Arjun-Draupadi Kalyug FF- Shubh Punah Milan-Part 35(2/11) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: smartfotografi

@Yagyaseni: Ji, I have recieved your PM, but I don't understand it. That its something about your writting update? I can found it.


Oh that one was about the update of an OS by love_chitra, darling!! My priya sauthan!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
juz went through the two updates now!

wowo!! awesome!!! and with angies pics its super se uper..

so in this one both understood who n wat they are!!! wowow!!! ab maza aayega!! waiting for all char to come to light!!

great tht u r connecting with SP 's Mb.. angie will find it easier to find pics n we readers get a visual treat of the chapter!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
I read part 1!
very intriguing style of writing!
It looks as if am watching some movie!!
very good dear!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

juz went through the two updates now!

wowo!! awesome!!! and with angies pics its super se uper..

so in this one both understood who n wat they are!!! wowow!!! ab maza aayega!! waiting for all char to come to light!!

great tht u r connecting with SP 's Mb.. angie will find it easier to find pics n we readers get a visual treat of the chapter!!

Thanks a lot, Di!!! Credit goes to Angie Di!!! Next update will be sort of Gita Gyaan!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

I read part 1!

very intriguing style of writing!
It looks as if am watching some movie!!
very good dear!! 😳

Thanks a lot, Gayathri!! For such lovely comments!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
I edited my comment on page 5 for part 2!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

edited..

good update!
loved their first meeting!! 😳
really interesting!!!
has Drau met Govind?
am waiting for their meeting too! 😃

That will be said only in the next update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
read part 3!
I like the way u swap between dwapar yug n kaliyg!!
this update remined me of Dyut sabha episode of SP MB!! 😳

really nice!
waiting for next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

read part 3!

I like the way u swap between dwapar yug n kaliyg!!
this update remined me of Dyut sabha episode of SP MB!! 😳

really nice!
waiting for next part!

Thanks a lot, daring!! Will update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4:
Arjun, Yagya and Subhadra were speechless about it. Their silence at the moment spoke heights with the eye locks that took place. Arjun was now completely clear about everything except the Gita Upaadesh Part while Yagya and Subhadra needed to know more to be completely aware of what was happening. They were rooted to the spot when Duryodhan and Co, who are Arjun's paternal cousins, arch rivals in business,appear from nowhere. Dushasan, Duryodhan's dear brother says,
" What Arjun? So scared of going to class that you stayed back here, and even here you need company and that too of girls to be here?"
This brought the trio back to normal and Arjun said,
" Think whatever you want priya bhratha, because Subhadra, who is Madhav's sister, is my responsibility and this elegant lady stopped me for help. Helping the person who needs it is Dharm. And also what will you people understand the significance of Dharm?" he said cuttingly and towards Yagya and said,
" You can call me Arjun, Miss..?" he said losing himself to her.
" Yagya, Yagya, you can call me that, Arjun" she struggled a lot to call him with that name and felt that she was not right in calling him by that name.
He turned to Subhadra and said, " Hi Subhi!! Hope you know me due to Madhav!!"
Subhadra said softly in a voice which was barely audible," Yes, Arjun! How can I not know my priya Bhratha's best friend?" Arjun was about to reply to her when Yagya interrupted,
" She is my Govind's sister not your Madhav's!! She is my responsibility too!!" she said it and grabbed Subhi by her arm and took her along with her as she felt losing herself to Arjun. Little did they know that it was their priya Muralidhar's leela of giving them both Subhi as the responsibility.

After College,
Yagya speaking to Govind on the phone,
" Govind, what is this weird feeling? When I saw that person I felt a woman's pain both mental and physical, why?"
" Sakhi, you will have to realize yourself to find the cause of this feeling!! And you cannot imagine that woman's pain as, Mansik peeda kalpana me kaam pratit hota hai aur vastivikta main jyada aur sharirik peeda kalpana main adhik pratit hota hai aur vastavikta main kam"
She felt as if she was the one who told these dialogues before.
" Yeah Govind!! I have to do my project, will call you back after sometime!! Bye, have a nice day ahead!!"
" Bye, Sakhi!"
Immediately as Yagya disconnected the phone, Kanha received another call and this time from his best friend, Arjun.
" Hello Madhav!!"
" hello paarth"
"You knew this before right, madhav? That I am Dwapar yug. Arjun!! Why didn't you tell me?"
" everything cannot be told by someone else, Paarth!! Knowledge is better self-realized and this thing is an important part of knowledge!! Now i need to help someone else, who has self-realized to be on the right path!! So will callyou back once i am done with it asyou need to know about it!!"
" okay Madhav!! Bye for now!!"

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TBC
Precap: who is that person and what will be the path instructed by kanha? Janne ke lie stay tuned!!

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