TR ss -Moving on ..together discontinued note pg 21) - Page 5

Originally posted by: chand91

nice cncpt

seriusly

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Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Nice concept :) lovely start its difficult to see taarey not with each other

Thanks and I do agree

Originally posted by: amridhi

The concept is nice. Loved a little but cuute tarey part. I wish tarey to b together again in the end. Thanks for the pm dr.

Thanks for liking it

Originally posted by: iluvrevolution

Nice story.. Please continue! Bechara Rey! But Taani was super happy 😕
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Hope Vishesh dies soon! Im a b**** 😆

Another story from u wooow😃 .. Pls can u give us regular updates..

And kriya ??? Uska kya

Thanks anyway 😃

hi everyone, well im surprised at the number of ppl who read it--and totally understand those who said u cant see TR seperate.
heres the second part- its not a story really..seems more like a sequence even to me
missing TR

part 2
Next evening - swayams place

Rey at the door about to ring the bell looking very happy with life when taani walked in her hands full of shopping bags and smiled vaguely seeing him continuing to talk over the mobile looking frustrated though

" ... i understand that but main nahi chahthi ki yeh kaam aap karein..." her voice now sharper," ...waise mujhe aapko reasons har waqt dene ki zaroorat nahin hain but let me tell you , i think ki aapko office time ke baad ghar jaana chahiye ...this work main kisi aur ko keh doongi..." she listened, softened her tone,"...nahin Mr Mehtha main gussa nahin hoon ," listened again smiled ..." no its okay.. u need the break after your last assignment bas , relax and abhi aap ghar jaaayiye" smiling she cut the call muttering loudly ---family time ka matlab hi nahi samajthe! Itne budde hogaye

And turned to rey who had been observing...no admiring her .. she was still so ....young, fresh and cute...always cute. abhi bhi wahin innocence hain even when she s scolding someone .wonder how she runs the offices ! asking someone to go home- weird forever weird

"tumne abhi abhi kisiko fire kiya?" he asked

"no rey.. unko apni annual leave di bas, i just thought ki he was overworked, i dont like anyone working after office hours bas. Aur ab help karenge please? " she said handing him a few bags ...she bent down and picking the key from under the mat, talking opened the door," i got delayed itna saara shopping baaki tha" he followed her inside and placed the bags to a side where she placed hers and she continuously talked,"aap itni jaldi aagaye? Sab log tho 8 o clock milne waale the...but aaj it was fun , saari girls ki shopping ...itne saalon baad sabse milrahin hoon tho ..."

"2 years and 7 months.." he cut her monologue, the smile on his face intact," tumhaare engagement ke baad you haven't met anyone ...except swayam and Sharon of course" standing in the middle of the living room, she saw him and met his eyes for the first time since yesterday that she came -her heart missed a beat at his warmth.. two years worth of conversation went on between them in a few seconds that they stared at one another ...life had treated both of them well the past two years and then both smiled at the same time.

taani s mobile msg beeped breaking the eyelock- Vishesh- she read it , frowned a little and shook her head , replied and looked up at rey who was watching her expressions change curiously.he bent forwards to her, piced a eyelash from her cheek and taking her fist palced it on it- ur wish!

She looked at him and then at the lash , smiled shook it off, he raised his eyebrows but she looking preoccupied said sharply ," rey aap mere shaadi mein kya gift denewaale ho?"

He looked caught ," ummm..."

"matlab kuch socha nahin aapne?" he shook his head thinking sarcastically -i ve given you up, main aur kya desaktha hoon ," good " she continued her tone serious," aap mereliye ek kaam karo. Aap jaanthe ho na Sharon bhabhi ka bada idea hain ki aap sab mere shaadi mein performance doge.." he nodded," wo cancel kardo" his face registered a surprised expression at the almost rough tone of her voice

"but kyun?"

"meri shaadi hain rey, i think ki meri marzi chalni chahiye and somehow i dont want a dance show in my wedding jahaan sab bhai ki team ko dekhe aur mujhe nahin.." she said edgily

"but taani Shaadi mein tho everyone will dance"

"that dance is okay but bhai ki ...ya aapki team ki dance ..ek professional performance mujhe nahin chahiye" she replied

"but you love dance ..."

He heard a laugh which he had definitely not heard from her before , it had a bitterness that he hadn't expected ," mujhe dance pasand tha rey, abh kuch khaas nahin... But thats not the point . Main yeh kehne ki koshish mein hoon ki mujhe d3 ki performance nahin chahiye apni shaadi mein ... vishesh ko tho lagtha hain ki mujhe issue nahin banana chahiye but..."she said her tone tensed and bitter almost stubborn

"yes" he replied ," we wont give any performance , i promise , u relax. Tumhe aur kisise kuch baat karne ki zaroorat nahin " he understood perhaps for the first time but he really understood- she wanted her wedding day to be hers alone , she didnt want to share it with swayams d3 or his d3 , she had a line drawn about how much she wanted from each person in her life and d3 didnt fit in her inner circle at all- sahin hain, team ki aur uski tho hamesha se zyaada banthi nahin thi but dance...that irked him. usse dance itna pasand tha..meri wajah se ... He felt a guilt seep up maybe she had changed more than he knew

"thanks rey" she said her tensed face relaxing," warna mujhe sabse fight karna padtha" she smiled suddenly all bitterness forgotten ,"esp Sharon bhabhi ke saath"

"fight and you? Itni si baat ke liye?"he returned the smile

"haan...kyun nahin? main badal gayi hoon rey,badalna pada hain... ab main aapki sweet si cute si angel si taani nahin rahin" she said smiling and making him smile back at the innocence with which she said it but she stopped realising that she had said aapki taani he noted it too but before any awkwardness could set in , she spoke up again quickly

"main coffee banao aap keliye?" she asked turning away...he had another glimpse of the same conversation before ( the convo before dil ibadat) and laughed nodding his head " has kyun rahe ho?" she asked moving to the kitchen

"no just thinking ki tum ...matlab kal bhi sab keliye tumne dinner banaya.. i mean you are practically running your tauji s business but still..." and stopped himself

"main housewife material hoon " she completed, he laughed uncertainly," its not linked rey" she continued smiling moving to and fro making the coffee," you can be both...I am both, bas choice ki baat hain!" her voice serious, though the smile stayed

his eyebrows raised he replied, "i can see that " and after a moment he blurted what he had been longing to say since he saw her yesterday," honestly its good to see you..achhi lagrahin ho" she grinned at him blushing slightly at the compliment ," and looks like khush bhi ho? " he asked tentatively

her grin faltered a little , he noted it but before he could comment," pretty much,overall haan... aur aap ? " he shrugged smiling.

taani observed him taking in his happy go lucky, warm sunny nature just the same, more warmer and sunnier if possible than before.he was still the same friends to all REY , the same old wall that people tended to lean on when required...she had seen that while meeting the team yesterday , bas yeh difference hain ki ab aapko sahara dene ke liye koi hain, and thought of kriya, jo aapki tarah strong hain jiske sapne bilkul aapke jaise hain, jiski duniya aapki duniya se alag nahin and most importantly jiski baat aap maanthe ho aur jiske saath aap wahin mistakes nahin karoge jo humne kiya tha saath rehthe ya saath chodne ke waqt and for a second try as she did she couldn't control the returning gloominess that had enveloped her the past few days , the jealousy that had never been there when she was actually with him, she clenched her fingers on her dupatta to stop her hands from shaking

he could vaguely grasp the changing expressions in her eyes , her pride in him replaced by some odd negative feeling that didnt suit her soft features at all...there was some bitterness in her, some jealousy... he clicked his fingers to distract her but she suddenly moved to the stove ...taking the kettle off the stove to avoid the coffee from spilling over, ouch- she had touched it with bare shaking hands , rey moved quickly , pulled her to the sink, held her hands under the tap running the water over her burn.

For a second, time moved backwards for both of them as rey held her hands stroking them under the tapwater and looked into her eye- reminding her of their time long gone - the blush on her cheek was unmistakeably present , the pressure on her hand increased a bit and he felt a prick on his palm-ouch he left her hand and glanced at what had pricked him

It was her engagement ring- a beautiful big blue diamond ring- that reminded him that time had moved on..they had moved on.. she caught sight of it too and then held reys hand in her warm hands to see if he was hurt- just a scratch. Satisfied , she left his hand and moved back to the coffee in silence- without a word

Handing him a cup , she took her own and moved to the front room asking," tho aap batao kaise ho?" breaking the special moment avoiding any awkwardness

He followed her saying cheekily," just as you left me 2 yrs back at your engagement " she looked back at him , realised his flirting and shaking her head- he was such a charmer-" no, just as i wanted you three years later, personally happy and professionally successful" there was a moment of silence--- rather of no words spoken but heard

im happy rey ki aapki dance ko lekar jo bhi sapne the wo sab poore horahen hain...ki jo aap chaho jisse aap chaho wo hameshe aapke paas hi hain

really ?? but jisse bhi main chahoo wo saare tho mere paas nahin hosak..

paas nahin tho saath hi sahin she smiled , his face mirrored hers- the same affection written all over

i know im happy taani aur isliye bhi ki tum apne life mein itne successful banrahin ho...ki tum bhi khush ho..just stay like this smiling all the time

swayam walked in from outside then and saw them- smiling and talking easily with coffee cups in their hands - the warmth in their eyes for each other seemed to pervade the air all around---it struck him do saal baad bhi, life mein itne changes ke baad bhi the feelings the same. he sensed himself becoming a little uncomfortable at the familiarity which they still shared , inspite of them moving on , being with others dono phir bhi saath hain ..is this actually okay? Still looking at them he had moved forwards and hit a stool nearby making them turn to him, they smiled at him happily without any consciousness or awkwardness and taani said," Hi bhai! Aap kab aaye? Sab kahaan hain? "

" tuje kya hua? Suddenly tired?" rey asked casually leaning back on the sofa

"behen ki shaadi hain, obviously im tired" rey made a OO face

"achha swayam main kya soch rahaan tha , we shouldn't dance in taani s wedding, i mean pehle se hi tumhaare aur Sharon ke parents ke beech itne saare problems hogaya hain , on top of it..."

"taani ne mana kiya?" swayam asked sharply, rey stopped the bakwas and nodded," itni ziddi hogayi hain yaar..shes so unreasonable aaj kal.."swayam looked angry

" cmon swayam uski shaadi hain, let her have some choice ...agar wo nahin chahthi.."

"but kyun nahin chahthi?? koi reason hain? " rey hesitated, swayam noticed it and suddenly decided he didnt want to know anything more, " ab Sharon ka planning sab..."

"Sharon i ll handle..." swayam gave a really ? look, rey grinned ," if not tum handle karloge... swayam, maine promise kiya ki hum performance nahin denge" rey completed, swayam looked at his earnestness again struck by how much rey would do for taani and nodded. Rey s face broke into a smile and doing a thumbs up went back to stretch on the sofa.

Looking at him relaxed , swayam deciding better ask," aur tumhaara teen din ka somethings wrong phase hogaya?"his voice sarcastic slightly

Rey looked like he didnt know what swayam spoke of and then remembering ," haan yaar, yaad hi nahin rahaan. Dont know what was wrong with me! Kriya s so angry with me about it" he smiled thinking of her," abhi usse manane ka time nahin mila hain mujhe. I irritated her for three days" he shook his head dismising it," whatever it was its over bas "

"jab tumhe pata nahin ki kya wrong tha tho tumhe yeh kaise pata ki wo teek hogaya?" swayam asked him curiously

Rey shrugged," just a hunch swayam...i know its over- the bad feeling , the bad time ,the pain- pata hain? jaise ki someone s twisting ur arm like that..the confusion...jo bhi tha its gone.." shaking his head, "wonder what was wrong! Abhi tho mujhe ek freedom si mehsoos horahin hain bas like im flying" he imitated flying with his arms stupidly

Taani in the kitchen saw them talking as she listened to Vishesh and felt far better than she had been feeling the past few days- she shuddered a second remembering her state of mind recently - now everything seemed so peaceful so fine...she felt so free"

Originally posted by: prtn

Ok will definitely complete ...thanks

thanxxx!!!!

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unres
loved it totally!!!!
awesome update dear!!!
missed reading ur work a lot!!!

nice update..
i want kria to be cupid here..
kria shld realise rey his feeling for rey

Amazing update... Pehle waale story se bohot accha hain...
Keep writing n uPdate soon