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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR


nhi res nhi update dirct...
ab toh waese b mosquitoes😡 ne bht pee liya mera khoon..
ntwrk k chkr mai asi 3rd floor pe hon ghr k..

main bhi wahi chati hun shah(dnt know ur name) par deepu tho hamesha res karne ke badh hi updt dethi hai... dekha res kiya humari deepu ne...ab tum bhi res kar lo
Edited by diyadivya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am starting to write my comment now..Deepu.. You know... I have to read it again..to comment... taking deep breaths before going to take the same roller coaster which I just survived...In and out ... in and out.. Ok I am ready... 1.. 2.. 3.. start... 🤢... A big sigh...

You know Deepu.. going on an adventurous ride without knowing how scary it will be... is very easy.. but after experiencing the sheer torture of the ride... and taking the risk of riding it again is really adventurous.. And I am doing that now... Reading again... knowing how painful it will be. Ok.. Now I am truly ready... Oh no.. Ok.. relax...




Deepu... After reading the MU... I am speechless... I know I stocked up the tissues.. But I didn't use them.. Deepu.. You know why.. The way you described everything today... is so emotional.. but still it gave some happiness because your words and your characters gave the hope that the time for clearing the clouds is coming. Although it brings lot of pain with it... the hope of them getting together made me feel relaxed... Hope.. is what made me to survive all through the update.

When I started reading... the light start you gave... I chuckled thinking.. how well you plan the emotional ride.. exactly like how the roller coaster goes... first it starts smoothly with a push for sometime.. I just felt that smooth ride.. with Payal, my Aman's sankiness and Anjali.

All the way Aman's reaction about adopting is very realistic. And the way he understood his wife is awesome.

How he understood that she is doing it .. to come out of self pity.. although she has more reasons
for the decision to adopt...

And Nani literally nailed by telling them only to adopt the child if they want to give the child princely treatment...

Deepu.. I literally stopped typing the comment and sustained reading the update... I couldn't stop myself...


Oh man.. deepu.. i am not in the right state of mind.. after reading this update... again.. I think I won't able to do justice with my words to express how I am feeling right now.. and I really believe I won't do justice with my words for what you wrote in this update...

Only one thing I can say is... How can anyone love someone like that... That's the question its bothering me since I read it. She loved him so much that she masked herself and her torment and smiled for him to find him for himself and in the process she is searching herself in him. And he loved her so much that he completely forgot about his resolve to make her understand she is not worthy for him, and went searching for her.. and found her and broken down more with her seeing her in that tormented state. And He understood the reasons of her leaving him.. again without any words coming out of her mouth.

Does this kind of Love exists in reality...

I wanted to write so much Deepu... but.. I am speechless.. and numbed... This is really outstanding... Although I was prepared for an emotional ride... I didn't expect this intensity... and as always you surprised me. trust me I am not crying.. But I am out of words...

Really deepu.. You deserve a standing ovation and 👏.. and all the praises in this world exists... for the outstanding work you have done here... You just touched my heart and twisted it.. so much that it winced by feeling the pain of Arnav and Khushi.

And now my expression same as


And my words are ditching me.. to come out... I need break...

You are an awesome writer Deepu.. really brilliantly awesome...

I don't know how I will survive until the next update comes...
Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finalyyy aagayi mom...
love u n post soon
baki ka res
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is so heart-breaking deepthi. I dont know how u came up with words since it is v.difficult to portray the way khushi feels or shld I say every woman there out in this world who has undergone this cruelty. And regarding arnav I know I ve askd this many times but still is there really a man out there like him in this world and love like this??!! A gesture of wiping out the bitter liquid talks millions of words abt him and unconscious crying khushi states her pain.
Anjali feeling like adopting the child is good and also as she mentions only if every member of the family agrees to it is psbl. I really pray to God not to give any girl or woman the state of khushi and if they ve faced shld get a man like arnav. It was a very emotional chapter and hats off to u for this wonderful story. 👏
Edited by kaprasin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diyadivya

main bhi wahi chati hun shah(dnt know ur name) par deepu tho hamesha res karne ke badh hi updt dethi hai... dekha res kiya humari deepu ne...ab tum bhi res kar lo


kr diyaa res aur corct tym pe ntwrk gaya meraa... isss ntwrk ko thok daalney ka mann kr raha hai meraa
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR


kr diyaa res aur corct tym pe ntwrk gaya meraa... isss ntwrk ko thok daalney ka mann kr raha hai meraa

thok daalney ka mann kr raha hoga par tum kar nahi sakti... majboori jo hai...warna maha updt kaise padogi!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏res...

arey lala di...kya hua aajj...:(


ruladiiyaaa..haaan...next update se we will see posy cared by BW...

ek sooki reeth(Khushi) mein ekkk paaani ki boon tapak pada usi reeth ke liye...
iss sentence sach hoga next update mein...i wish...😳😳😳
😭
Edited by indhuza - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
level of my eagerness for the mahaupdate:

to catch the update and res.. i cookd eveng meals by 6.. for family who eat by 10... poor my family just coz of my craziness have to eat early...

Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indhuza



arey lala di...kya hua aajj...:(


eagerness of readers interrupted Lala dii.. and i really felt 😭😭 its really unfair...

I wonder how Deepu dii must have managed to res.. cont. 3 spaces

Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR


kr diyaa res aur corct tym pe ntwrk gaya meraa... isss ntwrk ko thok daalney ka mann kr raha hai meraa

regarding my name.. Deepu Mom announced me as officialy MRS.ASR..
i m daughter of Deepu Mom...
Bhaanji of Lala Maasi..
DIL of K mom...
they call me with different names sometym my original pet name sair, angel, smyle n yes kamal ki lardki specialy by Lala

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