ARSHI SS: Veiled Hearts ~ COMPLETED (16/11)

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#581

That was amazing story aftr reading this can learn many thing about ur religion tanx for sharing

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#582

Wonderful epilogue.

You have covered the moment of their marriage and their life after marriage perfectly in one shot.

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

awesome. ..loved it...
ur description about every thing was outstanding. .
perfect ending for this beautiful story. .. ..

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Gayuraj

@Gayuraj

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

amazing story...
perfectly writtten...with a beautiful ending...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Beautiful chapter and perfect ending.

Lived everything you write.

Bidai part was very emotional when Khushi was not ready to leave her fathers hand . Got tears in my eyes.

In the end Khushi changed arnav totally.

Loved this story.

Thanks for update and pm.

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

it was a lovely story...

i really loved it a lot...

now its end...😭

epilogue was superb...

the way u write marriage , bidai, first night, walima...

it was amazing.,,,,,

arnav and khushi married in proper Islamic way...

their life blissful...

they have their beautiful future ahead...

i will miss this ss...😭

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

MashAllah Zaara..this is one of the most beaaaufifuk stories i hv read havin a muslim background besides pak shows..u srslly got tears in my eyes ..Islam..the Quran..Allah..arnav khushi..familyy..everythinng :')

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YusLiz

@YusLiz

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Assalamualaikum Zara!

What can I say but Mashallah, you've written a beautiful and magical story. As a Muslimah, I'm in awe at how beautifully you've explained the true meaning of Islam without it sounding too preachy (some might say). I've never been so overwhelmed at the beauty of it all especially the pureness of marriage. We all have been busy buying into all the fairytales, romance, grandeur from influences around us but you've manage to break it down to how simple and the true meaning of marriage.

The world you've created makes me want to live in it. There's plenty of times you've made me close to tears due to happiness but especially the beauty of Islam which makes me hide my face with shame.

How can I finally describe this story in one word ... BEAUTIFUL! you've noticed me using that word several times because it is. Thank you for creating such a pure, enjoyable and educational story. Keep up your amazing work!

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#589

Simply fabulous... loved this story...
One of my favorite now...
Beautifully written...
Literally fell in love with this story...
Changed my perspective of seeing many things...
It was a different experience overall...
It was so simple, serene n pure...
Thanx dear for writing n sharing such a beautiful work with us...

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#590

I loved the story. ..the wedding was simple and beautiful. ..inspite of me havin attended a few if my friends weddings i never knew the messages and the ceremony. ...thank you for that...