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mitisha1998

@mitisha1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

I'm totally in love with the update

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Love this update! Continue soon

Edited by pooja123456 - 11 years ago

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dvrushu

@dvrushu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

loved this part...:😊
brilliantly written...👏
loved how they were trying to explain sharon everything about past 3 yrs...
shocked swayam😭...confused n messed up sharon...
want to know now how swayam will react...n wht he will do to bring his sharon back..😊

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

wow what an update
BT Sharon lost her memory
my poor swayam
n this is a big thing for her too
update soon n do pm m

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

res

unresing

it was an interesting update

sharon regains consciousness n

she thinks swayam is still a weakling

, having lost all memories of the past few years

tat area was very well penned

the way the gang bombarded her wit the news

about swayam being her boyfrn

which she finds it overwhelming and bursts out in anger,

her reaction was so natural n apt

i hav to say tis shristi thinking abt a scene n writing a emotion

in b/w are two completely different things

itni clarity in a scene n gauging everybody's reaction

so correctly whtr it be a shocked gang or a hurt swayam

or rey always trying to mend things in b/w them

was very well penned

it all comes down to a ''moment of impact'' in our life

A moment of impact whose potential for change

has ripple effects far beyond what we can predict.

Sending some pictures crashing together,

making them closer than before.

While sending others,

spinning off into great ventures,

landing where you never thought you'd find them

cleary tis goes wit swayam n sharon too

waiting for ur next update

ps dont be sry but do try to make a vm if possible 😛

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

so sharon forgot her clg Life... nd swayam too... nooo...plz... bt she felt sad after that ... update soon.. thanks 4 d pm

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

brilliantly written...👏

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

What a brilliant superb update, the way you described the old Sharon how she snapped at all of her friends (Weaklings) and thinking it as a prank and not trying to accept this she is really back to her old self but what would happen next is the thing which is making me more curious and I think it's gonna be a perfect blast for the next updates that how will Swayam make Sharon fall in love with him again or convince her that she is in love with him

Great update (Writing it again xD)

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

nice one dear ..read first time ..great ...keep writing ...

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

amazing update dear... & i m veryyy excited to knw further story. love d way u pen d whole thing... its amazing.. Monster is 1 of my hot fav. & its so apt. plz update soon

p.s- frienszoned v update kar plzzz
sorry for being demanding. bt dnt blame me. u hv made me greedy. 😛

God bless... keep writing ❤️

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