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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a lovely update it was !
the first quote gave me positive hopes!
Arnav proved once again that he is real man!
I never expected him act like this!
I m very happy to see that!
He has accepted adarah already!?! If I'm not wrong!
Only he can do that!
It's not easy accept a child so easily :(
He asked her to win him back :O
OMG eeeks that's best thing about the update!
I feel the old ASR is back and I can't wait to read more of him!
I so so sooo excited to know what's gonna happen next :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
I guess she is going to win him awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
Owww...Win me...sounds so nice to hear it from arnav..I wish I could say the same someday!!hell,To whom?who in their right form of mind does that for me?(yay I'm coping ur line!!)...loved the little arnav and baby pic part sooo much... Dear arnav,don't worry about baby not accepting u.not liking u???seriously who in their right form of mind do that???lolz...I'm in love with this particular line Di...time for some tough love!!my mind is all to the gutter way..well let's not say aloud my thoughts..and U,poor arnav said...".detests touch..even mine"...hey don't think so.. She is sick yarr..only u can make her right.. Gear up for that misson.detests ur touch?hell,who in their right form of mind does that??? Hahaha...definitely not me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...omg...I m speechless... laughing like crazy...such a long time girl... I can finally see my valiant knight couple.. funny crazy romantic arshi... awww... m really curious how will khushi make arnav once again her s...awesome gift for us on my barun birthday... thank you so much deeps...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

THE DYNAMICS OF THEIR RELATION CHANGED IN A NIGHT...wow... loved it ...

The wheel of our life is still in your hands, only difference, this time I will nudge you to drive in the right direction to become US and not I & You. ...wah wah wah tooo good deeps

wow thats an awesome update...such a peaceful update...like finally having calm after the storm...like reform works going to start now...like happy sun shine out right there in clear sky :)
song yaad araha hay deeps right now...

chup tum raho chup hum rahain
khamoshi ko khamoshi sey
zindagi ko zindagi sey
baat kerney doo

Although it was crystal clear from day one that both sharing eternal love...but right now seeing arnav intense care towards khushi...the way he spent whole night cleaning her up ..ufff and wow...beautiful...kiya cheez hay pyaar bhee ... how absolutely amazing it feels when u love someone and they love u back...when u only want to be with them,just being together,and they want to be with u :)...my heart is feeling only love after reading the chap...every sign every move only taking one direction...LOVE...arnav proved to be real man indeed,he has shown real man in himself , loved his all care and concern

loved the way arnav believe in anajli...and shared his all concerns regarding khushi with her...loved the way she taking care of her both roles...sister and being doctor ...how beautifully she explains all...keeping in mind her brother feelings too :), wow doc i mean deeps awesome...i loved when in the end he was at ease that she going to be fine the lil bro sis light chit chat on bhabi...and his ,melodrama...awesome :)...deeps u r fantastic yaaar...u always able to brought out importance of every relation equally :)...and i loved that side of u :)

hahah ooowww wt the f...hahaha...sorry sorry arnav i am not laughing at u...but the scene written classically bringing out laughters :)...

aweee loved the way u have started khushi scene girl...she unknown abt her surroundings ...started her day chit chatting with her son...so sweet...and loved it even more...how beautifully arnav placed the pics same to same ...in his own room like her :)...he is gem...
the ambiance of room ...her fears...the way she checkout her clothes first ...ufff very touchy...hilarious lamp...lets go out some day and shop for it deeps...lol...loved it...poor arnie hit by that hanging man lamp...and the way he fell down in her feet...awesome piece of writing deeps...seems i was seeing that all live :)...u dont have to apologise...and his excuse me...hilarious...

but loved his concern next moment...khushi how r u feeling now ...awee so sweet arnav...she sorry and touching his wound ...so beautifully written deeps...and the moment she realised the touch ...her mind creating distance between...he noticing all with smile...but obviously he cant let khushi think any sort of pity thing...so he back in bossy mode...loved it ...wondering cut on my forehead or ur finger...u hissed instead of me...so sweet...:)...i pat myself for not putting any deadly weapon...lol...hilarious...perfectly blended in emotions,care,and humour :)

My goodness her clothes in wardrobe...things set...he placing the pics back without asking any thing...too good...he has learnt his lesson damn well...not at all questioning her at alll...fantastic...seeing her weak form...he telling her to come with me...giving her the water sugar plus salt one...loved the way he took few gulps ...just to bring her at peace...uff and wow...

i was not doubting...and his words...too good..Believe me, I understand that part of our life very well. I have no questions to ask to which you have to think twice to answer. He stared at her meaningfully before turning away to prepare breakfast for her...awesome deeps...

i didnt brush...lovely :)...enjoyed it loads...the good memories ...but obviously again he caring enough abt her didnt wanted to bring that now...awesome arnav

he knows she going to ask many questions...its beauty how well he knows her :)..time for some tough love,mrs kuhsi singh raizada...lol...loved this line deeps :)

i loved the flash back when he went to her house...and packed her things...and then his eyes landed on both the pics...bringing smile to his face by seeing his pic and the lovely time he spent with adarsh pic...wow...he loves the baby loads :)...its written fantastic deeps...his love towards baby proves that dil keh rishtay khoon keh rishtoon say berdh ker hotay hain :)...it is not flesh and blood but heart who makes a relation...u have written it beautiful deeps...it seems to me...for me he collects moments not the pics :)...


loved our tigress back with questions once again...loved the way he make the breakfast..asked her to come :)...and the silent moments between :)...

its good arnav opening up with her on yesterday event...its great he is making her at ease on that topic...but obviously again he is waiting for her to share or open up...i loved his scared?...too good...one word very deep in meaning

knowing her so well...he gave her a week challenge :)...khushi will die under pity or sympathy...he knows that ...ufff and wow...win me khushi...ufff ufff ufff :)...loved it...stay close to me...in this house...

u know the most beautiful things in this world cant be touch or seen it can only be felt by heart ...arnav khushi back ...i have read somewhere that a rainbow needs both sun and rain to make its colour...:)...time to see rainbow i guess :)

the way he is taking care of every thing abt her so minutely ...it shows his strength indeed ...he is strong ...he is brave...he is going to make difference in her life...

recipe for love 1 cup of care, 1 cup of sharing...1 pinch of humour...1 cup of romance...3/4 cup of patience...lol...he going to rock,special tip for arnie baby ...and u rock always...love u...:)




Di.. your recipe for Love is too good... I will definitely try to make it.. You know right.. I like trying new recipes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome... the story is going just PERFECT.

after all those dark phase in their life, finally we can see some light started coming.
Arnav finally agreeing n asking her to win him n make him hers giving one week time but deep down he wants that.

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow the valiant knight! beautiful update
thanks for pm xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Deeps for the feed back. Can't express much in words about how good your story/stories are. Some situations the way you present them are emotional, realistic and too heartwarming. I know we have a lot more to see between these as to their past. Which is going to make us cry further. But at-least we will see them finally get a closure and move ahead in life to be together for a happily ever after as much as life can offer.

Truly 👏 take a bow for the way you put them down in words.
Edited by inamajar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter. Eagerly waiting for the revelation chapter. Can't wait for it.

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