NEW FF: Payback ~ Season 2 ~ Part 3 (23/09) - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
Is khushi responsible for arnav brothers dead!!
Maybe there is some misunderstanding..
Waiting to know..
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update ...
How khushi related to this death ... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
the story is too catchy.update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was marvelous chapter.
ha khushi was that girl who was the reason of the sorrow of rizadaz.
what is cooking in asr mind.
is she merried?
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
khushi must have some sort of affair with aditya
he must have betrayed her saying he is not married
when khushi get to know about this then she must have broken their relationship
and moved to london
if she is wrong then whe will never hate men
but as usual arnav will accuse her for his lost
and may be he will make her aravs mother too
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Posted: 11 years ago
I guess all this is related to Arnav, s dead brother..
May be reporter is correct that Aditya had an extra marital affair...
And khushi was oblivious of this fact :(((
May be!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This ASR scares me alot
damn
thx for de pm and plss continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
This sounds very promising concept and I look forward to another great story by you!!!!! What really got to me in this story is the sheer rage in ASR and Khushi too had built walls around herself and her heart. I am very curious to know what happened in the past.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awe poor kushi in for another heart break ...wicked start...keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sneak Peak of Part 2

The flame of the lighted Diya (lamp) was burning his palm but he kept looking at the Devi Maiyaa idol, not bothered of this pain. The Priest was very concerned for him who was noticing this from past few seconds.

Priest: Beta, you will burn your hand. Why are you doing this?

Arnav: Preparing myself for a Sin I am going to commit Panditji. Its necessary to remind my body that no pain is ever going to stop me until I finish this Payback.

The Priest was baffled. Arnav Singh Raizada's words were above his head. Suddenly the flame blew off freeing Arnav out of this pain. Gust of wind was blowing high in the vicinity of this temple which was the reason for the flame to blow off. He didnt knew what this sign meant in his life, in his motive. Suddenly two hands passed a Puja thali from beside him towards the Panditji for offering their prayers to the Devi Maiyaa. His eyes involuntarily turned to see her. She had covered her head with the Dupatta, her eyes closed and palms joined to worship. Arnav felt a kind of pull towards her which till now he never had for anyone. The Priest offered the contents of the Puja Thali to the Idol and then came back to her.

Panditji: Bitiya, whose name should I make this offering from ?

Khushi: My name Panditji.. Khushi Gupta.

The name itself got thousands of nerves excited in Arnav Singh Raizada. He tightened his fist, holding himself from doing anything unnecessary at this moment. It was such an irony that they both were standing before God, he asking for strength to destroy her whereas she was wishing for happiness and prosperity. Now it was in the hands of Devi Maiyya to fulfil the prayers of just one of them, and only time would decide whose..!!

Edited by tintin_ruble - 11 years ago

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