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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for commenting late
OMG ...this one is intriguing...Panchi is planning to bring in the past in the New Years Party ๐Ÿ˜ฒ & gave individual parcels to all the people in the house

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part III
Excellent Update Angie ๐Ÿ‘

I am really surprised Panchi would trap the culprits of her past ๐Ÿ˜ฒ in this party & all the others also having glimpses of their past.

And why is Vasusen suddenly gone missing before the party...I sense something will not be good here ๐Ÿ˜”

Angie Please make the next update soon...I m dying to read how the stakes will roll this time.

Yes...I m rating this chappy 5 out of 5 โญ๏ธ

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow great update dear ๐Ÿ‘ now your questions:

Shocked- yes, very much!
Excited- Yes, very much!
Liked-yes, very much!
Rate: 4/5 (you deserve 5/5 actually but I can't help reducing 1 point as I was missing someone in this chapter)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

So, miss grokes! Well now I am actually going to marry this FF but because there was so much of drama and I absolutely love drama!!!! (This was reply to the pehla vaala comment!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰)

Okay, now lemme start with the actual comment!
Brilliantly written! Seriously, this is a very well planned and intelligent FF! Takes a lot if caliber to write something like this Angiee! And you absolutely nail the genre! Common readers don't you agree with me on this?
Amazing plot I must say!
I loved Shakuni's reaction and I just hope Vasusen is safe now! Par Iravan-Ulupi ka kya bharosa? Haina? I am really waiting for you to unveil this mystery!
So, Subhadra knows the past now and our Govind is the only person who knows about the mystery except for you Angiee!๐Ÿ˜†
Now, coming to the serious part!
God! So our Panchali is taking revenge from these people who wronged her in her past! #gogirl
I just love the way you have portrayed her character throughout this FF! It is amazing!
Looking forward to the next part!
P.S. - Shocked? Super shocked babe! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Oh My God ... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Now you shocked me. This is a chapter in itself.๐Ÿ˜† Thanks a lot dear but to be true ; planning all this is not at all easy but the encouragement and appreciation received from all the readers plays a very important role in all that. Okay dear if you say I nail the genre. I ask, WHICH ONE?๐Ÿ˜† Because this FF surely isn't surviving on one genre. It is a mix of whole load of genre.๐Ÿ˜† You have fantasy, drama, suspense, thrill, adventure. WHICH ONE? ๐Ÿ˜† So just clarify that.๐Ÿ˜‰ Now this being said that Subhadra knows the past, let the updates come one after another many will come to know the past.๐Ÿ˜‰ I guess I have gone up the train mad after this revenge theme.๐Ÿ˜† Draupadi is one of the most loved character for me, of all time so I try to portray he in the best way possible and it really "happifyies" me knowing that you like the way she is portrayed. Thanks a lot dear.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Dyuth Sabha!!! great build up to the event!!
Kept the suspense going very nicely!
So now Mr. S is in the hot seat ...let him squirm
Looking forward to the continuation...this is really quite gripping

Thanks a lot Mamta! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I actually love keeping suspense in all the parts. Don't you worry dear he will squirm a lot ๐Ÿ˜‰ Sure dear. Hope you enjoy a lot.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Beautiful ! To Say The Truth, I Kind Of Expected This ! But Loved How Kanha Explained Everything To Subhi !! And Wait, Did Iravan Lure Vasusen Out Using The Name Of Paarth ?

Thank you dear. ๐Ÿ˜Š Actually it is nice to know that you expected this. That shows that you think about my FF which shows that it has a little impact on you. ๐Ÿ˜ณ This is me dear, I always search for the shining light in the dark.๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Ab you read mera comment okay? You will see how shocked I was! And you better reply fast! Also, take your time to read it! It's like a chapter for a comment!๐Ÿคฃ
And I rate it 6/5! I think that explains how much I am loving the plot girl!๐Ÿ˜‰
[/QUOTESo dear that explains you are liking it.๐Ÿ˜‰ That's good for me.๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayu_8

Finally on the track!!! Yippiee!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Lets come directly to the recent update... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
1. Shockkkeeeddd???? - not able to decide yet
2.anytime excited for mb!!!... or ardi? ๐Ÿ˜‰
3.this ain't anything to ask... if we dint like then we wouldn't be reading it. ๐Ÿฅฑ of course di it was totally amazing! ! ๐Ÿ‘
4. You recive... for this update... full 5/5 ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Now update fast... what's brewing up in Panch...i's mind ๐Ÿ˜•
What will happen wid PP... I want them together again
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Welcome Ayu. ๐Ÿค— And don't worry about PP its always nice for them.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Awsssmmmee.i can't wait 4 the next updt...the most happy new year...:-)

Thanks dear. Nice to see you. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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