CHAPTER5 UPADTED SUPER DARK SANDHIR FIC : For Darkness shows the Stars

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spicyrays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

I just can say all d bst... Science nd computer both r vry interestin subjects... Hope u do grt in it

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

umm..I'll prefer future glimpses more

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Pariha khanna

@draco_is_mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

TEASER :

Randhir's character - 4

Future themes - 6

okay ! I counted them all and Future themes won ! (don't believe me ? count yourself !!)

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Sanyukta and Parth to get along well (no romantic relations so stop freaking ! by getting along well I mean that they are on first name basis )

Randhir to enter the Kashyap Mansion . A charming lad with a mask of indifference but is that his true face ?

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<TT> *I took out some extracts from future update , hope you like it .* </TT>

"Randhir is complicated." Parth finally admitted .

"He's dangerous , so don't get too close to him."

However he is --- ... he struggled to find a word."he ... he is ... Nice . "He could be nice when he wants to."

Sanyukta raised an eyebrow , "NICE ?"

"yes ! nice , It's just that people think so wrong of him. ... Parth looked nervous .

"Well I think he is spoiled ." Sanyukta added .

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Sanyukta took Randhir's luggage . Surprised by the sudden weight her hands sagged with the heavy weight and she almost dropped the suitcase on Randhir's foot .

She caught it , barely , but by accident . Her arm brushed with Randhir's hand and in no time she was thrown against the wall . Her head hit with the wall . She touched her head and felt liquid flowing from it . CRAP!

She looked up again , fearfully , and saw Randhir with a murderous glare on his face . Sanyukta's eyes darkened furiously , and she struggled to regain a grip on her temper and not lash out at him.

She wasn't going to blow her cover just because this stupid spoiled brat had anger management issues .

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"Have it your way , I would stop stuttering then , what do you want to know about , Randhir . She said in a tone that rivalled Randhir's.

Randhir smirked , "Why don't we talk about you ? who are you and where did you come from ?"

That's easy , Sanyukta thought . She had spent so much time memorizing her cover story that she could even recite it in her dreams .

"My name is Sanyukta Nehra . My parents died a few months ago . So I've been jumping around from place to place helping people."

"That's a very interesting story." Randhir said . "Why don't you tell me the truth ?"

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ps : You'll get the update on Saturday , so stay tuned .

kay kay that's all right now ...

I think I did a fairly good job but please drop your valuable suggestions/criticism/opinions about the teaser .

n . before I forget ...

Have you all listened to Problem by Ari Grande ?

GAWD ! am addicted to this song ... if you haven't I highly recommend it .

Anyway ,

You get an UPDATE ON SATURDAY so remember checking in .

Edited by draco_is_mine - 11 years ago

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Archana Kannan

@archakan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

wow loved ur teasor yaara, i am super excited for ur next update... pls update soon

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Mohini

@Mahi2012

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Hey awesm teaser dear. 🥳

Update soon.

Edited by Mohini2012 - 11 years ago

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

after reading thr teaser, i'm damn sure kuch dhamaka honewala hai... waiting for that...

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mohini

@kamyaka

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

What a dhamakedar teaser plz update so

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Priya sharma

@priya1101

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Blockbuster and dhamakedaar teaser,moi loved it.

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_Angel_love_

@_Angel_love_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Hey! Dear

Million $ $ $ $ $ $ $ teaser

love it😳😳

plzzz update soon ASAP

love

Bushra

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amulbaby06

@amulbaby06

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Its interesting 😊😊😊 waiting for update...

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