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Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: vgedin

Wrong thread, Kishmish 😊

🤗 Sorry Twiggy ... the effects of lack of sleep ... 🤔

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Pdrover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Beautiful update

He realised then that there was nothing big and nothing small, nothing more significant than another, no truth bigger than another, no action above another. Everything had to come together to bring meaning into existence; there was no rainbow with only six colours.

Loved above paragraph

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arshisimple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

If I thought that the last chapter was your best one than I am so wrong and I am glad that I was wrong 👏.

I felt that the whole part was defining hope. Hope in completely different circumstances. Arnav was enjoying so much that one time he just thought of leaving everything behind and enjoy the beauty of nature Kanyakumari has to offer. But at the end, he was just hoping for better life for everyone including him. Khushi on the other hand seeing the ugliness of the life. She got to see what her dad wanted her to understand. And she is hoping for her project to get success, so that people in that village have some comfort in their lives. But the whole thing is again about hope.

I think the flower girl incident and Khushi's email are the highlights of this part for me.

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

superb update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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napk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Such a lovely update... Arnav is finally at peace and is ready to go to his family. I hope he comes back with Khushi some day.

Khushi has finally realized what her father has tried to indicate... I really hope their project is a success.

Such different situations and both got a chance to look at the world differently.

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inamajar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Loved this chapter.

The serene atmosphere on one side. Beautiful description of the days spent in Kanyakumari. At the same time praying for some hope where people want to move forward in life. The fear that promises that have not been met and a possibility it never will be.

Edited by inamajar - 10 years ago

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FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

wow!! Arnav's discovery of.. If i can put it as... Inner Peace was totally enthralling!! Splendid writing twiggy!! :D

I love Khushi all the more with this update! She is a strong , mature , understanding n a hugely compassionate ( on par with Arnav , ofcourse!) girl ...

This update reaffirmed my faith of Arnav-Khushi truely belonging to one another n r indeed made for each other.. ❤️

Edited by Ms.KKN - 10 years ago

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addictedx53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

A slice of life, or life as it should be maybe...this enjoyment of the peace which nature can provide you, this need to make somebody else's life more fulfilling. Maybe not at extreme ends of a diaspora, as a fruitful end would produce the same sort of peace in ones mind. One is for the self & the other for somebody else.

Did not expect to encounter philosophy in a love story, but thats the usp of you as a writer I think!

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NikitaM11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Loved the two chapters! I'm glad Arnav is finally able to let go all the tension, and finally feel at peace with himself!

Hope things get better for Khushi!

awesome chapters :)

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aquagal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#220

This was such a peaceful update though towards the end we got to see a different side of life. A side we come across in our life but are so busy to think about.
Vacations are a great stress buster, more so when they are not rushed. Hoping Khushi's hard work pays and she is successful in their set-up.
Lovely update Twiggy..

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