Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty
OMG !!!
what did i just read..
just when i thought things could not get any better ... you kept proving me wrong !!! The chapter got interesting and interesting with each friggin world !!!
i was glued to it.. like shit !!!!!!
this was the most fabulous chapter i have read... OMG !!! everytimes something happened i was like oohh shit
it was sooo intense..
Thank you hahahaha! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :P You always say my chapters are better, so I guess it's a good thing! 😆
especially ..when he got so mad.. and left the room when heard about Parth.. DAMN !!!!!
And Sanyukta just crying on the floor.. i dont blame either of them..
and when he came back into the room saying just get done with it.. i was like OUCH !!! shit .. that was sooo blunt and mean.. and the way he pushed her to the bed..showing no mercy... we know he loves her so much..even when he is so harsh with her ..you can see his love .. and you have shown is beautifully..only you can do that
Awww thank you! I liked that part too... he's harsh but he cares a LOT about her - even when she told him to stop, he did... despite being harsh, despite wanting to hurt her. He still respects her a lot. :(
it was fabulous ..
and the flashback scene !!!
omg ... Sanyukta !! what the hell did you do ... DAMN.. i just wanted too scream.. i know she lied to him because she wanted to protect him..but no one likes to be lied to..even if that person's best interest is kept in mind .. and then the way he kisses her.. so rough.. so hot ! you can see the passion, the pain the possessiveness.. omg ! and the love making scene.. was just fabulously written.. flawless..it was supposed to be harsh.. but still their state of mind was very well expressed which justified the purpose of that scene...
Thank you! <3 I am glad that you liked that scene! :P I was a bit skeptical about it - well worried that it wouldn't go down well with readers, but in reality it would have played out this way I think... so I didn't want to take that away from the story.
i loved that scene.. Sanyu trying to convince him she still loves him and trying to gain his trust back.. it didn't well though..
but but but .. the highlight of this update is the last line of the flashback scene.. her missing her period .. man that really really hit me !! i just choked.. that was fabulous..
Yeah that part had me choke too :(
and the present scene was sooo amazing !!
Randhir insecure.. jealous .,..possessive and god knows what.. the way he kisses her again.. literally trying to prove indirectly that NO ONE can make love to her the way he does.. no one is allowed to do so.. i love when he shows power and authority over her..
Yeah... he's very possessive so when she said she'll go and marry someone else, that doesn't sit well with him AT ALL.
and man !!!
again .. you certainly know where to end a chapter !!
waiting eagerly !!! LOVE YOU SAFFI !!!
you just rock !!!!
Thank you Sona! :* <3 I LOVE YOU!
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