Daddy's Hands - SanDhir Fanfiction (Thread Two Link!) - Page 89

Originally posted by: newmoon18

ok let me breath first ok now i m ok yipeee updte di u mde my day i read it in mrning bt cmmnting dis late so srry u wnt believe i tried thrice to cmmnt bt evrytym sumthing alwz came n i never wnted to give chotu updte apki updte pr mi humesha relax hokar cmmnt krti hu so dat i can express evrything which i expernced while reading it isliye cmmnt krte wqt puri updte mre samane aa jti h

Awww Rashi baby, I love you! Thank you so much! I'm so happy that I left a positive impact on your day, that makes me so, so, so happy! LOVE YOU! <3

acha enough of my bakwas n srry for irritating u

Shhh you can never irritate me! -_-


now cming to the updte it was fab i cried during fb scenes it was do heart wrenching i cnt bear dat pain 😭 😭

Awww sorry! <3

the way rd treated sanyu she was cntinuously begging bt he refused to listen anything in his ego he ruined evrything the pain n emtns r so evident i can visualize evrything n it was beyond perfection

I'm glad that you're able to visualize it!

di u r the bst u mst be thinking mi har apne har cmmnt me ye bolti hu bt believe u r the bst who not only write dis much awsme bt also amzng as a person luv u di

Aww okay now enough flattery haha! I'm not better than you or anyone else on here! I love you so much! <3

sanyu was so broken bt still she finds solace in rd embrace she was cntinuosly saying i hte u bt not a single tym she mean it dey both r so broken bt still giving pain to each other in order to do it hurting demselves
Yup she still finds solace in his embrace, she still loves to be with him... she was continuously yelling that she hates him as if she tried to convince herself.

plz god inhe thodi akaal do dey both need it dat kiss was awsme it shows dere need to be together in each others arms dey r madly in love wid each other bt cnt forget dere past it will be hell difficult for dem specially for sanyu she has been through a lot she cnt forget evrything so easily she needs tym n dis is the speciality of ur fics evrything hppn on its tym 👏 👏

Hahaha yeah they do need some akaal huh! 😆 I'm glad that you liked that kiss! <3 They do have a need to be together, they love each other a lot! The past will haunt them though, that's right. Thank you! :* <3


hope dey soon clears the air n sandhir hppy days aa jye till den we all will be wtng for nxt updte do updte soon

Aw thank you so much! <3

love u a lot di keep smiling alwz n be hppy my cuto sweeto di 😊

Awww I LOVE YOU TOO! You keep smiling too my cutiepie Rashi! 😊

Originally posted by: purnima209

baby waiting for part yar

Originally posted by: asmamahsud

Chapter Nine (nine itne jaldi was the first thing came to my mind when in the morning i checked my phone )

Awww yes it came fast!

He watched the pain settle on her face and his own heart shattered into pieces - he didn't know why he thought that hurting her would relieve him of his own pain, but it didn't. It hurt even more. It was like scratching open wounds. He was already bleeding, but now he bled more.(i can imagine that part ) I'm glad!

Her grip on his shirt loosened as she looked at him with shock.

"You... you slept with Vidhushi?" she asked, as if she couldn't believe what he said.

"Many times," he forced himself to say coldly. (closed my eyes and then open it instantly i thought i read it wrong ) Sorry :(

Her hands found his chest and she pushed him back with all her might. Covering her mouth with her hand to conceal a sob, she got off the bed. (but it never work my own experience ) Awww :(

She started to make her way to the door, but Randhir caught up with her and grabbed her arm, turning her around forcefully.

"Let go of me!" she shrieked, tears falling down her face. "I'm disgusted. I don't even want to look at you!"(world collapsed it frt of her she wanted to run away frm her fate i felt like ) Yes that's right!

He grabbed her shoulders tightly and roughly pushed her against the wall, his own eyes holding nothing but anger.

"I'm disgusted at you too - you can go and marry Parth, I don't care," he snarled. (i felt like randhir is convincing himself ) He is. :(

"And you can go and sleep with Vidhushi," she screamed. "At least I didn't sleep with Parth!"

"At least I am not going to marry Vidhushi," he yelled back.

"You slept with Vidhushi," she cried as if she was trying to make sense out of it, "You slept with her."

He could see the agony in her face and right now more than anything, he wanted to take her in his arms and tell her that from now onwards he belonged only to her. But his ego had always been beyond all his desires.

"And you're going to happily marry Parth," he repeated darkly.

"Not happily Randhir, not happily..." she cried, clutching the sleeves of his shirt tightly. "But you're with Vidhushi!"

"I broke up with her Sanyukta!" he yelled, his own eyes filling up with tears. "I broke up with her."

She looked up at him with a hopeful expression and before he could even take in what was going on, she had pressed her lips against his, her tongue trying to part his mouth open with a sense of urgency - as if she had a time limit. One of his hands looping around her waist, and the other one sliding in her hair, he brought her head closer to his as he responded to the kiss with the same urgency. (i didnot like it seiously yar like thora tu socho bache bhi parte hain ) Sorry, but it's needed for the story, concept itself is like this. :(

He had missed her so much. Her hands cupped his cheeks as her tongue invaded his mouth. He allowed her to dominate.

She broke the kiss, her chest heaving as she gasped for air. Then fresh tears fell out of her eyes again and she started to hit his chest.

"I hate you!" she howled. "I hate you Randhir!"(she was tell herself ) Yup exactly!

She threw one punch after another and he stood there silently, allowing her to hit him. Then she raised her hand and slapped him hard across the cheek.

"You slept with Vidhushi," she wailed.

He grabbed her arms tightly and pulled her close to him as she looked up into his eyes, desperately wanting him to tell her that he was lying.

"Sanyukta I was only thinking about you - each and everytime, I wished it was you," he whispered, letting go of her arms.

She stumbled backwards and her back hit the wall again. His hands found her cheeks and he cupped them gently, wiping away her tears with his thumbs.

"You broke her heart?" she said, sobbing again. "You slept with her and you were thinking about me? And you left her?"(i wanted to say the same also abused randhir ) Yeah she did abuse him. :/

Her words hit him hard and he felt a pang of guilt. She was right. What he had done with Vidhushi wasn't right - he had given her false hope when he knew the whole time that he would never be into that relationship.

"Yes," he admitted. "And I feel very guilty."(why ppl feel guily for the mistake which they make in full senses )

"Randhir you hurt her just like you hurt me!" she screamed. "You didn't learn from your mistake."(so true but why she always behave as women rights assocation chairmen ) Hahahaha women rights association chairman! I don't know, I'll ask her! 😆

He stroked her cheek softly.

"Randhir," she said, bringing her voice down to a whisper, "I'm over you."

He let go of her cheeks as he felt anger rise from within again. Grabbing her shoulders, he shook her violently.

"That's why you slept with that picture of us every night right?" he asked her harshly. "That's why you kissed me right now right?"(bcz she love u idiot ) Exactly! <3

She brought her shaking hands up to his face and touched his cheeks softly.

"Randhir," she whispered, her voice cracking. "You left me. You doubted me. You thought Shraddha was Parth's." (why u lied to him ) Good point.

He rested his hands on top of hers, before wrapping around them softly and holding them.

"When I told you I was pregnant, you asked me to prove she was yours," she said, tearing up again. (i stand up frm my bed and then drink a glass of watr as i knw more is coming up) Good, water is good for health!

--

"Randhir," she whispered with a sigh of relief as soon as he opened his door. "You didn't answer my texts. I was so worried. Is your phone working?"

His eyes were bloodshot red. She reached up and touched his cheeks softly.

"Are you okay?" she asked.

He stepped aside to allow her to come in before locking the door behind her.

"Sanyukta you're pregnant?" he asked with a raised eyebrow. (confirmation still) Yes

And suddenly she broke down crying.

"You got my texts?" she asked and clutched his shirt tightly, before resting her head on his chest.

His shaking hands gently stroked her hair, unable to see her in this kind of pain.

"Randhir I'm pregnant," she sobbed.

"Come here," he murmured, taking her hand and seating her on the couch.

She placed her head on his shoulder and started to cry again.

"The doctor told me I'm six weeks pregnant," she told him, "I don't know what to do. And you have been ignoring my texts."(cz i was fighting wid my ego ) Perfectly said!

Ever since the incident where he walked out of her place a week ago, he hadn't contacted her nor did he reply to her texts. He thought that she was lying that she was pregnant just so he would talk to her again, but seeing her like this, in this condition outside of his door had cleared his doubts.

He was in a state of shock - he didn't know how to react or what to say. All he knew was that he couldn't let Sanyukta suffer through this alone.

"I'm sorry," he whispered, stroking her hair again.(sory like seriously )

"What do I do Randhir?" she cried.

"Sanyukta, keep on doing your placement," he told her seriously. "I'll quit and will try and find something there."

She removed her head from his shoulder and looked at him with shock.

"No Randhir!" she said right away. "You complete your placement too. We'll both complete our placements and then we'll live together."

"But everyone will know by then," Randhir said, holding her cheek softly. "You will have the baby by then."

"We should have used a condom," she whispered, resting her head on his chest again. "Look what happened."

"Forget that, it's the past. Here's what we'll do. We'll both complete our placements. Do you have any friends you can trust there?" Randhir asked.

"Parth," Sanyukta replied, making Randhir slightly angry, but he brushed it off. Sanyukta came first. (again parth saffi why always parth responsible for figt i like him his charachtr is so good in serial) More on his character will be revealed soon, but up until this point it has only been randhir and sanyukta fighting over him, he hasn't had a hand in any of this.

"Okay then," he said, putting his ego aside, "He'll be glad to take care of you."

"But Randhir... what will he think?" Sanyukta asked nervously. "He doesn't know about us I mean..."

"Still?" Randhir yelled, pulling Sanyukta off him and glaring at her. (like seriosly i read it right ) yeah :(

"Sorry Randhir, I haven't seen him much all week!" she told him quickly. "And I forgot about it, I was trying to contact you."

"Sanyukta you know what," Randhir said angrily. "You call him your best friend and you don't even tell him about us. Why Sanyukta? You aren't doing anything with him are you?"(i have the same pont cz of this point i am sayin that randhir was right) Yup he has a reason to say all of this!

"What?" Sanyukta shrieked, standing up quickly. "Randhir how can you say that?"

"Sanyukta why can't you tell him about us?" Randhir asked, equally angry. "You know what Sanyukta, how do I know that child is even mine?"

Her eyes widened and she grabbed his collar angrily.

"Randhir," she yelled, "How dare you?"

His ego was not bigger than his concern anymore.

"Prove it," he said angrily. "Prove that this child is mine." (i reminded me of humnsafar ashar answer was awesome when her mother asked the same question fr khird at end ) Hahaha yes that scene was great!

He watched in sorrow as tears filled her eyes. She pressed her lips against his desperately, but he pulled her off him.

"Prove it," he said again.

Choking back on her tears, she turned around and walked out of the door.

--

"You asked me to prove it," she sobbed again. "And I did Randhir. Remember, we got a DNA test done. But you ignored me."

Randhir remembered that the DNA test results were negative - it claimed that Shraddha wasn't his daughter, and in anger he had texted Sanyukta to stay out of his life. (every thing was finished he dnt want to face her cz of guilt but he mad himself stone) That's right

Sanyukta fell to the ground and continued to sob.

Randhir remembered how she had fallen to the ground just like this when they met for the last time five years ago.

--

"Please don't do this Randhir," she cried as soon as he opened the door. "Randhir I swear to you, you are the father!"(no use of any thing when ur ego overpowered ur senses then u becme blind ) Exactly! Well said.

She wrapped her arms around his body and rested her head on his chest, clinging on to him for dear life.

"Let go Sanyukta," Randhir said angrily, trying to pull her off, but she refused to budge. "I don't even want to look at you right now."

"Randhir you can't do this to me or our child, you can't!" she wailed. "Please Randhir. Please!"

He grabbed her shoulders and tried to pull her off but she refused to move.

"I know you love me Randhir, it's a misunderstanding, please," she cried. "Please Randhir, don't leave us!"

When he was finally successful in pulling her back, she grabbed his hand and placed it on her lower abdomen.

"Randhir, our child is in here," she told him desperately. "Our baby Randhir. Your baby is in here!"

He yanked his hand away and she fell to her knees, holding her hands together. "Please Randhir, don't do this."

"Don't feed me bullshit Sanyukta," he hissed angrily. "Go tell all this to who this baby belongs to. You disgust me."

She grabbed his legs and continued to sob.

"Randhir please," she begged. "Please!"

He bent down and grabbed her arm, pulling her up before dragging her towards the door.

"Randhir no! I came all the way here to - Randhir please, I'll tell Parth everything, I swear I won't ever see him or speak to him again, please!" she cried. "Please! I love you! Don't do this! Randhir, don't!"

He pushed her out the door and closed the door in front her face. (i didnt read this part as u knw i hate blushing and i hate crying over stories or weaknesses ) Awww :(

--

"Sanyukta," Randhir whispered, feeling guilty for the way he had treated her. "I'm sorry."

She leaned forward, still sobbing, pressing her face on his feet and Randhir bent down to hold her shoulders. He pulled her up to her feet and looked at her with nothing but guilt.

"Randhir, what will sorry do?" she asked, wiping her tears away with the back of her hand. "Will it take away the amount I had to struggle?"

He touched her cheek lovingly and she looked up at him with hope - hope that maybe he would say something and everything would be completely alright all of a sudden.

"I won't even apologize for what I did five years ago, because that's beyond forgiveness," he muttered, "But I'm apologizing for today. Whatever I said earlier was out of anger."

"I'm sorry too," she responded. "I'm not looking forward to marry Parth. I don't want to marry him Randhir, I don't."

He tucked a stray hair behind her ear and just looked at her - she was beautiful, even with swollen red eyes, even when she looked so weak and vulnerable, even after all these years.

"Then don't marry him," he murmured. "You don't have to."

"I promised," she whispered. "I'm engaged to him. I can't hurt him."(dnt do this yar u cant like ur life to repay for some ahsan of smeeone u ll tired soon of ur life)
Yeah you have a point.

He let go of her, frustrated.

"Sanyukta this was how it was like when we were together too - you never told him about us because you were too worried about his feelings!" he snapped.

"Randhir, he's done so much for me!" she yelled back through tears. "He cared for me while I was pregnant, he helped me with Shraddha for the last five years, and I can't devote the rest of my life to him? He was there for me in the most crucial stage of my life."

She grabbed the collar of his shirt out of frustration and tugged hard.

"Where were you Randhir? Where were you when I needed you the most?" she screamed.

Randhir let her scream, because she was right - he had abandoned her when he should have been with her. Although the DNA report came out negative, it was materialistic, and his feelings for Sanyukta should have been well above that... but he failed. He failed in this relationship.

Randhir felt his eyes fill up with tears as she cried in front of him.

"Despite all of this I have never loved Parth! He has been my greatest supporter, my companion through my darkest moments, but why - why is it that even for one moment I couldn't look at him in the way I looked at you? Why is it that I couldn't look away from you even once during these five years?" she sobbed, her grip around the collar of his shirt tightening, "Maybe... just maybe if I was able to look away from you, I would have seen him. Then I wouldn't suffer like this."(so sweet of parth ) yeah!
His heart broke into pieces when she said that - she suffered so much and Randhir knew, he knew that no matter what misunderstanding there was, his faith in her had not been enough. Even if she had lied to him, he had always known that she would never have cheated on him. He had asked her for proof of the child being his out of ego, but when he opened the report, he was heartbroken, his trust in her had faltered at that moment - and that was when their relationship had broken apart.

He had more faith in a piece of paper than he had in her, and the thought crushed him now.

"Sanyukta," he said firmly, grabbing her face and looking directly into her eyes. "I have never looked away from you either."

"Liar," she hissed, as tears fell from her eyes. "You had a physical relationship with Vidhushi."

"Never an emotional one," he whispered, stroking her cheek softly. "I'm sorry Sanyukta."

She looked up at him. They were two souls separated - she made the commitment that he had never made, while he took he the step that she had never taken. Both of them had given themselves to someone else. They were separated by distance, but destiny was forcing them to come back together, to close the gap between them, to balance out their differences.

"I loved you so much," she choked. "Randhir, I loved you a lot."(i ll never able to understand this ) Haha :P

"So did I," he replied, wiping her tears again. "I loved you a lot too."

"I still love you," she whispered, pressing her face on his chest. "I still love you and I'm scared that I won't have the courage to let go anymore."

He stroked her hair gently as she continued to sob, her confession strangely calming down his inner demons. He knew she loved him, but hearing it come out of her mouth made his heart leap and his insides fill up with hope again.

"I still love you too Sanyukta," he replied, as tears fell out of his own eyes. "I won't give you a reason to let go now."

He meant every word of it.

i knw my mind started working weirdly when i read stories my human rights soul mode get activated whenevr i read some story like this. but i am on randhir side cz i have the same issue if sme one lie to me than i never believe him even that person die for my forgiveness i knw its cruel but i am like this but bst chaptr till not out of all u ff my imagingation my irritate u so u can ignor it i dnt mind

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you shared your views. It's okay to have an overactive mind, I'm glad to know your perspective. :) Your imagination didn't irritate me one bit! In fact, I smiled reading your perspective. But one thing is that Randhir never doubted that Sanyu cheated on him until the proof of the paper showed up, before that he said those cruel words because his ego was too big. :( Thanks!

Originally posted by: KRISHAJADAV

very good part...
You explain very well...😊😊
please post next part soon...

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty

saffi i am soo sorry i have to res this !!!

shit .. i really can't read it now .. :/

i feel so bad.. i just wanted to let you know .. will read tomorrow pakka !!

1) stop apologizing 2) you don't have to res/unres/comment at all, and you know that i'll still love you! <3

URESSS !!!

SAFFFIII !!!!

This chapter was a BOMB !!! OMG

so many mysteries and untold stories finally revealed !!!
Thank you! :* <3

My hand was literally on my head the entire time... it was that intense !!!

I LOVED IT !!! .. LOL i always say that.. but you know me naaa.. you keep coming up with better and better chapters and that becomes my favorite ! :P LOL

Or you're just too cute that you see the goodness in all of my chapters. 😆

but this was sooo well-written.. the flashback timings were sooo perfect !!!

i don't know ..when you write the whole scene just perfectly plays in my head

So happy that it was able to play in your head!

their kiss !! <3333

the way sanyu this time kisses him.. alll that time .. all that love that she had supressed.. just gushing out .. and the way Randhir reciprocates... oh dear !! 😳

hahaha i'm glad that you liked the kiss! <3

and the flashback scene !!!

that was bad yaa... shit i felt so bad for Sanyu !!

Randhir !! WHAT IS WRONG WITH HIM !!

EGO! :D

actually if you go to see.. he was insecure before itself .. it just came out at the wrong time ..

douvting if the kid was his or Parth's ?? That was outrageous .. but his anger is justified thoda sa... i am not saying he is right ... he was wrong .. but sanyu lied to him so much that he couldn't trust her completely .. :/

Yup that and his ego > love at that time... so their relationship failed. Also her irrational lying too. :/

that was a sad scene.. but very well written and realistic !!

Thanks!

and the secoond flashback scene ... ohh dear !!!!

The DNA test failed !!! MANNN ,... i was shocked when i read this part yaaa.. poor thing .. she was trying so hard to prove him that the kid was Randhir's even after being accused that it was Parth's .. if it were me i would have left Randhir !! But this is Sanyu.. she feels .. she cares.. she really loved him !! and for him she even took that test.. too bad it didn't work out ... man

Yup hahaha DNA test failed. That and she's pregnant... it's hard for her. Her kid growing up without a father, it's not that easy, and she loves him a lot and she knows he loves her too, so it isn't lack of love. :(

Randhir was harsh !!!!! Even sanyu not ready to forgive him makes sense ..

i loved the part where you highlighted that he had done the same with Vidushi,.. left her.. omg !! i feel so bad .. not particularly for Vidushi .. but the whole mess they are in ,, you get it na ??

it really really touched me ! I dont know why .. :((((

Yeah I get it. I feel bad for Vids to be honest too hahaha! The situation is a sad one.

and the confession <33333333333333

finally .. they still love each other !!! OMG ... that was really really beautiful !!! I swear.. <333

i wanted to cry ..
Thank you <3 Glad that you loved the confession!

you know i love the way .. you are dragging this night over 2 to 3 chapters.. i am seriously LOVING IT !!! 😃
2- 3? I think half the fic has been this night! 😆 Glad you're loving it though!

Can't wait for next man .. not all their problems are al most sorted out .. next one should be super interesting .. Ooohhh <33

Hahaha i hope you like the next one!

i also love your Author's note in the end !! HAHAHA .. .<333

you are so cute .. and sorry again.. i love to reply early on your updates.. but i got caught up in something last night .. anyway .. love you maaan !!! 😳

AWW I'm cute? You're the cute one! I love you! :* <3 And stop apologizing or i'll be mad! -_-

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Amazing teaser
continue soon
and pm me

Originally posted by: andy1245

wow loved it do cont soon

Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserved :)

Just like with your other update, I've read this already.

But can't comment as of now

Should be up after midnight or by tomorrow :P

- Unres

Yea I know, super late 😆

Just caught up in some things. Realizing I need to get some applications done before classes start again :P

I hope that went well! <3

Anyyywaay, won't waste time with la side comments... So here's my comment pour part numero neuf (:

It was him being silly this time. Saying that to her, knowing it would only end up hurting him even more

Despite everything, there is no way he would be content hurting her

Yup exactly!

Ego is one of those things which can completely ruin a relationship. Sadly, it's the hardest thing to let go of. But I like the flaws that you've shown in their characters. It would be very easy to say that he felt terrible and apologized and all that, but I really admired how true you stayed to his character!

I'm so glad that you understand that! Ego is one of the hardest things to let go of, and especially for a man (not trying to stereotype, but from what I've noticed in general), it's even harder because the way they've grown up as being the one in control, and especially for someone like Randhir it holds true. His ego is very big.

I enjoyed the kiss too, but that's a given by now 😆

Hahaha!

Also really liked the guilt which settled in him after realizing what he put Vidushi through. It really wasn't fair, and I don't like that he did that. But at least he knows what he did was wrong. Idk if you will include it or not, but it would be nice to see a Randhir-Vidushi scene again where he sincerely apologizes and gets rid of this guilt. :P

Yeah it really wasn't fair to her... and I don't like that he did that either, but he was wrong and people make mistakes they often feel guilty for in real life too. And yes, Vidhushi isn't gone from the story yet. 😆

That flashback 😲

Okay. Randhir agreed and said he would take care of her.

That is trust. I honestly feel Sanyukta is more at fault here.

He has trust in her, but since she has lied to him before, he can't trust her blindly.

Honestly, I don't blame him.

Especially after the DNA test...

Speaking of which, I don't understand how the hell the test was negative.

I am a logical person, and if that were to happen to me (obviously in a parallel universe where I'm a guy 😆), then I wouldn't believe Sanyu either.

Hahahaha! Yeah she didn't make things easier for her by lying to him. :( How the test was negative, that'll be revealed soon too.

The last bits... No comment.

It was beautifully written.

Thanks!

Although I hated how Sanyukta felt obligated to marry Parth, but I see her point.

I wish I could put into words my feelings when I read the part, but words betray me.

I know usually I have long comments on every bit, but I'm just spellbound right now.

Thank you so much! You don't have to worry about long comments! <3

You have no idea how well you've written this part! Not implying that your other parts suck though 😆

But this was exceptional!

Thank you so much! :* <3

I'm really enjoying the FF so far and am just waiting for the next update :3

Love youu! Muaah :*

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Awww I love you too! You're awesome! <3 Muaaah! :*