SanDhir TS -Then, Now And ForEver / *Part 2 Updated 8/10* *Hot part* - Page 14

Originally posted by: revathigrk

nice story.

Originally posted by: chowanisha

anu and neha !!!yaar u guys are fabulous !!!

i just read the 2nd chapter anu

and i am crying!!!

it was all good till their make out !!!

and den slowly slowly my eyes welled up wid the thought of dead randhir!!!

and den the twist of both dying and the happy moment of again birth of sandhir!!!

i am totally feeling ecstasy on reading the whole thing!!!!

oh how i wish i could hug u both!!!!!

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Wow guys you both are an amazing writers yaar no words to describe how much I liked reading ur update but really felt very bad after reading sandhir's death but then reborn of both was really awesome hatsoff to u both yaar and thanks for the pm also 😊

Originally posted by: heyogirlie

IT WAS AWE-INSPIRING

U GUYS R BRILLIANT WRITERS

HATS OFF!!

N MY EYES LITERALLY WELLED UP WEN THEY DIED

BT MY LIPS CURVD INTO A WRY SMILE WEN 2 KIDS WERE BORN

REBIRTH!!!

INSEPARABLE BOND

LOVED IT

I WAS TOTALLY INTO THE STORY

LORD BLESS ALL

LOVE

MANSI

Originally posted by: thundercute

Awesome. .
Thanks for the pm. .

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

First, I am gonna talk about this whole part,
Here I go,
Chapter 1 - this was super hot! I loved how you wrote everything and made the characters this influential! I loved this one! It had a bit of naughtiness, drama, little comedy and fully romantic.
Chapter 2 and 3 - The jealousy phase! OMG! The way sanyukta felt possessive for Randhir and was worried about him getting close to another woman after seeing his profile picture on WhatsApp, was mindblowing! And the whole 'Kamasutra' phase was written perfectly in the best possible way! The whole idea of melted chocolate romance was perfect! It was very sensuous, and mind you, I have never ever ever ever ever read love making till this intense level! I really really loved this chapter out of all others!
Chapter 4 - The good news! Yay! I was really happy reading the tests to be positive! Their excitement, their curiosity, their love, their passion, their enthusiasm, everything was portrayed very well! Their happiness being together and starting a family was incredibly visible with the words chosen to write this phase!
Chapter 5 - This chapter was very emotional! I can't think of describing what I felt after reading it! Randhir suffering from liver cancer, this world-shattering piece of news really broke me down. It really is difficult to even imagine your loved ones to be in such state. This chapter touched my heart! The way they still enjoyed the time they had with each other, with the most possible togetherness they had, really touched my heart! Them getting back to normal so as to blend in the situations they will be facing in the next months, was wonderful. And the way they spent time with each other, knowing they would not be like this forever, and still being together and making each other happy was written perfectly.
Chapter 6 - The initial chapter. I really have no words to depict my feelings after reading this chapter. I got melted away in their love for each other and their want to stay with each other as long as they possibly can. And the stance, where they died at the same exact moment was splendid. It was written amazingly. I don't know what to say! You guys really numbed me with this chapter!
Horrifically amazing!

Yes, I was touched by this whole part! It made me smile, made me cry (sad tears and a few happy tears too). The heavenly emotions, everything at once! Deeply affected by this story I am!
Seriously I loved this whole damn thing! (I don't have words to describe this story)

Love you both writers!
Thanks for pm'ing and the heart-touching update.

Keep writing,
Love and kisses to both of you,
Karishma. :* <3

Originally posted by: BornAries

Neha.. Anu Hats off to both of you... amazing it was ...

Starting from the concept... the story .. their execution.. portray of emotions ...was sheer brilliance...

I so loved this chapter can't express in words...

U were ri8 Anu ... this is such an out- ob the box concept...

OMG! the update was beautiful...Last part magical... .

Sandhir died together.. wow! true loved indeed! .

the part where Parth clarifies why he did't adopt the child..is brilliant...

I just loved it... lovely it was! <3

"Heartbeat Rose, Everything fell silent.
Heartbeats FELL...
HE DIED...
SHE DIED...
SANDHIR DIED...

HE WAS BORN...
SHE WAS BORN... "

----WOw! Such beautiful lines ... Awesome...

Thank U Anu SIsi :* 🤗 for giving us such a brilliant Story to read..

Love U <3 :*

(P.s:Sisi i loved the Ahem ahem part ;) u told me to come here at first.. but what to do... meri net ne mujhe dhoka de diya )

Originally posted by: -Isabella-

Moi abhi tak padha nai LIKE kar diya 😃 😃

RES

Originally posted by: Archisma

Update soon