Arshi FF : Family! Thread# 2 link on PG 1

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-Zesty-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
An interesting start but a word of suggestion, the continued italics for 'he' etc for the son seemed a tad bit overdone :)

Oh...Actually thats to differentiate between Arnav's he and Aryan's he ... normally I dont do that😆

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover

Oh...Actually thats to differentiate between Arnav's he and Aryan's he ... normally I dont do that😆

Oh okay but I think it would have become clear regardless after the first instance but your call obviously :)

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yeshyeshna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

nice part

khushi is a lecturer & arnav is 40

he has a son of 13 yrs old

what happened in the past??

will aryan accept khushi??

waiting for next part😊

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shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Arnav is 40 and has a 13 year old son... interesting..

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arnshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

interesting start...let see how you shape up this plot.

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow ...bring it on..look like both father and son needed some khushi

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Omg arnav is 40 years old and dating a college girl cum lecturer.
Woah they will marry soon.
Does khushi's parent know it and accept arnav?
Well arnav has a 13 year old son and seems not happy with his father's life.
Will he accept khushi as his mother?
But where is arnav's wife?is she dead or divorced or eloped with some one!
Waiting for its continuation chapters.

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Sweety012345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

nice concept. eager to know Asr's past

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-UnknownSoul-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome start shona!
You know what? This reminded me of Myrah and Rudra don't know why. Maybe because arnav has a son and he's much older than Khushi.

Really love the concept! Aryan is against the marriage?
Awwh :(

Continue soon!! This is very interesting.
Thanks alot for the PM.

PS: I will unres my comment on Junoon ASAP. I forgot about my res there.