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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: LuvSHQ

Interesting... continue soon 😊

thank you dear😃😃

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#52

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Hey Sakshi 😃
Great yaar 👏
I am unable to handle 3 FF's and you write so many, so well and so early 😲
Prologue: Humm... The idea is new. Nice concept. Interesting very interesting 😆😉
Sanyu and RD meet on Fb 😃
Maza aayega 😃
Jaldhi updates dena 😃
Thanks for PM 😃
One more thing yaar Saku 😊
Plz now you own so many writings so you should make an index of yours

If you already have one 😛 plz PM me the link 😃

thank you manu😃😃

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#53

Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand

Nice concept 😊
continue soon

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#54

Originally posted by: SanLuvsSHQ

Seems interesting! Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

OMG..another wacky idea. Sakshi I love your craze for writing.

thank you so much dear😃😃

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thank you dear😃😃

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#57

Originally posted by: cuteparsh




Ok so story is revolve around (? )two characters mainly sanyu and rd.

They meet in a social site.

They become friends.

And then something propose type (?) and rejection also.






How bout' reading some grammar sweetie 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: draco_is_mine



How bout' reading some grammar sweetie 😊

DI SORRY ACTUALLY MERE PASS AAPKE JITNA TIME NAHI HOTA NA

ALREADY 5 STORIES HAI. AUR 12TH CLASS KI STUDENT HOON.

SABHI STORIES UPDATE KARNA HOTA HAI.

ITNA TIME NAHI MILTA. NA

IF YOU DONT LIKE IT SO PLZZZ STAY AWAY FROM IT.

A HUMBLE REQUEST.

I THINK AB AUR KUCH KAHNE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI AAP JAISI MAHAAN DI SE KAHNE KI

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SANYUKTA AGARWAL- a beautiful. full of attitude girl. studying in 11th class of GGSK school bhopal


RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT- handsome, helpul guy. studying in 12th class of BFFHS school.

SUKET AGARWAL- sanyu's father.

SEFALI AGARWAL- sayu's mother.

RENUKA SANYAL- rd's mother.

HARSH SEKHAWAT-rd's father.

other will be introduce in story.

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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BHOPAL

A fine morning of may. May the month of their vacations. sun is already rise but miss sleeping beauty is still on her bed and covered with quilt. Dreaming and smiling in her dreams. But how long... Her precious slumber is disturbed by the knock on the door. A lady of mid 30 is standing outside of the room and try to wake her up. But there are no use of it.

She- sanyu wake up. Beta late ho gaya hai.

Sanyu [in sleepy voice]- mumma plz 5 min.

Mom- no bet. Papa gussa kar rahe hai jaldi utho.

Sanyu-[thought- papa abhi tak ghar me hai office nahi gaye, sanyu ab tu to gayi] mumma uth gayi. Good morning.

Mom-good morning beta. jaldi fresh ho jao.

She rushes toward bathroom. After correct 30 min she came down stair where she saw her father was sitting and reading morning news paper.

Sanyu [with hesitation]- good morning papa.

Papa- [kept news paper aside] -to uth gayi tum. Time dekho 10 baj raha hai aura b uth rahi ho. Pata bhi hai na aaj tumhare board exams ka result aa raha hai.

Shefali come there and said

Shefali-abhi to use vacations start huye hai. Thoda der se uthegi to kya ho jayega.

Suket-tum iski her buri habit ko hide karo bas. [to sanyu] kal se tumhari coaching classes start ho rahi hai.

Sanyu-par papa...

Suket-main tumse poonch nahi raha hoon, inform kar raha hoon.

Sanyu-ok.

Just then her mother's mobile phone rang which was placed on the nearest table. It flashes piyali. Sanyu pick it up and went to her room.

Sanyu- hello piya.

Piya-hii sanyu. Tu kya kar rahi hai abhi?

Sanyu-kuch nahi bas papa se daant kha rahi thi. Accha tum batao tumne call kyo kiya.

piya-tujhe kya hua itni sad kyo hai.

Sanyu-voh kal se papa ne meri coaching class start karwa di hai. Vacations ki band baja dali.

Piya- so sad.accha yeh sab chod tujhe pata hai na humara aaj result aa raha hai .

Sanyu- I know. Mujhe to bahut dar lag raha hai yaar.

Piya-tujhe darne ki kya zaroorat. Tum hi 1st aane wali ho.

sanyu-but agar voh aarush [sanyu's classmate] 1st aa gaya to.

Piya-voh chomu. Voh to khudke dream me bhi tujhe peeche nahi kar payega sanyu. Don't worry tu hi 1st aayegi.

Sanyu-hope so..

Piya- accha bata tu fb par kab account bana rahi ho.

Sanyu-ummm... Papa se permission lena padega.

Piya-what?? Uncle se permission ki kya zaroorat.

Sanyu-you know na piyali papa se bina permission liye main ...

Piya-tu na pyar bhi apne papa ki permission leke hi karna.

Sanyu-what ...

Piya-haan.

Sanyu-ek to main result ke chakkar me itni tense hoon aur tum mujhe daan rahi ho.

Piya-ok chod yeh sab, aur tujhe ek idea doon.

Sanyu-kisliye.

Piya-dumbo uncle se permission lene ke liye.

Sanyu- ok bol.

Piya- aaj humara result aane wala hai nd I m sure that tere marks to awesome aayege to tum ek kaam karna uncle se permission le lena. Are itna to 1st aane ki khushi main banta hai yaar.

Sanyu-huhhh...

Piya-kya coldly reply kar rahi hai.

Sanyu-accha tu m result ke time mere ghar aaogi.

Piya-haan sanyu. Chal abhi main rakhti hoon mom bula rahi hai.

Sanyu-ok bye see u then.

Piya-bye

She puts the cell phone on the nearby table. After thinking for a while she reaches to near her mom who is busy in making food for them.

Sanyu-mumma main aapko help kar doon

Sefali-[she looks her from head to toe]-kya chahiya tumhe.

Sanyu-mujhe. Mujhe to kuch nahi chahiye main to bas aapki help karne ka soch rahi thi.

Sefali-sach main.

Sanyu-haan.

SEFALI-Believe nahi hota.

AT JABALPUR

A bike stops in front of a big building. A guy was driving the bike. He is about 16 or 17 years old. He was wearing a helmet. He parked his bike in parking area. He removed his helmet and the girls of same age who are present in the building were staring at him. he is randhir. Randhir singh shekhawat. The most handsome and popular guy . and we cant forget, he is rank no. one.

He goes and sit on his particular banch where his friends are also present.

One of his friend asked to him "rd yaar, yeh bata saari girls tujh par marti kyo HaI hume to dekhti bhi nahi hai"

2nd f- abe karan tujhe to koi dekhegi bhi nahi.

And all friends burst out laughter except karan.

Karan- haan to sahil tujhe kaun bhao deti hai.

3rd f-are karan hai na iski kanika.

And sahil blush.

Rd-abe sahil tu kya girls ki tarah blush kar raha hai.

Karan-rd tu bata na tune girls par aisa kya jadu kar rakha hai..

Rd-are ab main kya karoon agar voh mujh par marti hai to[with attitude]

Karan-kuch tips de na vids ko patane k liye.

Rd-us chudail ka naam mat le abhi aa jayegi.

Sahil-are rd voh tujhe kahan se chudail lagti hai.

Rd-har angle se.

Karan- accha yeh sab choro mujhe kuch batana hai.

Sahil-jaldi bata nahi to sir aa jayege.

Rd-aa nahi jaayege, aa gaye.

A man of his mid 30 come and teach them physics. After an hour class get over. Rd and his friends come outside of the building and goes to parking area.

Sahil-oye karan tu kuch bata raha tha na class me.

Karan-ummm... haan, main yeh bata raha tha ki mujhe [and dreamingly smiled] mujhe ishq wala love ho gaya hai.

Rd-vidushi chudail se.[ and he laugh]

Karan-yuck us jaisi attitude wali gf hone se accha single rahna prefer karoonga..

Sahil-sahi kaha.

Rd-tu continue kar. Aur bata kisse hua hai.

Karan-actually meri ek girl se fb pe baat hui thi aur phir use dheer dheere kab like karne laga pata hi nahi chala..

Sahil-tune use dekha bhi hai ya nahi.

Karan-abhi tak to nahi dekha par kal usne bola hai ki apni pic mujhe send karegi.

Rd-agar acchi nahi hui to kya.

k-rd yeh love kisi ka face aur beauty dekh kar nahi hota. Yeh to bas ho jata hai.

Rd-I don't believe in this.

k-tu ek incident ke chakkar me pyar karna hi bhool gaya.

Rd-mujhe abhi jana hai. Kal milte hai.

And he went from there.

Karan-jab bhi isse pyar ki baat karte hai to yeh aisa hi karta hai.

Sahil-tujhe pata hai us incident ke baad rd ne pyaar se nata hi tod liya hai.

k-ya I know. But I hope that someone will come in his life soon.

s-me too.

At evening [BHOPAL]

Piyali was already present in sanyu's room and both the girls w8ing for their result to be open. Sefali called them and told result is out, go nd check ur result.

Sanyu rush toward computer. She switched on it and open the web site of result.

Piya-sanyu plz pahle mera check kar na.

Sanyu-huhh. Roll no. bata

Piya-137131362 check it fast.

Sanyu-ok ok .

And she check the result and it shows 446/600

Sanyu-piya congrats tere 74% bane.

piyAa-thank you ab tu apne check kar .

sanyu-haan.

She check her result and it shows 554/600

Piya-omggg sanyu tere 90% bane.

Sanyu-haan..

Piya-tu itne sadly kyo bol rahi hai.

Sanyu-thode aur ban jate...

Piya-itne tere liye bahut nahi hai kya.

Sanyu-voh to hai par...

Piya=par var chor aur aunty ko batate hai.

Sanyu-huhh...

Sefali and suket arrive there.

Sefali-congrats both of u.

Piya-thank you aunty. Aapko result pata chal gaya.

Sefali-haan jab tum dono result dekh rahe the tab hum bhi yahi the.

Piya-ohh. [she said in sanyu's ear] sanyu uncle se permission le na.

Sanyu-no.

Piya- to theek hai.

Piya[to suket]-uncle voh sanyu aap se kuch poonch rahi thi.

Suket-bolo sanyu.

Sanyu-voh,... papa...

Suket-kya bolna hai.

Piya-uncle yeh aapse fb par id banane ke liye permission maang rahi hai. Hai na sanyu.

And she winked at sanyu.

Suket-[after a 2 min]-bana lo.

Sanyu and piya- what.???????

Suket -id banalo.

Sanyu-real me.

Suket-haan but boys se chat nahi karogi.

Sanyu-[in happy voice]haan papa thank you so much.

Sefali-sanyu beta yeh tumhare liye

And she handed her a box which is wrapped with a gift paper. She took it.

Sanyu-mumma what is this.

Sefali-go and check it.

Sanyu-ok.

Both the girls went to sanyu's room.

Sefali- aap jab uske liye gift laye the to aapne hi kyo nahi diya.

Suket- use gift mil gaya. That's it.

In sanyu's room.

Piya-sanyu open it fast.

Sanyu-ok

She open the box with lots of excitement . box contain a mobile phone.

Piya-omg sanyu new mobile for you.

Sanyu-[cant-believe-wale-expressions] ya. Main abhi ma ko thank you bol kar aati hoon.

A voice came from behind

v-kise thank you bolna hai.

Sanyu[turns]-ma [and she hugs her] thank you so much for gift I love u so so so much.

Sefali-love u too beta. accha ab kuch kha lo tum dono.

Piya-aunty thori der se kha lenge.

Sefali-par...

Sanyu-haan maa. Don't worry jab man karega tab kha lenge.

Sefali-ok but bhool mat jana excitement ke chakkar me.

Piya-sure aunty.

Sefali left the room.

Piya-chal ab teri id banate hai.

Sanyu-ok.

Piya open a new tab type sign in for facebook. Click it. Window shows a form which she filled with the help of sanyu.

Piya-done sanyu. Ab mujhe request send kar.

Sanyu-ya.

She search for piyali's id. There are many id of the same name.

Sanyu-piya inme se teri id kaunsi hai.

Piya-umm meri profile pic me Param ki pic set hai.

Sanyu-ya I got it.

And she send request to piyali's id. They continue their talk. After sometime piya went from there.

Whole day passed like this.

NEXT DAY

AT JABALPUR

Rd and his friends attend their usual coaching classes. After the classes they went to karan's house.

They are in karan's room.

Rd-karan ab bata bhi do hume yaha laye kyo ho.

Karan-voh tumhe na piyali ki pic dikhani hai.

Rd-ab yeh piyali kaun hai.

Karan [still blushing 🤣 ] meri gf.

Rd-ohhh, voh fb wali.

Kran-haan.

Sahil-voh rahti kahan hai.

Karan-bhopal me.

Rd-jbp ki saari girls mar gayi thi kya jo tu love karne ke Bhopal gaya.

And sahil & rd burst out of laughter.

Karan-haan mar gayi thi . theek hai. Yeh dekho yeh hai piyali arora.

And karan shows a girl's pic to them in his lappy. [she is same piya- sanyu's bff]

But rd's gaze fall on an id.

Rd-abe karan lappy de.

k-kyo.

Rd-de na.

k-ok ye lo

rd-search about that id. And finally send a friend request to that id.

This id was none other than sanyu's id because it was showing on karan id in people you may know' with a mutual friend [of course piyali]

AT BHOPAL

Sanyu and piyali also attend their coaching classes. After the physics class they both are sitting on the bench of their cc because they had a 15 min break for next class.

Piya-sanyu tumne td log in kiya kya.

Sanyu-abhi nahi. Ghar ja kar dekhoongi.

Piya- nahi abhi dekh.

Sanyu-abhi.

Piya-ya now.

Sanyu-ok.

She take out her mobile from the pocket of her bag and logged in her id.

Sanyu-omgg piya 15 friend request.

Piya-check kar kis kis ki hai.

Sanyu-huhh.

After 1 min.

She told her some names of girls as well as boys.

Piya- kis kis ki accept ki.

Sanyu-all girls.

Piya-and boys?

Sanyu-maine papa se bola tha ki main boys se chat nahi karoongi isiliye...

Piya-you know what sanyu tu pagal hai.

Sanyu-kyo?

Piya-are uncle thodi na aayenge check karne teri id . tu kisse chat karti hai kisse nahi yeh unhe kaise pata chalega.

Sanyu-haan, par...

Piya-par var kuch nahi aur accept kar.

Sanyu-ok.

Her eyes were stuck on a name it is RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT.

PRECAP- sandhir chating.

boring tha 😳😳 i'll promise next part full of sandhir hoga😃😃

guys maine check nahi kiya hai. sorry for mistakes😳😳.
actually is story ka idea poora meri bff zakiya ne diya hai aur kal uska b'day bhi hai so i want to dedicate this chapter to zakiya.
and one more thing if you want pm for next chapter so hit the like button and do comment also.



sakshi 🤗
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