SANDHIR FF-KOI ANJANA APNA SA,THREAD 2 IS UP - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeherS

Awww chooo chweeet...tooo goood...loved it yaar...
post nxt asap...

thanx a lot dear
will update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

loved it! sanyu depriving her father's love is so sad! but randhir's dad is making her feel comfortable, that's great! thanks for pm'ing, continue soon. keep writing, love you :)

thanx a lot dear
will update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fairystar

It was mind boggling yaar :)

U r superb :P

Update soon n thnxx for PM
Keep writing


oh thank u soo much dear
will update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Randhir.janavi

Sorry i am late...
It was an awesome update... 😉
Lovely..!!! Great..!!!
Update soon and do pm me..
Janavi


thats fine dear
thanx a lot will update soon and will pm u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Hey Pari
1st of all sorry for late reply
Read all the 5 chapters in one go
CHAPTER 10 AND 11 were written very well.
👍🏼 They were cute and sweet. 😉
Next RD and Sanyu are poles apart but understand each other very well 😃
Harsh and Renuka are very supportive and caring parents. Their care for Rian and RD makes me emotional 😭
Rian and ankit are caring bro's😳😃😳
And raiden and radder . Aww they are so cute. I love pets.
In short you have justified all ther characters. 😃
You are such a sweet writer 👏
Loved all the chappys 😃
Keep it up 👍🏼
Thanks for the PM 😃

oh thats fine dear😊
yeah understanding eachother is true love i guess😃

arrey yaar tu to imotional ho gayi,chal koi baat nahi

i m glad u loved all the chappys

yeah rian and ankit r just like my bros,i have got 2 elder brother😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Res

Unres
Read all chaps in one go
Lkd sanyu n ankit bonding
As well as rian n rd bond.
They r at same place
Update soon

thank u soo much dear
will update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
xcitd bout whts gona happn..
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 15

After having a nice bath sanyu was sitting in her room unpacking her stuff

Thats when her phone started ringing,it was her bro,she picks up the phone

Sanyu-hello bhai

Ankit-hello princess,bohot khush lag rahi hai,woh bhi pehle din

Sanyu-haan bhai aap theek keh rahe the,mom and dad bohot,achee hai

Ankit-ohho pohochte hi mom and dad huh,instructions mil gaye na

Sanyu[smiling]haan bhai mil gaye and i like to follow those instructions

I just loved this family bhai

Ankit-dekha meine kaha tha na,u'll love them

Sanyu-hmm,waise bhai aap kal jaa rahe ho na US

Ankit-haan

Sanyu-bhai aap ghar pe ho abhi

Ankit-haan princess kya hua

Sanyu-bhai papa aa gaye kay,mamma ne mujhe phone nahi kiya

Ankit[sad tone]haan princess aa gaye hain,par mamma na bhooli nahi

hai dekh mere paas khadi hai

Sanyu-achaa bhai mamma se baat krawa na

Ankit-rukh abhi deta hoon

Anju-sanyu beta kaise hai achee se pohoch gayi naa

Sanyu-haan mamma ,aur apko pata hai yaha sab bohot achee hai

Aur yaha pe do puppies bhi hai,apko pata hai woh bhi mere friends ban

Gaye

Anju-achha,yeh to bohot achii baat hai,sanyu bate achee se padai karna

Man laga kar,theek hai

Sanyu,haan mamma,arrey mamma mujhe to randhir se notes lene the

Kal Sunday hai na to kal tak copy kar lungi,mamma mein jaa rahi hoon

Bye

Anju-bye beta

Sanyu-mamma papa kaise hai,mujhe poocha unhone

Anju-woh theek hai beta,arrey notes nahi lene chal jaa,baad mein baat karte hai

With that anju cuts the call and sanyu decides to ask randhir for notes

She moves out of her room and goes to the room which is on left

As renuka told her that it was randhir's room.

She knocks at the door,but no responce,she again knocks nut no responce

Then she call his name but no moment,finally she decides to go inside

As the door was not locked

she enters the room,to fine a more than neat sight in front of her

The room was a combination light brown and off white colors

There was a king size bed in the middle which was of brown colour

On which were white covers,to the right of the bed a guitar was places

To the left there was a side table and there was glass door just like in sanyu's room

Which leads to the balcony,the wall behind his bed was filled with photos

The photo in the middle was of randhir along with raiden and raider

Thn there was family portrait,thn in another photo rian and randhir

Were standing with their hands wrapped around each others shoulder

Another photo harsh was standing in the middle with ice-cream in both hands

Stretched out to his left and right where rian and randhir r licking it

She moves to the balcony but she trips on the carpet which was slightly

Folded at the end and she was all set to hit the floor and she closes her eyes

Due to fear but she found her self secured by a pair of arms which were holding

Her waist and the touch was familiar,she opens her eyes to find randhir

Who was looking at her ,his hair was all wet and the water was dripping from them

A towel around his neck,both were looking at each other but their trance was broken

When a drop of water fell from his hair onto her cheeks.randhir makes her stand straight

Thats when sanyu realizes he was shirtless with a towel around his neck and was in his

Track pants

Sanyu turns so that her back is facing him

Sanyu-haww mamma,i m sooo srry woh mein

Randhir was confused but thn he realized and goes to his wardrobe and wears

A t-shirt

Randhir-its ok sanyukta,u can turn now

Sanyu-sachii

Randhir[chuckles]-mmhmm

Sanyu-theek hai,saying so she turns to face randhir

Sanyu-woh i m srry meine knock kiya tha but tumne answer nahi kya

Toh door khula tha to mein andar aa gayi

Randhir[smiling]thats fine sanyukta,batao kya hua kuch chahiye

Sanyu-arrey haan woh na mein notes lene aayi thi

Randhir-oh haan ek minute abhi deta hoon

He moves to his study table and starts taking out his notes,

After sometime he comes with a pile of papers

Randhir-yeh lo,pehle yeh lo baki inke baad deta hoon

Sanyu-yeh kya 1st year ka poora syllabus padha diya kya,yeh sab mein kaise padhugi[tensed]

Randhir[smiling]-tension mat lo,ho jaega,ek kaam karna,yum yeh sab ek baar padlo

Agar samajh nahi aaya to mujhe bol dena,i'll help u,k

Sanyu[smiling]-really,thank u so much randhir

Randhir-ur welcome sanyukta

With that she moves out of his room,oru randhir was smiling thinking how

Childish his juliet is,thats when rian peeps in through the door

Rain-oey romeo fresh ho gaya to chal

Randhir-yeah bro,mein aa hi raha tha

Rian-kal funday hai planning nahi karni,ab to juliet bhi hai

Randhir-ohh haan mein to bhool hi gaya tha

Rian-haan to chal

Randir-ammm bro,woh i need to talk to u

Rian-haan bol na romeo

Randhir-bro woh sanyukta ko na us raat ke baremein aap kuch poochna mat

Aur woh uske baremein aap ko pata hi nahi ok

Rian-kyu romoe any pro

Randhir-woh bro usko na us raat ke barie mein baat bhi nahi karna

Aur woh nahi chati ki kisi ko bhi woh kiss ke barei mein pata

Chale

Rian-ok romeo,thats fine yaar,ab chal aur haan apni juliet ko bhi

Bula le,mein neeche jaa raha hoon

Randhir[hugs rian]-u r awsome bro

Rian-woh to main hoon

They laugh and rian goes out,randhir goes to sanyu's room and knocks

Randhir-sanyukta

Sanyu[from inside]-coming

She opens the door

Sanyu-haan randhir achaa hua tum aa gaye,jaldi chalo

She holds his wrist and takes him to her room,on entering the room

He finds that her bed was filled with the notes given by him and on the floor

Raiden and raider r fighting with a paper

Sanyu-randhir dekho in dono ne woh page no 59 kha liya

Radhir-raiden,raider leave that and come here now

Hearing his sound they leave that paper and walk to randhir with their tail

Down in guilt

Randhir-[to raiden and raider]go out now[to sanyu]sanyukta yeh log yaha kaise aye

Sanyu- inhe main leke aayi,naya room hai na to mujhe akele na...

Randhir-dar lagta hai?

Sanyu-mmhh[nods]i m srry randhir

Randhir[confused]-srry kyu

Sanyu-woh tumhare notes meri wajah se kharab ho gaye

Randhir-ohh thats fine sanyukta,koi baat nahi mein dosre bana lunga

Arrey haan abhi tum chalo mom dad aur bro wait kar rahe hai

Sanyu-haan ek minute mein yeh notes assemble kar ke ati hun

Randhir-wait i'll help u

Sanyu-nahi mein kar lungi

Without paying any heed to her refusal he starts gathering all the papers

From the bed

Randhir-achaa ek baat bato,tum hamesha aise hi padti ho kya

Sanyu-haan,kyu?

Randhir-nahi,woh kya hai na ki aise padne ke baad kya tumhe apne sare notes

Mil jate hai

Sanyu-haan

Hearing that randhir chuckles

Randhir-achaa ek baat batao tumhe din mein bhi akele dar lagta hai is room mein

Sanyu-haan woh kya hai na ki mein kabhi apne room ke alawa kahi rahi nahi hoon

To this is my first time away from my house,to mujhe darr lag raha tha

Randhir-yeh lo ho gaya[handing her all the notes neatly assembled]

Sanyu-thank you,chalo chalte hain

With that sanyu starts walking to the door when randhir calls her

Randhir-ammm sanyukta

Sanyu[turns to face him]-haan

Randhir[forwarding his hand]-friends?


i hope u guys liked it pls do leave ur feedbacks and hit the like button😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
hie.
wow.. u are really a good writer..

read ur ff all parts in just one go..

loved it.. keep writing..

waiting for next part. 😊

thank you for this lovely ff.. 😊

with lots of love

RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!Dis is so damn cute😊...i really mean it...pls keep writing👍🏼...nd giving us lovely updates...thnq sooo muuuch 4 pms😃

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