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Hey Guys! Myself Jackie! I Finally came back to writing after so long! 😆
I hope this time i keep going!
I've written my part 1 of the story! It's kind of short but Hope you guys like it! Do give feedback & suggestions! 😃
Dard Ka Ehsaas
Kinshuk Mahajan As Ishaan
Shilpa Anand As Ria
PART 1
FLASHBACK
Sometimes in life, there comes situations where you try to save and protect your loved ones the best way possible no matter what you do for them even when it's not a happy note.
Two brothers named Ishaan and Nishant. Both loved and cared each other dearly. They didn't have anybody else except each other. Ishaan was the younger brother who was 11 years old and very naughty and mischievous. Nishant was the older bother who was 15 years old and responsible and looked out for Ishaan. He tried his best to keep him happy. Both loved to play football with each other. Little did they know this would be the last day they would see each other.
Three guys the same age as Nishant walk up to them and stop the ball. One of them was named Vishal. A tough guy who looked like a giant. Vishal pushes Nishant on the ground.
Ishaan: "Nishant Bhaiya!"
Vishal's foot is on Nishant's head which is bleeding continously.
Ishaan tries to get to Nishant but the other two boys stop him. Ishaan squirms and picks up dirt from the ground and throws it in their eyes. A gun falls on the ground. Ishaan picks up the gun and points it at Vishal.
Ishaan: (trembling) "Leave my brother alone!"
Vishal (laughing scarcatically): "You going to shoot me little boy?" Try! Shoot me!"
Ishaan trembles more as Vishal walks slowly over to him.
Vishal: "I think your brother has left you, little boy."
Ishaan: "No he never leave me! You're lying! You're lying!"
A shot is fired. Vishal falls to the found. Ishaan is trembling as he drops the gun and Vishal is laying in front of his feet bleeding. He runs over to Nishant.
Ishaan: (tearing eyes) "Nishant Bhaiyaa! Wake up! You can't leave me!"
As he hears police car syrons, he gets frightened and runs away.
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(Phone Ring)
Vishal's mom faints on the ground.
Ria: "Mom! What happened!?"
Ria picks up the phone and answers it. Her face gets serious with tears coming of of her eyes. "Vishal Bhaiya died..."
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Ishaan and Ria, both 11 years old and lost their brothers. What will happen after 10 years? Will Ishaan be able to get out of this situation?
Will Ria take revenge for her older brother?
End of Part 1
TO BE CONTINUED...😳
~Jackie~
Part 2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4103745&PID=110591850&#p110591850
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