arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19 - Page 19

Originally posted by: aarwen

Your swooning has made me swoon.. what the? ASR from my story made you do that Indi di?

There is an ASR part of me that says don't care, but the Khushi in me feels a little disappointed at times when I don't see a lot of people reading the story I feel like telling. But you are here Indi di and saying such giggle worthy things and that makes me very happy. Specially coming from you a compliment on my writing means a lot. So thank you 😳

I hate interference of any kind.. but the ladies of IPK are a force to reckon with.. have to intervene in everything 😆

Sure we like clever rebellious Khushi.. You never know she just might end up dragging laad governor himself or just as likely may order him to wear that seatbelt..

Okay now I have to write that into the next chapter.. hehehe..

I know fanfic isn't your thing, but still you make it a point to come.. Thank you so much di.. you made my day.. 🤗

Originally posted by: indi52

have not read the new chapter yet... i read because i want to... nooot because my fellow blast girl writes it.

we are all asrs ha ha.

but now woh gulabi line pe gaur karein.

there seems to be a way of attracting readers to your stories. i have not advertised my stories ever... so i have very few readers. i don't get too hassled, though yeah, i do thing without you could be and would be enjoyed by more people. even ncofl.

please just go and advertise your story wherever you can. facebook, other threads... there are threads devoted to listing fan fic, maybe you should get in touch with the tm and suggest you story. or just pm more people, say you are writing a new fan fic... come and see.

i am saying all that because i think you have a very enjoyable story to tell... and you write well, with a style of your own. always precious i think that style bit is.

so please get into asr mode and do your thing, sir. i will put your kahani's name on my updates... some of my readers are actually there thanks to omoraboti who recommended my stories to them... i didn't ask her to, she decided to. ha ha she doesn't read though... i think writers find it a little disorienting to read about the characters they themselves write about... or whatever.

Originally posted by: indi52

thought i read 4 earlier, anyway read once more...

enjoyed the missing.

5... oooph she put on his seatbelt. i had dhakdhak just thinking of the scene. our asr must have passed out... he is feeling happy awww... even though she thought he was the tailor... loved that look the number you have dialled.

and they both knew they would reach each other in that rain. rain ad asr khushi, something so inseparable. i feel like writing an os.

and bua ji collapsed with who running to save her... nk??? i am giggling... i always loved the "romance".

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish

😆😆 with NK's arrival things have really spiced up! and kushi and arnav are just useless. NK is the best and he and buaji , not a bad pair😉. and arnav and kushi are going to realize their love may be after they grow old😃. overall, a wonderful hilarious update just loved it

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy

Finally got the first place. *phew*

-Edit-
Thrilling update.
Even i felt a thrill in my bones after reading dis update.
Result of three brothers visiting Buaji's house-
NK has got a unwanted admirer and red cheeks by continuous pinching.
Akash gets inspired by Akshay Kumar to be a daredevil & got stung on his cheek as consequence.
Arnav got warm, thrilled, affected by khushi's proximity and overjoyed and happiness to know his effects on her. And ya how i can forget a green ASR and a green sari.
Buaji and gupta sisters didn't fared better.
buaji finally got her nandkishore.
payal had a window and bee rendevous wid her shy yet romantic akashji.
Sankadevi got her acidity and dhak-dhak back, green sari from her rakhsha- er Rajkumar, scolding for not eating and finally being fed by her laadgovernor.

and we will finally get Teri meri...