SanDhir TS -Then, Now And ForEver / *Part 2 Updated 8/10* *Hot part* - Page 7

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un-res it soon bushie 😉😳

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ok keep patient bori ek ek karke bolna😉😉
1st of all warning di 18+ and you both are also same as mine na😆😆 ok but last tak samajh gayi ki warning me patient rakhne ko kyo bola tha😭😭😭
i luv their chemistry😳😳
they were adorable ☺️☺️
but tumne sandhir ko mar dala 😭😭
mere rd ko mar diya😭😭
aur rd ki sanyu ko bhi😭😭
moi ka kajal phil gaya😭😭
jbp me flood aa gayi😭😭
thanks for pm😳
next part soon
lots of luv
bori😭😭

awesome very emotional u nailed it fab writer u r

awesome very emotional u nailed it fab writer u r 😊

awesome very emotional u nailed it fab writer u r

First, I am gonna talk about this whole part,
Here I go,
Chapter 1 - this was super hot! I loved how you wrote everything and made the characters this influential! I loved this one! It had a bit of naughtiness, drama, little comedy and fully romantic.
Chapter 2 and 3 - The jealousy phase! OMG! The way sanyukta felt possessive for Randhir and was worried about him getting close to another woman after seeing his profile picture on WhatsApp, was mindblowing! And the whole 'Kamasutra' phase was written perfectly in the best possible way! The whole idea of melted chocolate romance was perfect! It was very sensuous, and mind you, I have never ever ever ever ever read love making till this intense level! I really really loved this chapter out of all others!
Chapter 4 - The good news! Yay! I was really happy reading the tests to be positive! Their excitement, their curiosity, their love, their passion, their enthusiasm, everything was portrayed very well! Their happiness being together and starting a family was incredibly visible with the words chosen to write this phase!
Chapter 5 - This chapter was very emotional! I can't think of describing what I felt after reading it! Randhir suffering from liver cancer, this world-shattering piece of news really broke me down. It really is difficult to even imagine your loved ones to be in such state. This chapter touched my heart! The way they still enjoyed the time they had with each other, with the most possible togetherness they had, really touched my heart! Them getting back to normal so as to blend in the situations they will be facing in the next months, was wonderful. And the way they spent time with each other, knowing they would not be like this forever, and still being together and making each other happy was written perfectly.
Chapter 6 - The initial chapter. I really have no words to depict my feelings after reading this chapter. I got melted away in their love for each other and their want to stay with each other as long as they possibly can. And the stance, where they died at the same exact moment was splendid. It was written amazingly. I don't know what to say! You guys really numbed me with this chapter!
Horrifically amazing!

Yes, I was touched by this whole part! It made me smile, made me cry (sad tears and a few happy tears too). The heavenly emotions, everything at once! Deeply affected by this story I am!
Seriously I loved this whole damn thing! (I don't have words to describe this story)

Love you both writers!
Thanks for pm'ing and the heart-touching update.

Keep writing,
Love and kisses to both of you,
Karishma. :* <3

Suberb awersome perfect yaar tume mere ko rula diya
i love it soo sanyu nd randhir ka rebirth huya hai plzzz nxt asap updt karna im early waiting fr nxt prt