MB FF : On the Quest || Pg. 144 - Ch.50 & Note || - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
interesting chapter!! can't wait to find out what they are actually upto!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
highly interesting and good way to show its technical aspects
loved all the parts👏
especially thank you for vasusen n his would be wife conversation😉
wow so subhi might like paarth😉😳
hey i just thought that since its not like MB you know polygamy or poly andry
and already when vasusen-vrushali
bheem-hidimba
maybe you are indicating arjun-shubhadra
how about nakul n panchali in this?😉(i mean whoever is not for arjun try to make her love story with nakul)
and about sahdev you can pair him up with dushala😆 sorry i know bro sis the but as it is its not MB and MB had very few women
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiveYourDream


Thank God...the second pair made me go 😡 😛

Yudi can actually remain a bachelor, as you said, Panchi should not be paired with him!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
I just cannot contain my excitement!!!! Update soon and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE.
Hi everyone.
This is to inform all that please send me a buddy request if you want to receive regular PM's of the update.
NOTE 2.
Seeing that here there are many haters of the Yudhi-Panchi pair I am not going to pair them up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No, no. Pair up Yudhi-Panchi. Don't know why but I really like that pair. Or do whatever u wish to do. After all you have writer's liberty.
I am on ur buddy list but I still did not get the PM.
And I loved this part. Suspense is brewing. Arsu pairing already started. As well as KaVru.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic

Yudi can actually remain a bachelor, as you said, Panchi should not be paired with him!!


For Nakul, Kurenu would do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Yajnaseni

No, no. Pair up Yudhi-Panchi. Don't know why but I really like that pair. Or do whatever u wish to do. After all you have writer's liberty.

I am on ur buddy list but I still did not get the PM.
And I loved this part. Suspense is brewing. Arsu pairing already started. As well as KaVru.

Oh sorry dear maybe by mistake I forgot to send you the update PM.😳
And of that Yudhi-Panchi, many people asked me to through PM such a strong resistance against that pair was put up that I was convinced not to pair the two.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update dear.
Well talking about yudi panchi pair, I would luv them together. But no ways I am satisfied with ArSu. 😉
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CHAPTER 4 : YUDHISHTIR AND THE PROBLEM

"Someone is looking really beautiful today", Vasusen said as he entered his room and locked the door. Vrushali was just back home after her 3 week trip. She was sitting in front of the mirror and was getting free of her tied hair. She didn't reply to Vasusen's calls. "Well I see someone is also ignoring me", Vasusen said. He was slowly moving towards Vrushali and she was watching from the mirror. "Stop where you are", she shouted. "I won't", Vasusen said naughtily. "Stop or pay the price", Vrushali said. "I am ready to pay the price", Vasusen said with a little smirk. "Why am I being ignored?", Vasusen asked as he kissed on Vrushali's cheek from behind. "Why wasn't someone there on the airport to pick me?", Vrushali asked. "Well wasn't Bheem there", Vasusen said. "Oh... yes so now Bheem is my special someone, right, ok I will marry him", Vrushali said. "Oh so sorry there was an important meeting", Vasusen said with a innocent voice. "But you know I deserve punishment. Wait let me punish myself", Vasusen said as he bent down to kiss Vrushali. But before their lips met there was a knock on the door, "Bahiya! Don't we have to discuss the quest". "Oh... god this...", Vasusen boiled. He opened the door. "Why are you holding that big book in you hand bahiya?", asked Yudhishtir. "Good! Now you take this book and find out the meaning of the word 'privacy' from it. If you are able to find the meaning, do whatever you want to but don't you dare knock on this door again", Vasusen shouted and banged the door back close. He turned toward Vrushali and said, "Hmmm... So where were we?".
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"I am telling you dear Prof.Drona he is way too strict now-a-days. He never leaves a chance to point you out if you are late to submit any assignment", Bheem said to his lady-love on his cell. "I agree! He is strict with girls too. Earlier he was quite nice but he is becoming strict day by day ", Hidimba's voice rose in agreement with Bheem's. "By the why what say she we have dinner out tomorrow?", Bheem asked for suggestion. "What! We had dinner out yesterday itself. Bheem do you want to see me fat", Hidimba scolded him. "Wait a second dear. Someone's on the door", Bheem said. "Yudhishtir bahiya!", Bheem said with a shocked face as he opened the door. "Hi Bheem want some help in studies?", Yudhishtir asked. "Awah! I see looks like Vasusen bahi didn't give time to him today", Bheem thought. "No bahi! I wanna sleep now", Bheem said. "But..", before Yudhishitr could complete the door was closed.
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I am not going to sit like that!", Paarth said to himself while driving. "How can I be so careless! I will find the Scroll today at any cost", Paarth said as he hit his hand on the steering wheel the 2oth time. Just as he was passing from Mekhal Road he observed a house between thick trees. "A house between such thick trees. I should take a look. Who knows if I find the Scroll here", Paarth thought as he got off his car.
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"What do you think Nakul should we open the door?", Sahadev asked. "No... Just don't! I guess tonight Yudhi bahi did not get anyone so he is up here to talk to us. I am way too tired to talk to him now", Nakul said lazily. "I agree but he is banging the door now for quite a long time", Sahadev said. "Nakul... Sahadev... open brothers left have some talks about you studies", Yudhishtir shouted with full energy. "I guess my boys have slept. Why to disturb them", Yudhishitr thought and departed to his room.
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"Now quite big home it is", Paarth said as he tiptoed around the house. "I guess all have slept. I can now search for the Scroll here. But how did they forget to lock their door?", Paarth thought and laughed at the foolishness of the owner of the house. He entered a room and sat on the chair for rest. Just then a girl came out of the bathroom and shouted on seeing Paarth. Quick to act as he is Paarth stood up and pinned the girl to the wall with his hand on her mouth. Their eyes met and so did their brains. Both for a second had forgotten everything and just were lost into each others eyes. Paarth slowly removed his hand from the girl's mouth. And just then the lights were switched on.
TBC...😳

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