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just4this

@just4this

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

loved ur story . i am glad that i came across ur story . ur a fab writer

pls keep up the good work . thank u for wonderful story

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Aishaqaiser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

First things first...great round of applause...it had been wonderful journey!!!
Story very close to real life...no unnecessary and unrealistic sacrifices bt pragmatism ws truly dominant...totally loved it!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

wonderful update

beautifully written

loved it

thanks for the pm

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premdewaani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Wow superb update dear!!! Loved it:-))

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

you win some and you loose some...hopefully payal and akash move on with their life..thank you for a wonderful story

Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Awww what a wonderful ending. Akashs decision was a surprise but I suppose it was the best for them both.

Than you for the pm of this ff. really enjoyed reading it. Will miss it. You are a very talented writer.

Will be waiting for the epilogue now

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ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

awww i'm so happy it all ended well... okay, at least on the way towards mending...

thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us, dear.

xoxo

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1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Awww its almost over!!

Amazing chapter! Amazing story! It was a pleasure to read this story. Thank you sooo much for taking the time out to write this beautiful tale and give us chapter after chapter. Looking forward to the last part!

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Arnav -Khushi : They are content , happy n are passionate about everythingin their life now.. Its absolutely wonderful seeing them like this.. ❤️

Shashi-Garima : Parents always wish the bestest for their kids n this couple is no different just as the resentment from the kids when the former advices things the latter dont like.. Guilt is something which is inevitable when the process of achieving your dream is delayed..only the parties of it changes.. Sigh..! I guess Thats the way of life.. Afteral its only the matter of time when one finally reaches the destination but at one point the journey becomes very tedious n Thats when we gotto rely on our bestie 'patience' n faith in reaching the goal.. 😊

Akash-Payal : Though I grudgingly agree with the state of their relationship... it hurts yaara, terribly at that! The pain of parting is no less than anything which we experience when our near or dear one dies.. In this case its like they are put on ventilator.. Recouping chances ate very slim but cant lose hope n at the same time the decision to end it are in our own hands...! Aur kya kahun main... 😔

All the 34 chapters on one hand n this particular one on the other hand.. Absolutely brilliant twiggy!!! 🤗

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 10 years ago

#360

Two smiles and a surprise is how I would sum up this chapter. The break from each other (although it wasn't technically a break) did good to both of them. For one, they discovered themselves individually, and secondly, the aphorism of 'Absence makes the heart grow fonder' (and the sex raunchier😉) proved to be true. Khushi's moment of hesitation did make me apprehensive, but it was Arnav's 'You and me are forever' that smoothed the ruffled feathers.

About Shashi and Garima, I had expected it to be in this manner. May be Shashi understands how the trip actually might have impacted his daughter, or maybe he is relieved that his decision is not going to cause him any regrets. But a mother's heart always worries. Sure, she shall come to understand it in the passage of time; right now, she will have to deal with some frustration and loads of worriment.

Now for the surprise. The way you portrayed it, a break up seemed to be the right thing. And considering the arguments that have strained their relationship in the past, it is understandable as well. But even so, I did not expect a breakup. Not because I'm a shipper of a happily ever after, but because it raises a big question. Do relationships end on the basis of a difference in the intensity of emotions towards one another. Do two people have to be on the same page for one to sustain. And then there is the cliched 'long term relationship' dilemma. I agree it is a different case for Akash and Payal, but if he hadn't reacted as violently to Payal's departure, would they still have said goodbye in the present. It makes you wonder then, if there is a perfect recipe to the existence and sustenance of relationship, and how much should one compromise, and whether personal life and professional aspirations can coexist.

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