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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 1 : WHEN IT ALL BEGAN

"No, no, no..." Dhristradyumna shouted. "Not again... This stupid machine" , his face was red with anger and he was going on and on with his complains. "Why did I just create this idiot. Stupid. " , he was erupting like a volcano. "Brother, clam down no need to be angry. We have a back up drive we will retrieve the information from there", Panchi said. "Panchi is right. Why to worry. We still have the back up. I guess it's in drive 100234. Panchi just check.", Subhi said. Panchi opened drive 100234 in their large computer set up. "Here it is", Panchi shouted celebrating her victory. "Oh... thank god. Now back to Scroll 3. Panchi you said you have found a hint in Scroll 2 which might help us in finding the third Scroll", said Govind, entering in the room. "Well yes, it can be I guess. And not to forget the Scroll 1 helped us to find Scroll 2, so, surely Scroll 2 might contain a hint about Scroll 3. Which I think I've found.", Panchi said excitedly. "Well, well my little sister is becoming smarter day by day. Now what is the hint, according to you", Dhristradyumna said proudly. "Now I guess we found Scroll 2 at Manipravallika . Right. So if we add the geo-locational coordinates of Manipravallika with the geo-location coordinates of Sutrabhooj where we found the first Scroll. We get..." Panchi said. "180 degrees that means 90 N degrees and a 90 S degrees. Which means that..." ,Subhi said. She puts the codes in the locationer and the loctioon is found. "Oh... my... God... It's here in Bangalore. But howcome! Because if we go as per the Scroll hints it should be Mahekanara." ,Panchi said with an astonished face.
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"Finally Scroll 1!" Vasusen said happily. "Now open it fast and lets check was is it having in.", said Paarth, excitedly. "Well, well, well, it's in some other language you see. We need the translator boys. Yudhi..." said Vasusen. "Here it come. Give me lets scan and get the translation. " Yudhishtir said with an excitement in his voice. Vasusen handsover the Scroll to Yushishtir and he scans it. Slowly the translation appears on the moniter.
"In this third Scroll of the search of the Pink Emerald,
You get the story of the hidden path,
You need the Messenger to open the,
Gates to the Heaven stone."
"What! Third Scroll. I thought it was the first one. So that means the first two are either lost or found by someone else.", said, Yudhishtir. "I guess, they might have lost. Since the quest we are set on, hardly anyone in the world might know about." Paarth said. "I agree with Paarth. We have to continue our quest using this Sroll only.", Bheem said. "But who is the Messenger? I mean this makes no sense. If there is a Messenger, how will we find him. " Nakul said. "Nakul we need to examine it carefully. The Scroll surely has a deeper meaning. " Sahadev said.
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"Subhi did you see the new admissions! One of them is so cute. I wish he befriends me." , said one of Subhi's friend. "Just then Panchi entered the class. "Did you see the new admissions." both Panchi and Subhi said simultaneously to each other. "The whole university is talking about them." ,said Panchi. "It seem that they have no other topic to talk about.", Subhi replied. "Well leave them. I found some more about the Scroll so I called Govind and Dhristradyumna in the dining area of the University. They might have reached lets leave." Panchi told Subhi. "Let go." Subhi said.
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"Hmmm... How dare these... Stupids." ,Panchi said. She went near the table where the four boys were sitting. "Excuse me. Extremely sorry to disturb you but this is our seat." ,Panchi said forcing her head between the two of the four boys. "Oh... We are sorry mam but you see we sat here first. So may find another seat." , one of them said. Panchi now boiling with anger shouted,"First of all mister you are a new admission so you need to know that this place has fixed seat for all. And this is the place where Subhi and I sit. So please better stand up from here and move on." "Why not we will stand happily. But please speak a bit slowly. MAM." , the boy shouted with full force. Just then Govind and Dhristradyumna entered. "God... what's happening here.", Govind said. "Nothing Govind. Just these boys especially this one is shouting on me." Panchi said with a puppy face. "You started it." , said the boy. "There's no point in fighting we should better sit at our respective place.", said Dhristradyumna . The boys got up and the girls along with their brothers sat. "By the way mister.", Panchi called the boy who was arguing with her. "What's you name?" , she said . "Paath..." ,said the boy. "I'll remember you Paarth said Panchi with an angry expression on her face. "You will not be forgotten by me either. MAM.", said Paarth.
"Ahaa... finally Paarth. Now the quest is going in the right direction.", Govind thought.
TBC...😳
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Vrish.

Your images are all toast.

You should include the lovely Hidimbi & Vrushali as well.


Vasusena - Vrushali
Yudhi - Panchali
Bhima - Hidimbi
Arjun - Subhi
N - ?
S - ?

I know dear I'll be introducing them too. 😉
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

Great story...

Please continue...

Thank you dear. I am really happy that you like it. 😃I will continue soon.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all great concept and presented in a really engrossing way .Do continue Also loved the character sketch⭐️
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Originally posted by: vaikartana

First of all great concept and presented in a really engrossing way .Do continue Also loved the character sketch⭐️

A real, real, real big thanks dear. I am really happy that you liked it. I am going to continue soon.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This sounds interesting! Who's paired with whom? From the looks of it Parth and Panchi have given hints of becoming an item!! :D Can't wait to see how this is gonna unfold :D
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Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny

This sounds interesting! Who's paired with whom? From the looks of it Parth and Panchi have given hints of becoming an item!! :D Can't wait to see how this is gonna unfold :D

Oh... thank you very much dear. And as of pairing wait till it opens up...😉. I promise that I'll not let you get bored.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cool Angela. I hv read many emotional and romantic stories on Mahabharat and I will love to read a thriller too. I like ur writing style- simple but effective. Continue soon...thrill us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yajnaseni

Cool Angela. I hv read many emotional and romantic stories on Mahabharat and I will love to read a thriller too. I like ur writing style- simple but effective. Continue soon...thrill us.

Thank you dear for praising my writing style you too right very well. I loved the way you have been going with you Arjun-Iravan FF. I am going to continue soon.😳
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very engrossing...like it a lot so far...the writing style is crisp and appealing...please continue
so Paarth and Panchi or Paarth and Subhi? would prefer the former 😉

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