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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tiara24

this was such an awesome chapter.. i luvd every bit of it

nd i find tht randhir is not d one at fault its because of sanyu's lies he doubted her nd tht ws obvious..
they both are tryn to hurt each other ...
continue sooon



They both are trying to hurt each other, Sanyu did have a part in this break up too, but in the end, Randhir was the one who pulled the trigger. Thank you! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tiara24

this was such an awesome update luvd every bit of it..

sanyu is actually the one at fault.. rd doubted her cz she lied to him evrytym..
y r dey both hurting each othr???
continue soon



I just replied to you - you seemed to have posted twice. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: randhirsanyu014

i just can't believe this...sanyukta's one sentence "Randhir, I'll tell him today. I'm sorry. I just don't know how he'll react," she told him. "I mean he doesn't exactly like you." actually going over my head...why sanyukta is so much worried about parth's reaction...who is parth...her brother? her fiance or what?...randhir is sanyukta's choice...right?...so why is she so much worried about parth's dislikings towards randhir ...randhir does not trust parth...it is oblivious...because according to me parth loved sanyukta...parth's water pipe is not working right?...so what is he doing in sanyukta's house overnight...sanyukta lied to randhir about this sensitive topic...actually randhir rightly said "Why is he coming to a girl's house to shower? Doesn't he have other friends?"...i just hate this parth...always he tries to act like a great saint but sorry to say according to me his motive was not that great... i knew that randhir is over possessive & over protective about sanyukta...that's why she lied to randhir...but that is not an excuse actually...at last randhir again has brought vidushi's topic...things get messier...now what will happen...i am looking forward to this...
ur update is superb dear...eagerly waiting for ur next update



Thank you so much! I loved reading your opinion on this matter! 😃 It is a very sensitive topic and I think both of them were very realistic in their approaches too.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty

OMG !!!

what did i just read..
just when i thought things could not get any better ... you kept proving me wrong !!! The chapter got interesting and interesting with each friggin world !!!
i was glued to it.. like shit !!!!!!
this was the most fabulous chapter i have read... OMG !!! everytimes something happened i was like oohh shit
it was sooo intense..

Thank you hahahaha! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :P You always say my chapters are better, so I guess it's a good thing! 😆

especially ..when he got so mad.. and left the room when heard about Parth.. DAMN !!!!!
And Sanyukta just crying on the floor.. i dont blame either of them..
and when he came back into the room saying just get done with it.. i was like OUCH !!! shit .. that was sooo blunt and mean.. and the way he pushed her to the bed..showing no mercy... we know he loves her so much..even when he is so harsh with her ..you can see his love .. and you have shown is beautifully..only you can do that

Awww thank you! I liked that part too... he's harsh but he cares a LOT about her - even when she told him to stop, he did... despite being harsh, despite wanting to hurt her. He still respects her a lot. :(

it was fabulous ..
and the flashback scene !!!
omg ... Sanyukta !! what the hell did you do ... DAMN.. i just wanted too scream.. i know she lied to him because she wanted to protect him..but no one likes to be lied to..even if that person's best interest is kept in mind .. and then the way he kisses her.. so rough.. so hot ! you can see the passion, the pain the possessiveness.. omg ! and the love making scene.. was just fabulously written.. flawless..it was supposed to be harsh.. but still their state of mind was very well expressed which justified the purpose of that scene...

Thank you! <3 I am glad that you liked that scene! :P I was a bit skeptical about it - well worried that it wouldn't go down well with readers, but in reality it would have played out this way I think... so I didn't want to take that away from the story.

i loved that scene.. Sanyu trying to convince him she still loves him and trying to gain his trust back.. it didn't well though..
but but but .. the highlight of this update is the last line of the flashback scene.. her missing her period .. man that really really hit me !! i just choked.. that was fabulous..

Yeah that part had me choke too :(

and the present scene was sooo amazing !!
Randhir insecure.. jealous .,..possessive and god knows what.. the way he kisses her again.. literally trying to prove indirectly that NO ONE can make love to her the way he does.. no one is allowed to do so.. i love when he shows power and authority over her..
Yeah... he's very possessive so when she said she'll go and marry someone else, that doesn't sit well with him AT ALL.
and man !!!
again .. you certainly know where to end a chapter !!
waiting eagerly !!! LOVE YOU SAFFI !!!
you just rock !!!!

Thank you Sona! :* <3 I LOVE YOU!

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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: antara3773

third time im reading this saffi !! too much pain ,too much hurt !! and damn u explain them so well !! its like i can see their faces right before my eyes ,by the way u are writing ! its too awesome !! please update soon !! :)

till then i guess ill just keep reading this one over and over again !



Wow third time! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter! <3 Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveRantara

This was jzt too damn good saffi

I read it twice before commenting...such an intense chapter
I loved the blame game Randhir & sanyu were playing
None of them is ready to accept their mistakes instead they both are
busy pointing out each other's mistakes
After reading this chapter it is clearly visible that sanyu is being too harsh on Randhir
I mean y the hell is she behaving like she's some saint & Randhir is the only one at fault???
She's equally as wrong as Randhir in this situation
I mean trust is the base of every relationship & her nonstop lying abt Parth to Randhir was totally wrong...I get it that she cares about Randhir & didn't want him to worry for no reason but lying to him was stupid!!! She knows that Randhir has trust issues & still she kept lying to him regarding Parth?
And that Parth???? Why the hell is he over at sanyus place all the tym
Does he not hve a place of his own??
And wats up with sanyu not telling Parth abt her relationship with Randhir??
Since he's her best friend, he shud hve been the first person sanyu shud hve told
But no she's too busy thinking how Parth will take it...who cares how he takes it??
If she really loves Randhir then wat Parth think shudnt matter much!!!
I can totally feel how Randhir must hve felt when sanyu kept lying to him regarding Parth
And now he lied to her abt vidhushi???
Oh Great this jzt keeps getting better!!!
Anyways amazingly written chapter
I throughly enjoyed reading it...plz update soon



Thank you so much! Wow you read it again. Yeah they aren't ready to accept their mistakes yet, but they're communicating and talking it out (rather screaming it out haha) so it's great. They are both wrong in this situation and they both need to realize that. Trust is the foundation of every relationship yes! Hahahahaha there's going to be more insight into Parth in the future updates. Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey Saify

just love the update
omg,you write it so beautifully
both are in pain
and u portrayed it perfectly
Intensity at its best
so yaah,both are equally responsible for wtever happened in the past

I wish sayunkta ne Parth ko bata diya hota abt their relationship
she must not lie to Randhir

can't wait for more now
so plz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Taje care

Geet





Hey Geet! Glad you enjoyed the update! They are both responsible and one of them cannot be solely blamed for it... thank you so much! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelynanu

its awesome 😛 and i felt like crying😭



Thanks! Me too! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sara1990

omg Poor Sandhir...

awesome update



Yeah poor SanDhir. Thanks!

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