Seven Days to Woo Randhir Singh Shekhawat Thread 2 (SEQUEL UP!) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
Excited to see what will happen in morning when they wake up. .. specially sanyu. . Gosh can't wait update so on
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all parts in a goo...
omg!!!! i m sooo much addicted to ur ff...☺️
i just read this today...
i cant tell u it is sooo amazinggg...loved it...
u write sooo good...
m waiting plzzz update asap
do pm me whenever u update plzzz...
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it. but not in the state to comment ☺️
So reserved ☺️

Hey Saffi!
Sorry for the late comment. Hadn't forgotten about the reservation I made 😆 Just got busy with stuff

SOO. here goes my mature feedback to your mature part 😛
HAWT HAWT SMOKING HAW
My dil was doing this:


☺️ How do you manage to write such sexy parts without making it vulgar? Seriously, great job with the sensuality!

I love how she wanted him to keep his hand on her chest. He apologized when she made him realize that, but she wanted it! That was perfect! I like it when she speaks whats on her mind with him. It's symbolic of her trust and comfort level with him.

SHE TOUCHED HIM THERE

*dies over and over again*
I don't even know... I don't have words to say what I felt.
once again crossing heights of besharmi ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

"You know what's there right?"
🤣 Don't kill me. Man I could totally imagine Randhir saying that. BRILLIANT!! 😉
And then the next bit... "bigger" 😲 I can't believe I read that ☺️
It's supposed to.. OMGOMG.. mind going off in a very gutter-y direction ☺️☺️
I blame you! 😆

But my most fav part was when Randhir refused from having sex because he didn't want her to regret anything. That sums up Randhir so well. Caught up in all the hormones, he could've just agreed to it but he didn't. I love him because of that!
<3

And OMG he said I love you!
I think he will probably remember what happened considering he was in enough control of himself. So he will also remember that she said I love you. I hope when he finds out about the challenge (if he doesn't already) then he will recall this. :)

I honestly have so much to say, but I feel like the comment would just drag on.
Just felt I should highlight some things from the part which I loved , though that was hard cause I loved the whole chapter 😆

Anywayyy
I finally commented :D

So now I'll be waiting for the next update

Can't wait to read it!!

Love, Hinal 😳🤗
Edited by basket_101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG wat was that?? An amazing hot update!! ❤️
Saffi yaar this was just too damn amazing, brilliant, & mindblowing!!
I'm jzt speechless after reading this, I dnt knw wat to say...literally
I'm out of words, I cnt tell u how much I loved this chapter!!
Even though it's impossible to express my excitement..let me still try
Ok first of all I hve to clap for Randhir 👏 This guy jzt stole my heart all over again ❤️❤️
I salute his self control dude...I seariously do
Wat a guy yaar...even after being this much drunk he still knows his limits!!
He did get carried away but the way he controlled himself & sanyu was commendable!!
And SanDhir confession OMG it was sooo cute
Finally they admitted that they love each other
Dnt knw if they'll rmbr it the nxt morning or not but it was super cute
I want a Randhir now 😆
And dude ur sucha brilliant writer...I knw I hve tld u this like million times
but I hve got to say it again
You are a fab writer 👏
The way u wrote this chapter is marvelous...it all cud hve been vulgur but the words u
used & the way u portrayed SanDhir's emotions made it freaking romantic
All in all I LOVED IT ❤️❤️❤️
Edited by LoveRantara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So guess where I read this chapter!🤣🤣
On a effing public bus with an old grandma behind me.. I doubt she read though🤣🤣... So here I am on a bus right and my friend snatches my phone away from me and is like, "You have started to revert to this now?"🤪

So! Here I am pushing aside my preparations for the lab and commenting on your fic! Saffi are you planning to kill me with hotness overload?! Bcos I think it's working😆

Short comment-- Sorry! I have to run now

Love always,
Pari

PS: I just commented because I had to let you know where I read this update🤣🤣
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an update yaar!!!!! Hawttt as hell...☺️
But gal u r soo apt in portraying every single bit of it soo perfectly...never even a bit OTT...not a single moment i felt it was vulgar anywhere!!!Sooo well written...Fab. writer u r saffi...👏
Proud of Ye...😃
Saffi u r magician...u spellbound me everytime with ur work...n any genre weather its emotions or hotness,U r perfect in it⭐️

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The chapter was just amazing dear...
And it was just super hot😳...
I was blushing😳 all the way...
And really they confessed but they won't remember😭...
But I really hope they become aware of their feelings soon specially Sanyukta😉...
update next soon...


With Love
Rakhi😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was freaking hottt
n u explained it like so perfectly
ur such an awesome writer dear
but they won't remember anything😭
I hope sanyu realises her love soon
update asap

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goodlucksam

Guess what?😃

I skipped my sleep yesterday night nd read all the chaps in a go!!😆😆
Gossh dear author i can't tell u how terribly engrossesed I was!!😕like the world around me doesn't even existed!!🤣

Ohk I should better go to my bed now but the urge of pouring out my pleasure! It's gonna kill me if I get away with this😆
*thinks**pouts**thinks*
*types*
I mentally slapped my self n no. Of times that y the hell didn't I get this before!!😡
Or else I would have stalked you like hell..😭
This is something so irresistible that one can't resist reading further n further... If started..once😳

N more ur story was shaping the more ..I was demanding.. N more ..u were satisfying by ur extraordinary skills👍🏼👏
Each n every section has been written spectacularly!!😛

I could easily feel that irresistibility ..
They were just overpowering my senses last night..
With each upcoming part I was gripping ..gluing to it.. More then before...😆

Moi a desperate half insane fellow is surely not capable of what u call giving a feedback.. Just blabbering..😔

This version of sandhir.. Oh my lord..😲 I never ever imagined in my wildest dream..☺️
Kudose to you for thinking ..so free kingly out of the box👏

Especially sanyukta's character you have gave her rebirth
I never expected her to be this much bold,outspoken, randhir obsessed n wild...every😲 lil action of his. It just turnes her on (especial mention to Mr.shekhavat's breathtaking charm nd smoking hawwt physic😳)

I sware m falling fr this girl rather then falling for my hero...🤣

The way u have portrayed our hero..😳
I was completely able to visualise anything regarding him
His signature smirks n the evil smiles..
Those killer taunts fr miss farzi..
N that charm.. Which can make any girl go weak on her legs..
*sweats*
How difficult it is to not get charmed by his personality..
N so sanyu is not an exception..but neither she is accepting her feelings nor she wanna let go off him..

I m with my fellow readers who says that randhir is acknowledged abt the challenge!!😉😉
He is just playing games with her!! Or he too has developed somethng in his heart for her.. I guess😊

N one thing the way u used to describe their make outs!!!
So artistically written.. 👏 M sure u have done Masters in that... Freaking😛 awsm.. N simply beautiful..

So that's it of my blabber..😆
M still in a dilemma that what after seven days?😲
Who would be left heartbroken????
Randhir's or she herself????😭
Just loving the way story is moving ahead ..
N feeling fortunate to comment. ...🥳
Thank you so much for writing ..with this much enthusiasm..😳❤️
N ya for pm'ing me!!

Stay blessed..
With lods n lods of love
@samm 🤗
P.s.m terribly sry fr dozing u off with this crap ..
Plz pardon me! N do pm😃






I don't even know what to reply to this. Just that I'm incredibly touched that you enjoyed reading this story to that extent. Thanks for putting a huge smile on my face. You are really amazing! <3 And on top of that you posted this long review telling me how much you enjoyed reading this fic... and you delayed your sleep for that? Wow! You are... awesome! =) I am actually red right now hahaha! I can't take this flattery, because if I could I might be able to write you a better response! 😆

Not capable of what I call giving feedback? Are you crazy?! This was more than amazing feedback. In fact, I never expected this ever. Wow. You rock girl. This was not blabbering. This was sweet. And I'm really, really touched, and you put the biggest smile on my face. I love you! <3

Hahahah you are falling for Sanyu? 😳 I like it when she's bold and feisty, and sometimes I have seen this side of her in the show, but I just kind of amplified it here... xD I'm so glad that you're able to visualize Randhir. I love him so much, he's sooo much fun to write haha!

Hahahaha the mystery regarding whether Randhir knows or not will be revealed in a few updates. HAHA masters in make out description? Wow! That would be one heck of a degree. I'm glad that you think that I write them well. xD They're so much fun to write! ^_^

I feel fortunate for this story actually being able to touch someone enough to comment like this. Wow, thank you! You are amazing. I love you! <3 <3 <3

You didn't make me doze off. You kept me quite awake and... flattered. Thank you! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hey update yipee

Yr it was hot as hell.I was blushing while reading the whole updte 😳

Wtng for the next update now only two days are left 😭

Eagerly wtng to see what hppns when they woke up

Do update soon n a longer one

Keep smiling 😊



Thank you! 😳 Yeah, only two days are left. 😭 Longer one?! I keep getting asked to make my updates longer... but if I do that, it'll take a longer time for me to update. 😛 You keep smiling too! 😊

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