Love makes life beautiful-SanDhir SS(Parts-16 Updt,Thank u,Imp note)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Guys,I
am Priya.


This forum
has plenty of talented and amazing writers,i am nervous to post my story in
this forum,because i am not that good at writing.So,help this amateur improve.Maine
previously bhi stories likhi,but this is the first time i am writing a story on
Sandhir.


I am a huge fan of Sandhir/Parsh.Both are
amazing actors.Love them.


So,here i
am with my first work on our Sandhir.Hope you all will like it.


Prologue:


On,the
last day of college Randhir Proposed Sanyukta and she accepted it,because she too
loves him unconditionally.Sanyukta and Randhir had completed their
graduation,presently they both are working in 2 different MNCs.They both are
successful in their respective careers.Their bond grew even more stronger with
each passing day.It has been three years since Sanyu and Randhir got into a
relationship.They both are really happy.It is their unconditional love for each
other that made their lives beautiful and complete.So,get ready my friends for
this beautiful journey of love.

Guys,this is the prologue.Should i continue the story or not?Kindly let me know.


P.S.I Know guys it's not dat good.Criticism is welcomed.I accept chappals,tomatoes but not eggs because i am pure vegetarian.😆

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Lots of
love.

Priya.


INDEX:-

Part 1:-Pg:1

Pt 2-pg:3

Pt 3-Pg:5

Pt 4-Pg:6

Pt 5-Pg:7

Pts 6&7-Pg:10

Pts 8&9-Pg:13

Pt 10-Pg:16

Pt 11,12,13-Pg:19

Pts 14&15-Pg:21

Pt 16-Pg:24



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya🤗
Omgee love,u also love Sandhir
A big hug to u
I missed u so much
and I am so happy that we again met in this forum😳
And omgee A new Story from You
I am super duper excited

love the prologue👏
can't wait to read more
so plz continue soon
Take care

Lots and Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

soo lovely concept...plz continue...


Thankyou sooo much.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Priya🤗

Omgee love,u also love Sandhir
A big hug to u
I missed u so much
and I am so happy that we again met in this forum😳
And omgee A new Story from You
I am super duper excited

love the prologue👏
can't wait to read more
so plz continue soon
Take care

Lots and Lots of Love
Geet


Geetu.🤗🤗
Yes sweets,me too loves Sandhir.
Missed you too.
I am also very very happy that we again met in this forum.😃😳
Thankyou sooo much sweets.
I will update part-1 in the evening.
Love ya loads and loads.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rhymes

It's interesting. .pls continue


Thankyou sooo much.😃
Edited by priya1101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys,here is Part-1.No,Proof reading has taken place.So,sorry in advance for the mistakes.

Sunday morning 9:00AM

Sanyukta and Randhir were sitting on the sofa and enjoying the morning tea and simultaneously chit-chatting.

Sanyu:I am feeling relaxed,bahut din hogaye aise peacefully tumhare saath baithe hue,warna 24*7 work pressure rehta tha.

Randhir:Yes Sanyu,tumne bilkul sach kaha,aaj i am free from work tension and i want to enjoy this day with you.Bahut din hogaye hum kahi bahar ghoomne bhi nahi gaye.

Sanyu:K,I have a plan.

Randhir:What's ur plan madam?

Sanyu:Plan yeh hain ki,hum raat ko bahar dinner karne chalte hain aur uske baad long drive pe chalte hain.What say?

Randhir:Sounds cool,waise bhi winter season hain,thandi thandi hawaye,romantic weather akele tum akele hum...and...he leaned forward and pecked her lips.Sanyu also responded to the kiss with equal passion,after few minutes they broke apart after realizing that they reached out of breath.

Sanyu's cheeks immediately turned into tomato red colour as she was blushing furiously.She hugged him tightly and asked "and and kya Randhir."

Randhir embraced her and whispered in her ears huskily...and...unlimited romance.

Sanyu playfully hitted him on his shoulder and said aaj koi bahut romantic mood mein hain lagta hain.

Randhir:Yeh sab aapki sangat ka asar hain.

Sanyu:woh toh hain,the credit goes to me.Afterall,i turned a Sadu Randhir into a romantic guy.

Randhir:He broke the hug and made her sit on his lap and said sach mein Sanyu,tum ne hi mujhe sayi maayne mein jeena sikhaya hain.U are my life.

Sanyu:Randhir woh...Randhir stopped her in the middle by placing a finger on her lips and said let me say this Sanyu,aaj mein bahut baatein bolna chahta hoon.I want to speak my heart out.

Sanyu motioned him to continue by blinking her eyelids and Randhir continued.

Randhir:You know what Sanyukta,tumhare aane se pehle i used to crave for care,love and affection in my life,jo mujhe bachpan se nahi mila,neither from parents nor from friends,but tumhare aane ke baad i never felt lonely,it will be more appropriate to say that u never made me feel lonely.Be it our fights,the way we compete with each other,challenge each other,taunting,teasing,motivating and finally the realisation that i fell in love with the same crazy girl,whom i thought as an enemy turned out to be my true soul-mate.Mein bhi kitna bewakoof tha na,yeh baat samajhne mein aur tumhe batane mein bahut der lagaya.You know na Sanyukta expressing feelings are not my cup of tea,and i used to be afraid that you will also leave me alone and go away,because whomever i loved left me and went away,i can't afford to loose you.Your love removed the voidness in my heart.I love you till and beyond eternity.

Tears started rolling down his cheeks,Sanyu's eyes were filled with tears too.She slowly raised her hand and wiped his tears.After that she planted a kiss on his forehead.Randhir also moved close and wiped her tears with his lips and hugged her.After few minutes,they both broke apart and got lost in each other's eyes.

Without breaking the eye contact,Sanyu cupped his face and said I am very lucky to have a person like you in my life Randhir,who loves me unconditionally.Your heart is so pure.For others,you might seem the arrogant jerk,but i know-the real you,Jab hum clg mein padhte the,tab se mein jaanti thi ki,there is something more than that meets the eye,as days passed by i understood that you are hiding ur real emotions behind the facade.U used to behave rudely,so that koi tumhare mann ki baat na pad paaye,but you know what Randhir,you failed in hiding ur emotions because your eyes are the mirror of your soul,whenever i used to look into your eyes,i used to see immense pain and loneliness.I wanted to take away all your pain then and there,mere dil ko bahut dard hota tha,mein jab bhi tumhe takleef mein dekhti thi to,I used to have a feeling to hug you and say that everything is going to be alright.U r not alone anymore.I am there for you and will always be there with you.I love you whole-heartedly.

After listening this,a smile crept on Randhir's face and Sanyu also smiled simultaneously.

Randhir leaned forward and gently pecked her lips.She then got down from his lap and went into the kitchen to Prepare breakfast.After half an hour,they both had breakfast and sat down to complete their office work.Few hours passed by and they completed their works.

Afternoon:1:30PM

As,Sanyu was little tired,Randhir helped her in preparing the lunch.They both prepared together and ate it.They went to the bed-room to sleep for few hours.Sanyu placed her head on Randhir's chest listening to his rhythemic heartbeats and Randhir placed her arms around her shoulder and holded her tightly,inhaling the aroma/cologne.After few minutes,they drifted off to sleep.

Evening:5:00PM

Sanyu and Randhir got ready.Randhir was looking hot in blue jeans and white shirt,As soon as Sanyu came out of the room,he was mesmerized by her beauty,she was looking stunning in a blue-coloured knee length gown,silver ear-rings,bracelet and her hair left freely and it was moving in accordance with the air.Randhir pulled her towards him by holding her wrist and she collided with his muscular chest and said ouch' aaram se Rannu.

But,he was not in a position to hear anything,he was totally lost in her beauty.He tucked her strands of hair behind her ear and said u r looking hot Sanyu and planted a kiss on her forehead.

Sanyu:Tum bhi bahut hot lag rahe ho,waise ek baat bolun white mein tum aur bhi smart lagte ho.

Randhir:Thanks for the compliment sweet-heart,ab chale.

Sanyu:As you say,my hero.

Sanyu grabbed her purse and Randhir took money,car keys and they both walked out of the house,hand in hand.They were about to lock the door when Randhir said oh shit i forgot my phone inside,do one thing,go and wait in the parking lot,i will come within few minutes.

Sanyu nodded her head and went away.

Randhir rushed inside the house and took the envelope placed in his cupboard.He thought in his mind"Kya yaar,tum sabse imp cheez bhool raha tha",He mentally slapped himself and went out of the house.He locked it and went to the parking lot.

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i am first . . Yipee nyc concept . . Love and romance in the air . . . And ya surprize too . . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelynanu

i am first . . Yipee nyc concept . . Love and romance in the air . . . And ya surprize too . . .


Thankyou sooo much,I will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankyou sooo much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Priya
Lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
plz pm me
Love
Bushra
🤗

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