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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi friends i hope you all are doing well .Today i am here for special os "Rakhi" which i specially wrote for my Raj-Naina fans as i was missing my couple a lot and as it was Rakhi yesterday so here i am .I hope you like it .

Subhe ke 6 baaj rahe the Naina har rooz ke tara kitchen mein sab ke liye breakfast bana rahe the jab koi aake uske kamar pe aapna haath rakhta haai .Naina jisse pata tha ke yeh uske patidev yaani humare Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ke sivaye aur koi nahin ho sakta uske haath ko aapne kamar par se haatate hue kahete haai "Mere pyaare Patidev jee mujhe pata haai ke aap is waqt bohot he romantic mood mein haai par kya haai humare jo Major sahab haai unhein 6:30 baaje duty pe jaana haai aur unkein jo do chotte chotte shaintan bacche haai unehin school so if you don't mind can you continue your romantic lovey dovey session later i have to prepare breakfast for them "

Raj jis se kaan Naina ke baat sun sun ke paak chuke the aaj uske yeh baat sun ke usse jaise ek dam se gussa aa jaata haai woh Naina ko aapne taraff turn karte hue uske haatho se aata ke thaali ko side mein rkahte hue aapne strict tone mein kaheta haai "Captain Shekhawat i know you are a very obidient housewife but i must say you are really bad in terms of dates aaj naa toh aapke Mojor sahab ke Duty haai aur naa he aapke baccho ke school aaj Sunday so (he bringing his face close to her )we have enough time to romance "

Naina jo ke hamesha Rajveer ke pyaar se sammne aapna sab gussa bhul jaate haai aaj bhi uske yeh baaten sunke she just couldn't control herself she forgetting everything hugs him tightly.

Rajveer jisne sayed he zindage mein Naina ke sivaye kuch chaha haai aaj bhi usse aapne bahon mein paake aapna har dukh har dard jo usne aapne zindage mein paaya haai sab bhul jaata haai he kissing her passionetly says "You know Naina agar tum mere zindage mein nahin aaye hote naa toh pata nahin main kaise jee paata main toh but before he could say anything further Naina who too love Rajveer like anything and consider him to be the most precious gift god has gifted her keeping her palm on his mouth says

"Kaise naa aaye hote agar aap greenland bhi chale jaate naa tab bhi main aapko dhudhe hue waha bhi aa jaate you are only mine "

Rajveer who likes this possessiveness of Naina pulling her more on him says "toh phir ek kiss do naa jaan "

Naina who can never say no to his mentor his love Rajveer was about to fulfill his wish when their lil naughty kids Kaya and Naveen comes there

Kaya-mama papa aap dono kya kar rahe hoo?

Rajveer whose life resides in them taking her in his arms says

"nothing baby papa was just checking aapke mama ne brush kiya ya nahin

Naveen -why papa mama don't brush her teeth?

Now before Rajveer could say anything more Naina to change the topic unhein dinning table pe wait karne ke liye kahe ke breakfast bannane laagte haai

After preparing a good and yummy breakfast when Naina comes there she finds them busy playing .Naina for whom its a usual view serving them their food was about to feed Kaya when she stopping her says "Mama aaj toh Rakhi haai so where is my rakhi i wants to tie bhaiya?"

Naina jis ke zindage mein Rakhi ek ahem hissa rakhta haai aaj aapne 4 saal ke beti ko aaj din ko yaad rakhte dekh usse bohot khushi hote haai she kissing her forhead says"off course Baby mama ko yaad haai you just wait here mama abhie aapka Rakhi leeker aati haai

Naina gave rakhi to Kaya.Kaya who loves this rakhi festival very much tieing it on her brother Naveen's wrist asks him for her gift.Naveen who was already prepared with it gave her her gift.

Though they all enjoyed the day to their fullest but somehow deep inside Rajveer knew that Naina wasn't happy as she was missing her brother every moment so to heal her pain to make her happy he after making their kids sleep took Naina to Point 1857

Nainarc=(surprised)Raj aap mujhe yahaan kun leeker aaye haai aaj valentine day thore naa haai?(actually every year on Vday they come here to celebrate it )

Rajveer( hugging her from back)i know jaan that today is not v-day but as you know yeh place naveen mujhe aur tumhein jori rakhte haai toh i wanted you to celebrate your Rakhi here

Naina who got touched by his words hugging him says- Aap hamesha mujhe kahete ho naa ke aap bohot lucky ho jo aapko main mile hu par sach toh yeh haai ke main lucky jo mujhe pati ke roop aap jaisa ek insan mila haai jo sirf mera pati he nahin balke mere bhaiya ke sab se aache dost aur mere mentor haai thanks Rajveer for coming into my life and making it so beautiful i i but before she could complete her sentence Rajveer who cant see tears in Naina's eyes stopping her says"uff Naina tumhe naa Captainship chor ke hindi serial mein kaam karna chaheye jab dekho ganga jhamuna bahane ke liye taaiyaar rahete hoo itne maahenat kar ke tumhe yahaan leeker aaya aur tum ho ke jaao jaake aapne bhaiya ko rakhi pahenao warna woh sach mein mujhse gussa ho jaayega "

Naina jaaha jaake Wishing pillar ke neeche candels jhalake aapne Bhaiya ke yaad mein pray karte haai usse hamesha uske rakhsa karne ke liye kahete haai wohi Rajveer who was seeing all this maan he maan aapne best friend cum saale saheb se thank u kaheta haai for sending Naina in his life.

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 11 years ago

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful OS..I liked it.Thanks for the PM Ria..

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

I've no words.it was so touching n beautiful.yest i felt like reading ur ff update.i thot of asking u 2 update.then i thot no need.if u were free u wud've updated bandhan.but 2day u surprised me by giving a sweet os.tho its a rakhi os,it has raj naina's romance in d background.their conversation was so natural.loved kaya naveen as kids.nice pics too.raj telling d kids that he was checking whether naina had brushed or not was damn funny.loved kaya naveen's celebration.poor naina.she lost her bro.but raj took her 2 their special place 2 refresh d memories related 2 her bro.she prayed 4 her late bro.it was such an emotional scene.lovely os