Seven Days to Woo Randhir Singh Shekhawat Thread 2 (SEQUEL UP!)

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Snehal

@karnikan_dmg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Last night read whole ff.. It is amazing... Eagrly waiting for its sequel

...i was afraid what will be his reaction knowing the trueth but u made it quite light... It was better than happy ending ..

I also going to read daddy hand today..

plz accept buddy request and pm me for ur ff plz

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anu_anya

@anu_anya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

lovely ending
waiting for sequel start asap :)))

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MeherS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Awesome yaar...i hv send u request plzzz pm me...

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

The sequel (Seven Days to Woo Sanyukta Agarwal):
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4134983/seven-days-to-woo-sanyukta-agarwal-chapter-6-page-52-feb-28-2016

I will reply to all of your comments later, I promise! <3

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Yay sequel

Awsme di:)

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Res for Chapter 16

Oh yes I'm serious when I say I will be commenting on each chapter individually 😎

Unres

HEY Safffi 😃

I love how she wants him to say I love you, despite being so confused herself.

My fav line - silly girl 😆

But damn... I was not expecting her to actually seduce him just so he would confess

I love it when she's so daring... Fighter Sanyu :D

Then the jealousy happened. It's honestly so cute to read :P

I love her insecurity. It's so real, esp the way you described it!

I loved how she was now starting to question how she would cope. Although this whole thing started with a challenge, she had forgotten about it and was genuinely concerned. Her vulnerability proves her feelings, not that they need to be proved, but regardless :P

Then the honesty of Randhir. He is adorable I have definitely been in love with other characters, but Randhir is one of a kind. 😳 And you just make him more lovable with your words, seriously! Amazing job with his characterization! 😃

This part was good, but I know next will be eeeveeennn bettteeerrr

Hehehee

once again "saari night besharmi ki heighttt" ☺️🤣

I'm gonna read the parts again so i can comment on them individually. So next reply will be... soon :P

Love yaaa

:* <3

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Chapter 17

Oh la laaa

Feisty Sanyu

Me likeyyy 😉

I've always maintained this.. I absolutely love and admire this daring Sanyu. Seeing her dominate makes my feminist side happy 😆 More than that, I love how neither one of them are over-powering each other. It's balanced, which is exactly what Farzi and MCP's relationship needs to be 😛

Her seduction was sexy enough to leave me confessing as well 😆
How do you do it Saffi? I have no words to describe how you can write such things without sounding cheap! Honestly it's a great attribute in your writing. I can see and feel the sensuality, yet I never feel repulsed by reading it :) You've done an absolutely amazing job with that :D

Getting back to the part. I love love love love LOOOVEEE her realization.

One of the best parts of this FF in my opinion. It was so well written! I can't even begin to put my feelings into words!

He said I Love You!! Omg raining tears here!!! :') Of happiness of course 😳

And then he told her the truth of the confession already technically happened 😆 Bichaari. Had to go through so much turmoil 😆

omg. okay im turning beetroot red... thank god i'm alone in my room ☺️

Loved this whole part! :D

On to the next one like a boss 😎

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Chapter 18

I love how they woke up 😳

#FutureDreams 😆

Morning breath. You know what, this is why I love your FF. you make everything so damn realistic that it raises my expectations from my future hone-waala-bf/pati 🤣

I blame you for it 😆😛

"With tongue" DAMN Randhir.. You go man 👍🏼 I love him.. love love love him, but I'm guessing you know that by now 😳

"Sliding her hand down"

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Looking in my head to find my mind, but too late, it already went in the gutter

☺️☺️☺️

Jeez, I kinda hate how much of an impact you have on my blood cells right now. stupid things won't leave my cheeks alone ☺️

phirse - all your fault 😆

Then came the protective Randhir I love how she doesn't take it any other way, but just accepts that he has the right to protect her. I feel that sentence is applicable even out of this context. But anyway, I'm not gonna indulge in such a tangent convo :P

Damn those LITS boys -_- Kudos to RD for including that section. I can just imagine how Sanyu must be feeling

SHIT That is a terrrible cliffhanger -___-

MAAR DAAALA

But regardless, it's a terrific cliffhanger 😆

As an (occasional) writer, I admire it.

As a reader, I absolutely loathe it.

🤣

Anyway, once again, awesome job Saffi!

Really loved it <3 <3

(Already read the part, but gonna be nice and say) Can't wait to read the next part! 😉

😆 Yea I know I'm losing it 🤪

And now I'm off to the next paaart :D

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Res for Chapter 19

Didn't want anyone to break my chain of comments 😃😆

And before the comment, I want to add a line of a song which may resemble my presence on this thread right now

Zaara dekho kaun aa gaya hai

Yeh thread pe jo chaa gaya haiii 🤣

I'm a genius.. I know xD

Okay, I had a small bowl of kheer. Maybe it's the sugar which is making me so hyper 😆

Anyway, now back to the original purpose of this comment

The part:

She found out :O

Okay scrap that shock. Yeh toh hona hi tha.. Itna drama karne ki zaroorat nahi hai mujhe 😆

But I wish she had told him herself :(

Knowing his past, she should have known that lying to him isn't the best thing to do. He already has trust issues. But anyway, it had to happen sooner or later.

I enjoyed the fighter Sanyu, as usual. How she was adamant on not losing him. How she was confessing her feelings to him. He deserved to know!

But when he said "You won" 🥺 My heart broke

I could just imagine how betrayed and heartbroken he must have felt. He loves her and trusted her so much, but she broke the trust... yet he loves her.

But then he went on "knew this was a game"

MAN I was right :O

And although Sanyu got angry, I do feel that she was at more fault than him.

But either way, none of them were right.

Nothing was genuine, except for their feelings. Okay no that's a stretch, but it just sounded so poetic to say 😆 The way they acted with each other might have been encouraged by the challenge (or the idea that something is up, in Randhir's case), but that was almost negligible after.

Sanyu was right though "would I have given my body to you like this?"

But then there's the aspect of her lying. He's hurt. And that makes it hard for her to justify herself.

And then came the Sherni with her attack!!!!!

"if she was wrong, then so was he"

#GirlPower 😆

And then comes the intro of the sequel 😃

What started with a scary intro, became an exciting part

Hehee

I know you already posted the prologue.

So now, the next comment shall be on there :D

Firstly, congratulations on finishing SDTWRSS (long name :O lol)

You've done such a fantastic job! I think you can tell by the length of my comments that I enjoyed the FF so much 😃

I won't miss it because I know it's being continued :D

So can't wait :D

Till then,

Muaaah :* <3

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mai kyun batau ;)

@raksbasu

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Oh My God !!!

It ended...That also so nicely😳...I was thinking too far that might be they broke up😕 but thank god and you that nothing such happened😊...The end was beautiful😳...eagerly waiting for sequel...