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Priya

@priya2701

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

sooo cutee... loved the part!!! :)

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Dhvani85

@Dhvani85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

bechara Randhir pehale khud hi galti kiya abhi pachhta raha hai I loved the way you have made Randhir realise his mistakes. It was awesome update. Waiting for next update

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arohi

@lovearohi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

awesome as usual
after seeing SH's disappointing epi ur ff is a treat to read really
but I really didn't get y u named it t-shirt😆
n lol rd n parth threating vardhan sir
did he remove sanyu from her job😲
update asap

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Anjali

@AnjaliAnand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

wonderful update dear
pls continue soon :)

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twni

@twni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

fab chaap sammy thanks for pm

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SAKSHI SINGH

@cuteparsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

amazinggg updateee

plzzz next part sooonnn

thanks for pm

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

sorry sorry for the late reply. vo kya hai na; humare college meim onam celebration tha. us meim busy tha.. coming to the update...that was awesome as always. and the title is soo different but an apt one...

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Gul Mallik

@CleanBowled

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

hi sammy

i knw this is not fair to u, this feedbac of mine is coming after a long tym

but sweetheart i hope u understand

last 15 days hav been too hectic for me

i haven't commented on any1s posts

n i m extremely sorry coz i personally knw hw imp a feedback is for a writer

plz do understand though.

nw comng to ur today's update, i would say it was good

but i would suggest that u stop portraying sanyu as weak

i think as the lust phase finishes u should start portaying sanyu as a reformed character

i knw tat she is an independent character, but still there is something abt her tat lacks independence, more specifically emotional independence n self confidence.

i feel tat as writers it becomes our responsibility to change our readers' point of view n lead them to think in a more broad n refined perspective

bt since IF is also a form of entertainment to all of us v also shouldn't neglect the maska- masala side of these stories. its not that i m critiquing u, infact i very well understand that ur story is exactly going in this particular direction ( like u hinted to me), its just tat i put in a suggestion.

i appreciate the effort ur putting in sammy

GOOD JOB N KEEP GOING

love

Gul