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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#251

i loved it

u should write epilogue for this for closing to a smooth end

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Awesome ending

Arnav let go his Khushi to make her happy by suppressing his love

Khushi found her true love and got her love in her way

True Love Never Fails...

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Wow sch a beautiful story
Loved it 😊

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

ITS a very diff story.in d beginning itself Arhi getting separated.Khushi shyam as lovers.Anjali as a psycho.Arnav lusting Lavanya.Arnavcalling Anjali chot n madhumati as khushi's dance teacher.Arnav has a sincere mom.loved d changes u made.loved arnav changing 2wards khushi after forcefully getting married 2 her.he mu khushi n hurt her.but being guilty he consoled her,was willing 2 remove her pain.Khushi realized that only arnav will b there 4 her.loved khushi's portrayal as a kathak dancer.rly liked it.loved how u added humdard song.

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

wow..loved it..thanks for the PM...very well written story and the emotions were written out beautifully...😊

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#256

Shyam is a sweet charac here.So I pity him 4 losing his luv.this is d end of d story.Still I hope that shyam finds a nice partner soon n I wonder where lavanya is.

Avni is such a strong lady.se luvs khushi like her own daughter n exposed her own daughter Anjali.Anjali's suicide was a shock.realizing d truth being guilty Arnav decides 2 reunite shyam khushi which makes khushi realize his luv 4 her n she falls 4 him.Khushi declaring her luv 4 him in d last scene was adorable.

this was a nice part:"Because I love you.Arnav ji. I will die, if I have to live without you."

"I love you too. I was living like a dead without you."

Shyam is a sweet charac here.So I pity him 4 losing his luv.this is d end of d story.Still I hope that shyam finds a nice partner soon n I wonder where lavanya is.