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Posted: 10 years ago
loved your story..
u must not be knwing me because i m commenting for the first time..
sent u buddy req and pm me also plzz..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update cont soon chalo finally sabko pata chal gaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update cont soon chalo finally sabko pata chal gaya
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awesome update cont soon chalo finally sabko pata chal gaya 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Samyuktha

lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written
love it to the core
Very well you've described the scenario
Keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra


thank you!!! i missed your comments for a while. hope you did ur exams well!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anuja78

ab ye kaun aa gaya????

abhi toh milan hua hai... Dont want any kabab mein haddi


hoga small khulasa next part mein!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nkphjfr

loved your story..
u must not be knwing me because i m commenting for the first time..
sent u buddy req and pm me also plzz..


thank you for commenting..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! Finally un sab ka bharat-milap ho gaya! Yay!
Super happy!
Can't wait for them to confess their feelings to each other! The phase is going really well, and you have penned this chapter beautifully!
I loved the 'sanyukta-chasing-randhir' sequence. That was perfect!

And I think the person is Kabir who bumped into vardhan at the end of this chapter!
And I guess there is some deep connection between Kabir and Sameer, indirectly!

Lets see how you weave this story! Can't wait for the next update!
Continue pretty soon, please samyuktha!

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3


thank you so much!!! and wait for just a few more parts to know the connections!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 37

Niharika: Watch your tongue Kabir. Just get the hell out of here!

Kabir: Arey Nihi. Why are you stressing yourself. Why are you defending your husband? Are you his mouthpiece?

Vardhan: Tumhe jo samjh na hai samjhlo. I care a darn about it.

Kabir: Kya Vardhan? Abhi tak naraz ho mujhse? Apne dost ko maaf nahi karoge.

Vardhan: Jo tum teen bhaiyon ne milkar hamare saath kiya na just be happy that I didn't rip your heads off.

Kabir: Arey? Acha purane baat bhool jaate hain. Ankit Sanyu darling kaise ho? And you must be Randhir Singh Shekawat right?

Sanyu immediately held Ankit's hands and at the same time, Vardhan and Ankit covered Sanyu behind them.

Ankit: Aap ko ek baar kehne se samajh nahi aata hai kya? Teeno ek jaise hi hai. Waise bhoode aap ho gaye, Mr. Vardhan Suryavanshi nahi kyunki unhe tho ek baar kehne se sab samajh aata.

Kabir (Yells): Ankit! Yeh tum acha nahi kar rahe ho. You will pay for this insult of mine. Let me see how you finish this project.

Randhir: Excuse me sir. Sorry for the interuption. I guess this is a place where we conduct business. Am pretty sure you are aware of civil law here? This is a residential area, and you are creating unncesessary commotion which will disturb the normal public life. If you want to save yourself from the wrath of public, kindly leave the place.

Kabir: Oye hero! You might be one back in your country not here. Arey sanyu darling, yeh kya tumhara naya bodyguard ban gaya hai? Anyway congratulations on becoming the CFO. Let me see what luck you bring in this time. Waise Mihir ne kaha ki you have not changed at all. Acha laga tum sab se milkar. Hmmm.. all the best for this new project. And let me see how this project gets over. Till then, take care. Bye sanyu, Nihi.

Just as he left in his car, Ankit left Sanyu's hands and took a huge brick and through it in his direction. Sanyu screamed seeing this reaction "Bhai!! Bas karo na! Please!!" But Ankit was in no mood to stop, he kept throwing things. Randhir tried stopping Ankit and in the process got hurt in his arm and blood started oozing out as he had tripped and a rod had pierced in his arm. Ankit stopped only when he heard Vardhan's shout. Meanwhile, Sanyu who had burst into tears seeing her brother's reaction, ran from the place towards the parking lot. On hearing the noise, everyone came out to see what was happening. Parth who saw Sanyu running at a distance, sprinted towards that direction and caught up with her just as she was about to get into the car and speed away from the place.

Parth: Sanyu kya hua? Tum bhaag kyu rahi ho?

But Sanyukta never said anything but just hugged Parth and kept crying. Parth didn't understand what had happened but he felt miserable seeing Sanyukta sobbing helplessly. After a while she stopped crying and by this time all had come there. Sanyukta suddenly realised something and went near Randhir and spoke "Tum mere saath hospital chalo."

Randhir: Am ok basanti. Relax.

Sanyu(yells): Randhir Singh Shekawat! Aap mere saath hospital aa rahe ho. Bas.

Randhir was numb as he had never seen Sanyukta lose control over herself and shout at anyone.

Ankit: Mein bhi chalta hoon.

Sanyu: Ankit Aggarwal! You will go home. Di Jij ke saath

Vardhan: San..

He could not complete as Niharika held his hand and stopped him from saying anything. Soon all of them went home, while Sanyu took another car and went to hospital along with Randhir. Throughout the ride, they never spoke a word to each other. Sanyu had removed her dupatta and tied it around his arm to stop the blood loss. In a while they had reached the hospital and soon Randhir was taken inside to clean his wound while Sanyukta waited outside for him.

Suddenly Randhir came out running from the room and dragged Sanyukta out! The nurse came following him.

Randhir: Chalo basanti. Ho gaya!

Sanyu: Arey tum bhaag kyun rahe ho. You just wait here I will get the prescription of the pain killers.

Randhir: No no.. I don't want. Mujhe pain nahi ho raha hay yaar. Please chalo na!

Sanyu: Kya hua ? itna dar kyu rahe ho?

Just then the nurse had also come to them and Randhir hid behind Sanyukta like a 5 year old boy.

Nurse: Chaliye sir.

Randhir: Nahi. Mein nahi lagaunga!

Nurse: Sir. Its required, else it will become infectious.

Randhir nodded his head vigourously while Sanyu was confused. "Ek minute. Kya hua nurse?"

Nurse: Mam. Sir ko tetanus injection lagana hai kyunki a rusted rod has caused the cut. The cut is pretty deep and we even removed a small piece of the rod from his arm.

Sanyu: Yeh kya hai Ga.. Randhir? Chalo injection lagaalo.

Randhir: Arey nahi na.. please.?

Sanyu: Kyun?

Randhir: See am perfectly fine. Why waste an injection and all.

Sanyu: Randhir, nurse keh rahi hai infection ho sakta hai. Ek minute. Tumhe ab tak injection se dar lagta hai?

As soon as she said that Randhir's expression changed and Sanyu started laughing out loud. Randhir was watching her for a while and seeing her laugh he started smiling. In few minutes she stopped laughing and told the nurse to go inside and that she would bring Randhir. She held Randhir's hands and started going towards the room from where he dashed out.

Once they entered, Sanyu made Randhir sit on the bed and asked the nurse to give the injection.

Randhir: Ruko. Yeh clean hai kya? Agar iss needle se infection ho gaya tho?

Nurse: Its disposable needle sir. We don't use the same needle for all patients.

Randhir: Acha. Hmm I wanna see the contents of the tetanus medicine. Mujhe actually sulphur se allergy hai.

Nurse: Sir it does not have sulphur. The ingridients are aluminum adjuvant, residual formaldehyde and thimerosal.

Sanyu: RSS ko darr lag raha hai kya?

Randhir: RSS ko kisi cheez se darr nahi lagata hai. Nurse you carry on.

Just as she was about to inject, he again stopped her and tried to get away from the room but Sanyu blocked him.

Sanyu: Yeh kya bachpana hai Randhir. You are wasting her time.

Randhir: Arey mujhe nahi lagaana hai. See you are also telling that we are wasting time. Chalo chalo.

Sanyu: Acha teeke teeke. Calm down na. I will take you. You must be thirsty right.

Saying she took his hand and made him sit on the bed and brought water for Randhir while the Nurse gave a helpless look, but Sanyu just smiled at her.

Sanyu: Yeh lo I just mixed glucose in this. Finish the full glass and then we will go. Ok?

Randhir: If you are planning anything am telling you I wont leave you.

Sanyu: Sachi. Nothing. Tumhe nahi lagaana haina. So don't take it. Just have this water and calm down first.

Randhir was slowly sipping the contents from the juice.

Sanyu: Acha Randhir I wanted to ask you something.

Randhir: Haan

Sanyu: When I googled about you, I saw the latest interview excerpt where you said you will not do romantic movies and all.

Randhir: Haan tho?

Sanyu: I just wanted to no why? (meanwhile she signalled the nurse to give the injection without letting him know)

Randhir: Answer bhi ussi interview mein diya hai

Sanyu: Acha? But I didn't read that part. Tab tak na laptop band ho gaya. Tho batao na.

Randhir: Woh actually mujhe . hmmm lets just say I don't want to romance any random girl. If I ever romance it will be only AAAHHH...

Meanwhile Sanyu went and hugged Randhir and started carassing his back to soothe him when he shouted. "Ssshhh ho gaya.. bas..."

Randhir: Mein tumhe chodunga nahi! Ullu banaya mujhe?

Sanyu: Aur kya karti. You were acting like a kid. Ab bukto. Ok wait here I will go get the pain killers and come.

Saying this she came out smiling and went to get the pain killers as mentioned in the prescription. Meanwhile in the room, Randhir was sulking over the fact that he had been given injection and was throwing deathly glares at the nurse. The nurse was smiling at him.

Randhir(irritated): Why are you laughing. Be happy am not arranging for your transfer to someother place.

Nurse: Sorry sir. But you have a very loving and intelligent wife.

Randhir: Wife?

Nurse: Yes sir. Mam. She is very intelligent. She distracted you easily and I could do my duty.

Randhir just smiled at this. Sanyukta entered at that time with a pack in her hands and asked Randhir to come along with her. Randhir was smiling throughout the ride back home, while Sanyu was looking out of the window and was lost somewhere. Soon they reached home and found all of them sitting at the dining table with different expressions. Parth saw them and instantly came and hugged her. Randhir was irritated with this but soon Dhwani came to him and hugged him too with tears in her eyes.

Randhir: Kya Mish? Ro kyun rahe ho? Am alright. See.

Sanyu: Waise Mish. Kal raat itne saare baat ki humne but you never told Gabbar fears injection.

All of them laughed and Randhir too joined in. Parth put his hands around Randhir's shoulder and all of them settled in the living room. Randhir excused himself and went to his room as he was feeling sleepy. Slowly all of them retired to their rooms to rest as they had gone through a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res,
unres

yey m 1st. 🥳
[:D/]

cmng 2 update,
Superb. Loved it.
i knew dat man iz kabir.
Who else cn be use dat type of language. 🤢
1 bro iz left.
Obviously vo to hamare 1 n only chomu hi honge. 😡
Pura khandan sanyu k piche pada hai. 😡

Bt bt rd iz so cute.
Our rank no 1 fears of injection! 😆 🤣

Gv nxt part soon.
Love,
Mahi ❤️

Edited by Mahi2012 - 10 years ago

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