Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 3 - COMPLETED

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Fighting Fate






Voila!

Here I am once again with the sequel of The Valiant Knight, titled asFighting Fate. There are many reasons why I decided to come up with sequel. Most important one being, I didnt want to compromise on the ending of TVK1, but at the same time I was very distressed that the characters had gone through quite a lot and they deserve proper Love Story.

I would like to share something about TVK1 as a parting note to that phase, I usually take a day to write an update but last chapter alone took me more than 5 days. And the letter, took me for about 2 weeks. And the most devastating part was the end where Arnav goes into isolation, those 10 lines took me an entire day and there were several moments, where I had to step away from the computer as I couldnt write a letter and I had no idea how many times I cried, I angered myself for taking up this challenge.

Many including Me, was upset for the end I have chosen for Arnav; but as a writer, as someone who volunteered to motivate abused women, and as per the need of the story, the focus had to be on Khushi at that time. I dont mean to underestimate Arnav's pain at all.

I have to confess that I hate to separate Arnav and Khushi in any story but that ending was needed and my heartfelt thanks to everyone for understanding and respecting my decision even though you all didnt wish for the separation.

This piece is not going to be as emotional as TVK1 but emotions and outbursts do definitely come into picture when appropriate so save those tissue boxes.

The TVK1 blog is getting ready, once done, I shall update this post with the blog info.

If you happen to stumble upon Fighting Fate, you need to first read
The Valiant Knight - 1 (click the title) to understand their past.



Sit back and enjoy the trailer:



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkF37ix-i1A[/YOUTUBE]




Thank you all once again for joining this story...

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Chapter 9




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fighting Fate






CHAPTER 9

Teaser




Biting into a toast smeared with pesto sauce, Khushi hurriedly dumped her cell phone into her handbag checking the wall clock that chimed 9. It takes her approximately one hour to reach her work, 30mins by walk & 30mins by shared transportation. When Aman showed interest to arrange for car, She refused as she loved walking by the platform shops checking out local artifacts and moreover it gave her new pleasure and time to think about the man she loved in a whole different way.


Khushi jerked with the shrill ring of the door bell. Tucking the bread between her lips, dusting her hands she opened the door to the most unexpected person, Her husband.


Dressed in white cargo shorts, and steel grey shirt rolled upto his sleeves, He stood in all his majesty wearing his brown shades perfectly bridging on his eyes. Khushi's eyes rounded and her mouth wide opened in shock allowing the bread to sneak out coyly.


PS: Chapter 9 will be updated Monday Morning IST [US Sunday Night]


Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on new thread ..may u have many many many more :)



uff and wow teaser...hyeee wt a scene ...she there he there..and bread in between wah wah...ahem ahem...i am already lost in dream world...waiting eagerly for update now :)


p:s for u ...thanks for being always there

Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For the new thread my Dear Deepu...

I love loved the teaser... Ufff... he came to meet her... with a pack of questions... I am eagerly waiting for the answers as much as him... and my heart is beating fast as much as Khushi's...

Deepu... Please... Now I have to wait until Monday... It's better to wait without teaser you know... But after taking a taste of the next update... it will be very hard to wait more for having the complete essence of the update... But I know... Time means time... I will wait...with more than thousand eyes...

Ahha... how will Khushi react.. when she see him.. at her doorstep... Oh man how will Arnav react after seeing her right at the next door...





Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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for the new thread...
we did it...




and the teaser is amazing...is he really i her door step...can't wait for the updte...
Edited by Joarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all dii congrats for this new milestone in the journey of FF...






After reading the teaser I became shocked


and restless ... thinking why is he here???

Should I be happy or scared to read that he is on her temp. door step..


What can be the reason.. of his visit?? His care to check how's she doing??

Or to again warn her... ??

Aww.. my head started spinning of thinking all possibilities... and reason of his presence..


superb exciting teaser...

Dii, m agog for this update... haye wen this Monday will come..



Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new thread.🥳
Deeps you are getting better and better at teasing us. 😉

Arnav is at Khushi's door step. Now my brain is working overtime thinking of all the reasons why he is here, and her reaction to his arrival and what can happen next.
Questions and questions on my mind!!!!


Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread di 🤗

About the teaser...
Haila arnav got to know khushi is living next door?😲😲

or he is in illusion that aman a gya...although i don't think so
bcoz in last update he was all set to find her place 😆

Eagerly waiting for the update
khushi se zyada shock toh mujhe laga h uff


Edited by mwep - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The teaser looks so promising. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arnav ringing khushi's doorbell.. what was that? Now when will tom ngt come? Really deepthi we cant sleep tonight and very well know cant sleep even after ur update. U really r making us restless either with or without updates! !!!! Continue soon.

Also congrats on thread 3. 👏
Edited by kaprasin - 11 years ago

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