boy by 2 blushes." She raised her chin with a proud smile.
Vardhan kept looking at her dumbfounded.
"Oh and yes, there is a difference between Keeping an Eye and SNEAKING. I keep an eye on them and YOU SNEAK", she said arrogantly.
"What?" he said exasperated.
"Yes, keeping an eye on someone is definitely different than smirking when you see a CCTV footage of your students kissing." She gave a saccharine smile.
"I.Was.Not.Smirking", he said aghast.
"Ha.. Point proven. You saw Sanyukta and Randhir kissing on your laptop. THAT IS SNEAKY"
"How would I know that they would out of the blue kiss during an argument?" he defended.
"Exactly. You need to know this Vardhan. Kids... Kids these days are HORMONAL", she shrugged.
Vardhan's jaw dropped at the word.
"Stop being melodramatic. That's why you need to Keep an EYE on them and not SNEAK on them with your CCTVs." She said coolly.
"So from now on, I'll check your laptop first and then you can ogle at her as much as you want. I won't let you sneak on MY kids." She said.
"Laptop is not HER.. IT is a laptop." He said gritting his teeth.
"Ha.. Point proven again. You OGLE at your laptop. I wonder Why Dell doesn't sue you for eve teasing and mental harassment?" She chuckled as Vardhan looked at his laptop totally gob smacked.
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"Randhir bhai... Time kya hua hai? Meri ghadi kharaab ho gayee" Jiggy asked.
"12 baj gaye hain. Poore 12" Randhir said without looking at his watch.
"Kaise pata aapko. Ghadi bhi nahi dekhi aapne to" Jiggy asked.
"Wo dekh.. Parth ki shakal.. Baje hain na poore 12" Randhir chuckled. Jiggy laughed out loud.
"Vidushiii.. Meri poori planning flop kar di. Us par har koi meri udaa ke chalaa jaata hai. Watchman bhi... Arrghhh" he sulked. His phone beeped and the text read,
"Morning 7:30 in the lab. Will wait for you. Vidushi" and he grinned broadly.
Looking at Parth grinning, Jiggy teased, "Randhir bhai, 12 baj ke 1 min ho gaya". Parth shook his head as his roommates were again back to laughing.
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"Good job Vidushi", Vidushi patted herself looking around the set up in the lab.
Settling herself on the last table in the lab, she waited for Parth.
"Hey", Parth's voice came as he walked into the lab. Vidushi waved at him with a broad grin.
"Umm.. Why are you sitting on the table Vidushi?" he said sheepishly as he stopped as soon as he entered the lab.
"Whyyy I cannot sit on the table Parth?" she said utterly confused.
Coz you remind me of that night in the store room. Sweet, cute, adorable and tempting all in one go. Shut up Parth. Parth scolded himself.
"Anyway, mujhe itni jaldi kyun bulaaaya tumne?" he inquired. Something was just not right, his mind said.
"Wo.. ummm... Your foot. Ab THIK HAI?" she said with a teasing smile.
"HAAN HAI", he said narrowing his eyes.
"Maya mam keh rahi thi ke tum blush karte ho? Kya ye SACH HAI?" She further teased.
"HAAN HAI", he said pointedly looking away.
"Mmm as quoted by juniors.. Spidy tumhaara naam hai?" she giggled
"HAAN HAI.. bloody assholes", he added.
"Maine suna, kal watchman kaka ne bhi tumhaari firki le li. Kya ye SACH HAI?" she asked suppressing her laughter.
"HAAN HAI", Parth said gritting his teeth.
"To.. umm. Tumko mujhse PYAAR HAI?" Vidushi roared with laughter.
"Vidushi.. You... ARRRGHHH.. WHAT THE HELL?" his voice roared in the lab as Parth now hung upside down in the middle of the lab.
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"Thank you KAKA. Ab aap jaaiye. Kisi ko batana nahi haan plz. Meri taraf se baad mein aapko TREAT" Vidushi laughed and waved at the watchman laughing through the window. The watchman moved away and Vidushi closed the door and the window.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS. TUM WATCHMAN KAKA KE SAATH TEAM BANAA RAHI HO. PUT ME DOWNNN"
"And I can't believe you again fell for my trick. Kam se kam rope ka loop to dekhna chaahiye tha. Duhhh.." Vidushi laughed standing in front of him.
"Vid..", his eyes snapped open as Vidushi kissed him full on the lips. Softly brushing his lower lip, she parted away.
"Vidushi.." he breathed surprised.
Holding his face, she whispered against his lips, "What's the Spiderman without the Spiderman kiss".
"We'll give a combined treat to watchman kaka", he smiled pulling her back in.
Vidushi inhaled sharply into the kiss. Emotions running high, they opened their mouths to get the most of each other. Holding her head with his hands, Parth kissed her with all the passion and intensity she invoked in him. Yeah, he should have noted the rope loop. But that's what she did to him. She made him forget everything. Tracing her lower lip with his tongue, he pulled her lips more into the kiss. He smiled as Vidushi angled her head and kissed him with equal urgency.
She sucked his lower lip as with every passing second, her want for him increased. Tightening her grip on his hair, she bit his upper lip hard one last time as she needed some air. Tearing apart she rested he forehead on his chin, breathing heavily. "That was just so little." Parth complained panting. Vidushi chuckled and sucked his chin. As Parth cupped her face again to kiss her, she turned away catching her breathe.
"I know... umm.. things go slightly out of control every time we kiss", Parth finally spoke with a loaded voice. With her back still towards him, Vidushi laughed and said, "Umm... I have a solution to this".
"Ahaan.. What?" Parth asked grinning broadly.
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"ARRRGHHH VIDUSHIII.. WHAT THE HELL", Parth screamed as Vidushi slapped his left butt really hard.
"That's for the first spanking you gave me", Vidushi howled with laughter.
"ARRGHHH..." Parth screeched again and Vidushi slapped his right butt harder.
"This is for the second spanking you gave me". Vidushi giggled.
"OUCHHH..." Parth howled again as Vidushi went with another one.
"Remember you had spanked me twice that night."
"ARRRGHHH.. NOW WHAT IS THIS ONE FOR?"
"Teen tigaada kaam bigaada. Shagun ka hai ye waala" Vidushi laughed hysterically with one last slap on his butt.
"What the HELL"
"That's my line."
"VIDUSHI .. PUT ME DOWN NOWWW"
"Yeah right. On second thoughts, Chant my name. 108 baar Om Vidushay Namah ka jaap karne se you'll be free yourself. Plus it'll keep your mind cool." She laughed again.
"Shut up. I do TAI-CHI for that", Parth hissed.
"A..Aaa.. Jhooth mat bolo.. That's Chinese Dandiya", she teased.
"HOW DARE YOU"
"See.. I told you... Take a deep breath. Aur bolo.. Om Vidushay Namah."
"Yeah right.. Vidushi Kumar. You get ready to Chant My Name." With that Parth pulled himself up and started opening the knot.
"What the Hell. K.. Kya matlab hai tumhaara?" Vidushi stammered.
"Ohoo... My jalebi jaisi seedhi girlfriend. Saare matlab pata hai tumhe. You WILL chant my name TONIGHT." He declared gritting his teeth.
"You Shameless"
"Sangat ka asar hai"
"PERVERT" she said horrified and ran out of the lab towards her hostel.
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It's 10 PM now. He was just joking. Waisi bhi no calls nothing. He was just scaring you. So chill. Vidushi cajoled himself and went towards the washroom. Aive hi daraa diya mujhe. Vidushi thought as she kept her clothes on the hooks behind the door.
"What the HELL. Ab ye light ko kya ho gaya", Vidushi whined as the lights suddenly went off. Coming out of the washroom, she looked around. The entire hostel had gone black.
"Ouchh", she hissed as someone hit her shoulder walking past her. She opened her mouth to speak but closed it as suddenly the lights went on again. Still searching for the person who hit her, she closed the door of washroom.
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"I didn't know you were so eager", she stood rooted on the spot as Parth's husky voice came from her behind. Her heart leapt into her throat, as it dawned on her. He is here. In the girls hostel. DAMN, in the washroom with ME.
Sneaking his hand around her waist, he pulled her back to him. She closed her eyes and a shaky breathe escaped her lips as her back hit his chest. Moving aside her hair, Parth dipped his head and kissed her right shoulder. Holding her waist tighter, he kissed the pulse of her neck deeply. "Parth" she whispered as he lightly nipped her earlobe. "Told you in the morning", he whispered. Vidushi turned sharply and kissed him passionately as her senses went overdrive. Parth stumbled back with the force that Vidushi kissed him. And that was the reason why every time things went out of control. She would confess, he would lose a bit of control. She would respond and things took control of him. She would give him all and would make him want more than all.
Grabbing her face, he entered her mouth and then another realm of emotions turned. She tasted of.. everything which you cannot describe, his mind told him defeated. Smiling at the thought, he searched for the shower knob. The little distraction from him made her grab his shirt and she bit his lower lip hard before pushing her tongue into his mouth. The past few days had been a dream for her. And their kiss was like an assurance that yes, he is finally with her. And the urgency which she felt was not the lust, it was the need. The constant need to hold him close and not let him go anywhere.
They broke apart, as Parth opened the knob and cold water hit their faces. Vidushi looked down panting heavily and Parth looked at her searching her face.
Probably I should leave. This was not a good idea.
What is wrong with you Vidushi? You always end up attacking him. With that thought, Vidushi looked up at him. And this was not helping. Him soaked in water, shower and his intense eyes. They did nothing but accelerated her already hyperactive heartbeat.
Grabbing the hem of his wet shirt, Vidushi pulled him back towards her. Dripping wet in water and the emotions for each other, Vidushi stepped over his feet and kissed him intensely. Screw the idea, Parth thought as he just couldn't get enough of her. Turning her around, he pushed her against the wall with water hitting his back. Tearing away from the kiss, he sucked the pulse of her neck. "Parth", she gasped again as Parth traced his lips on her wet neck finally taking her lips again.
Pulling his lower lip hard, Vidushi squeezed his hair in her fingers. Parth groaned as the water ran down from his locks to his back. With her, his every nerve got oversensitive.
"Come on a date with me", Parth managed to speak as she broke the kiss.
"We already had a date yesterday", she panted tracing his upper lip with her finger.
"That was an adjusted date. Come with me on a proper date." Parth looked at her stroking her cheeks.
Grabbing his hair, she pulled his head back. "Vids"... Parth moaned as Vidushi bit his Adam's apple hard and then kissed it deeply. Letting go of him, she looked down and gave an embarrassing smile. Resting his palms on the wall, Parth leaned towards her. "I take that as a Yes", he smiled kissing her lips softly.
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"Wait a min. Tum andar aaye kaise?" Vidushi suddenly asked him as he went near the door and took out his phone.
Turning around he said with a mischievous glint in his eyes, "Oh.. I formed a Tag Team with Watchman Kaka". Vidushi's jaw dropped and lights went off as Parth winked.


Hope its worth commenting.. Yennyhow.. COMMENT.. I am the FARZI Engineer of this WEEK.. 🤣
Edited by Moony87 - 10 years ago

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