ArShi FF: Like Never Before #2 (#3 added)

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beenish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Mine 😎 😛
yuppie me first 🥳🥳🥳🥳

Edited..!!!

so Soman (I take right name naa ??) had finally Face Arnav Singh Raizada huhh 😃 I i loved the way he make her feel so Special just the way Arnav take care of his Precious Wife .. I am so damn happy for them finally both are in love with Each other ;) And the welcome scene aah just warm me up I was blushing like hell .. the way Arnav hold her uff Candy You make my harmons go wild Dammit ☺️ , What the Heck ?? Her Arm id burnt 😲 Thats Why she wear full sleeves .. She was just a baby dammit just a 4year old baby and they let her Boil Water when she was just Damn 4 year Old 😡 .. I want to kill that ladies such a bitches Both were huhhh.. I loved the way Arnav make her feel so special .. Amazing update Candy :) P.S.. Loads of love 🤗

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madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

An Awesome Mind blowing, super duper update

PART A- Dhamakedar entry of ASR in Soman's office.. and Soman lost his voice and bolti band.. like the way Arnav spoke..."husband of Katherine Arnav Singh Raizada..😳"

loved it when he said:

being passionate about Arnav Singh Raizada's possessions, that's where the business gets.. Doomed!"👏⭐️

what a ASR way to convey with whom he try to mess up- those 2 para where Arnav said how important khushi is for him and then what happen to who try to mess up...⭐️

SUPERB shows how much Arnav loves khushi and his protectiveness and possessiveness amazing👏👏⭐️

The way he felt alive when he got messages from khushi..👏

Khushi is also deeply in love with Arnav.. the way she misses him and the way both of them feeling special due to the acts they are doing to each other filling the gap which was in their heart..

the welcome Arnav gets when he reached home.. felt so alive as Someone is there to care for him, ask to him about his day

the way he offers his help for cooking.. (overwhelm khushi cried little surprised arnav allowed it)...

PART B- Arnav teased her while helping in cooking😉.. both of them enjoying while cooking.. oh that small accident while cooking and great ASR's eyes were teared up😭 the way he said Don't you silence me woman! Just stop all this.. Come here.." shows his worry and pain..

totally loved it when Arnav said -"Well, not in our home and not with you at all.."

The way Khushi was more concern about Arnav's state then her burning..

the way both of them can read each other and khushi realised Arnav didnt know and then finally she shared 1 more painful chapter of her past

the way Arnav felt so proud of her wife, she is true fighter.. and the way he cares those scars as if by his touch it will vanish👏⭐️.. his magic word Thank You made khushi empty her pain which for so many years wass inside her..

WOw!! Arnav called it Stroke👏⭐️

the way Khushi spoke:

I'm used to them.. I'v got no other choice.. I do wish I.. I dint have to have them, but.."(HOPE Arnav will make her this wish true)

Arnav reply - "This is you Khushi.. .. .. Or any more.." shows his unconditional love for Khushi

oh my god seriously she was 4 yrs😭 how cruel those ppl were😡

the way Arnav said - I want you to Trust...part us

finally Arnav managed to bring a smile on her face and the way they said "😳

He wants to stop her cooking - (why dont he made her agreed to get chef to help her so that she dont have to do much cooking by herself, she can supervise it)

Wow!! Arnav said it all- in last para👏😳

Thanks for the lovely update and PM..⭐️

Edited by madhu1210 - 11 years ago

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Sravya/Sravs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Res

Aww damn! I am here in second page. Nothing to worry too about that, First page res's congrats, I'm jealous of you guys 😭

***Edited***

Vera, you really are awesome, you know that right? These two updates of chapter nine are just mind blowing, to be completely honest. As told you before too, you will never leave back from making me speechless with your updates, you really always do an awesome work! 👏

First part, ASR in full force. It's been like days since I have actually came to read about ASR here. And finally. I know eventually he will be here, he has to be here, but seeing him in such a force I really was grinning. ASR always rock! I'm completely biased... 😃

Soman, mud in your face. 😆 He got the correct does for even trying to eye Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada. Haa, heaven in spelling this name. Grr...no I'm not a creeper, but I love the sounding, I told ya so before. Double does wasn't it? Day after day he got them, and both, not so surprisingly and ever so obviously from wife and then husband. He got it damn right. And it wasn't even surprising that I was having a full and fun laugh at the state of him in front of ASR. 🤣

Arnav and his thoughts, his admitting to himself of his words and all everything was such a nice part to read, you know? It just brings that kind of serene feeling reading about him thinking and admitting all, don't know why. I just love reading about their feelings, I guess. So much actually. 😳

Every time when the update comes to focus on Arnav and Khushi, the whole serenity of the update till then changes, if it was on fury, or intimidating or any other it just turns into a beautiful pleasant part in moments. That's why I love reading about them. ❤️

You really beautifully handle in explaining both Arnav and Khushi's feelings, their thoughts, their ecstasy and their pain that would make me feel everything you intend to happen with them at that time. Every time they feel happy, it makes us smile, anything to feel funny, we laugh too, if they are shown in pain we cry along, everything just happens in your story like it was naturally intended to happen, are you some destiny writer or what Vera? 😛

Khushi's story is being unveiled slowly step by step. And every time one of her painful and horrible memories of her pasts makes a way into the story, that always makes me wince at that. How cruel can someone will be? A four year old was left to boil water? Yes, they are cruel, the Gupta's have been a bunch of pathetic crap but nothing, but weren't they even moved seeing a small girl? How more low can they be? 😡

But why isn't Arnav's past events still not being told? I mean yes, he's a bit reserved, he's not like sharing person and all, but neither was Khushi before she started telling him part and part of her past at times relevant. True, he's being getting hold of all the things he thought he would have been enjoying as a child, or he missed in his life, but should he be telling his past? Khushi can understand even if he doesn't tell her anything, but even he has to spill out, how many days is he going to make them rot in him? His may not be so cruel as Khushi's have been, but still, I guess, he should also start speaking about his past.

Anyways, I still am loving the deepening bond between them. Love has been bloomed, now has been recognized too. What more can be elating than this? This really really is getting more and more exciting, I'm honest. 😃

Will be waiting, for umm...saturday, right? Saturday! You're going to be hunted if we don't get the update on that day, unless until you have a very strong valid reason for the postpone. 😉

Love you Vera, hugs & Kisses. Take care. 🤗

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago

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Moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Res!!

I am late too 😭

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Ch 9-A

Chav itna ASR ka over dose dogi toh mera ye Kamzor dil kaise bardashth kar payega?? 😲

Taking in the paling and trembling form, Arnav walked dangerously slow, his every step a perfect analogy to that of the cruelest predators.. Settling himself on the chair facing the CEO's majestic chair,

Uff!!

tilting his head, not quite looking at the sweating man, Arnav leaned back in his chair, his hands now placing back the paper weight he swirled a moment ago and crossed his arms yet once again, before his cold steel primal eyes met Soman's black terrified ones...

"Sit down Mr.Soman.. Excuse me for not having asked your permission before I took my seat.."

Pant gila ho gaya hoga bichare ka! 😆

Arnav's eyes never left Soman's as the mass of wrecked nerves sat in a thud, stumbling upon his own feet, gulping down almost for every 5 seconds.. Arnav showed no mercy in giving any privacy as Soman began sweating and drinking water..

😆 Aab toh pakka!

"Let me introduce myself formally... I'm Arnav Singh Raizada.. CCO of AR Corps International lmt.."

And I am swooning!! Chav!

Forwarding his hand, Arnav shook Soman's cold trembling one just once, with perfect firmness... Moving back to his former position, displaying his perfectly sculpted and well built body, that popped out from the top 2 buttons undone and the triceps bulging at the crossing of his arms, Arnav continued in a dead cold voice...

"And the husband of Katherine Arnav Singh Raizada.."

My mind only registered the part I have highlighted And I am dead... not exactly!

phir aage kaun padega? *wriggles her brows*

"But passionate about someone else's belongings? That's where the business becomes black and dirty..."

"But being passionate about Arnav Singh Raizada's possessions, that's where the business gets.. Doomed!"

You know Chav after this dialogue all I wanted to do jump up form my seat and whistle in Khsuhi style... IT WAS SO DAMN ASRish!! And wow SO damn stylish and hot in every sense.👏

"Being honest, sincere and intelligent alone wont make you a world class business man, Soman.. Ruthless, petrifying, merciless and murderous.. I hope you know what those words mean.. They are equally needed.. And, I for one, to bring my company to this stage from scratches, have them dug in me deeper and better than the first set of qualities.."

Faintwa me... heart attackwa for Soman 😆

the part I made italic,while reading all I did was imagine ASR and tell you what? Whatever I visualized made my heart race 😳

When I'm there, I do not want anything to pop up which she has to deal with.. She is my wife and the only string that is MINE and holds me alive.. She dint want to worry me, neither did I want her to.. We left the topic there.. But that doesn't mean I did.. I have my sources.. I'm Arnav Singh Raizada, after all, and she's Katherine Arnav Singh Raizada, MY WIFE.. For the clever business man that you are, how did you miss this part?"

Hayee! Sabko mile aaisa pati... so possesive, so protective...

Soman ki toh lag gayi!! 😆

We have not an ounce doubt on that... Soman tu toh gaya... I mean wiped off the face of earth.. Sahi kaha na Chav😎

And then you made us emotional again showing the vulnerable Arnav *pouting*

"I.. I missed you..."

"Believe me, I did too.. Honestly.."

Aww sweethearts!! 😊

He felt his heart find its real beat when Khushi blushed and hid herself into his chest..

☺️

"Mind me helping?"

Such a sweetheart!😃

"You will?"

"You tell me.."

"I mean.. You.. You don't have to, if you don't want to.. Actually it aint needed, I'l do it.."

"I want to.."

Karne de Khushi, sab ki itni khushnaseebi nehi hoti!! ask me

"I wont let you, ever..."

my condition!

9 B

Batao!

Bina hath jale kisne kab khana pakaya hai? 😲

Par haye!!

I tell you Chav Arnav jaisa pati care karne ke liye ho toh I can burn my finger willingly... err wrist!

"Don't you silence me woman! Just stop all this.. Come here.."

"Well, not in our home and not with you at all.."

Smiling through her wet eyes, Khushi watched her husband in absolute adoration as he washed her hand and placed the ice cubes around the burn, blowing studiously, his eyes keeping on blurring.. I cant lose her.. No.. I'v just got her.. I'm not losing her, never! I can not lose her!!! That was all Arnav had been chanting in his mind,

Aww such care... too precious and such adoration and protectiveness... Khushi you are too lucky girl "J"

"Arnav it just spilled, that too just a bit.."

Slumping on his butt, Arnav snapped at his wife, his worry and fear being over powered by his anger, when he saw her behaving as if nothing happened at all.. She's burned, dammit!

"Khushi.. Shut up.."

ASR calm down. She is right.

"I'm alright Arnav, truly.. And besides, I'm used to it.."

And we finally come near the revelation...

The moment Arnav's burning gaze met hers, Khushi was struck with the painful realization that her husband dint know..

We don't know too... care explaining??? 😳

The moment he saw his wife look deep into his eyes, as if pleading him, all his fury, worry and every other emotion went to vacuum, making him aware of nothing but him and her... He saw her turn back and take a deep breath before she lifted off her black full sleeved T shirt and stood before him in khakhi shorts and a black brazier, her hair pulled to her front, making her pristine white back and her arms exposed to him...

And besides, I'm used to it..

Arnav couldn't breathe, let alone understand what was happening... His wife was entirely burnt.. The left half of her back and the whole of her left hand were scarred with burns... Gulping down the rising pain, Arnav took wobbling baby steps towards Khushi..

Indeed hard time for Arnav. The person who he loved so dearly had experienced such pain in some point of time in her life, had to be painful for him to digest.

But Chav somehow I had guessed it...

"Does.. Does it pain?"

"Do they hurt?"

Wow!! Just wow! I am speechless... You know Chav I felt I could hear his tender voice while I read... too good.

"Scars? No.. Not anymore.. Memories? Always.."

True!

"Thankyou.."

"For trusting me with this.."

Aur kitna pyara ho sakta hai tera ASR Chav! Dil khush kar ditta! I am so in love with him 😳

the burden must have been a cumulative of ever since she got these stokes.. That's what Arnav calls them.. Strokes.. Painting on her body that spoke how brave and strong his wife is.. It dint matter what they are for Khushi

And yet again I lost my heart to him!!🤗

"This is you Khushi.. The whole of YOU.. And I'm not going to take any less.. Or any more.."

and I had happy tears in my eyes... So beautiful! He is a Gem Chav... Just so beautiful in and out and I am envious of Khushi ... so damn lucky she is.

And that was the moment Khushi realized that she isirrevocably and unconditionally in love with her husband.. For now, forever and beyond that, irreversibly!

Yayeee!!

I was grinning like a fool!😃 Arnav and Khushi both realizing their love for each other... Just great.

He carried her back to the kitchen and made her sit on the counter top while he made some omelets and fried some beacon... He carried her back, not speaking a word, but holding her to him as she wrapped her legs around him and clung onto him like a kid.

Bhagwan ka sukar hai ke uska kamar sahi salamat hai!! 😆

But that was very cute and lovely.

And that pool side conversation, so emotional, heart warming and lovely that I had a smile throughout on my face while reading.

"I may stop cooking for myself.. But I'l never stop doing that for you..."

"Why..?"

"Coz I love to see you love the food I make.."

"For me.."

"For you.."

😳 ❤️

Happiness and joy of utmost purity filled the Mansion and its owners bringing them the official news that their lives will now be lightened and loved, filled with jubilations and relations, bound by love, love and love Like Never Before...

Like always a beautiful and heart warming end of a great chapter.

Edited by Moumita_2014 - 11 years ago

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khareshelley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

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--unres--

update start with bang and end with emotional note..!!!!!!1

ASR in action.. he only roars and soman is sweating..haha,,... love his condition..!!!!!

now he will not dare to come infront of her.. or try to flirt with any other woman...!!!!!

his expression while reading her simple concern msgs..some one is there for him too..!!!!!1

and waht a welcome hug .. it feels too good when some one is there who is waiting for other ..!!!!1

they both missed each other.. and their convo is so sweet..loving it..!!!!!!

part B is my fav..!!!!
they both were cooking dinner.. he is teasing.. she is blushing all time..!!!1

she burn her wrist and he got scared..!!!!!

he is so damm possessive. and i m loving it...!!!!!!

i cried with khushi... she had to go through so much...!!!!

how can some be so cruel to 4 year child..!!!!1

aranv is really gem.. he soothes her pain..!!!

he called it stroke.. she lay her soul bare to him.. wants him too see her vulnerability..!!!!

this is the best moment of her life.. !!!!

her sharing her worst fear.. not bothering ot cover herself..every emotions is so beautifully written..!!!!!!!

the hug.. the kiss.. everything is so beautiful..!!!!!! once again i fell in love with this arshi..!!!!1

u r really an amazing writer..!!!

lots of love..!!!!!

waiting for neat update..!!1

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Late again 😭 .

Late wala res.

With a late wala edit.

Hmmm... I lived the update. Although I was a little scared of his possessive attitude of Khushi being his and no one is allowed to look at her let alone talk but I loved the way he handled Soman. That guy must be pissing in his pants sitting on his chair under the burning gaze of The Ruthless, Arrogant and murderous ASR.

In this spitting rage he asked for some anchor to holed him back for committing what he wants to and Khushi's message popped up making him realize that he is no longer alone he had some one for himself to worry, to care and to crake care of his preference and cook for him 'Like Never Before'.

And on the other hand Khushi realized the same that she has someone to look forward too, to prepare food keeping someone in mind and sure that someone will praise her effort. Someone completely her, her husband. The moment which followed on there coming in each other sight at the front door was a moment of joy when there sole danced with it partner on finally finding the other in there arm.

The intimate hug and pepper kisses was oh hay... But glad Arnav stopped it as Khushi's muttering showed that she was not yet ready for their first kiss, yet.

What happened in kitchen with Khushi burning her hand was visible more painful for Arnav than Khushi. He was crying for her burnt and pain and was chanting that he just found her and he can't lose her. That really scared me that if by any unfortunate reason they part or he losses Khushi, he might lose his sanity too.

Finally the truth and the pain behind Khushi wearing the full sleeved t-shirts and dresses was revealed. But I liked how you portrayed Arnav's thought as it is 'strokes of painting' showing how courageous, strong and never giving up attitude reason his wife is to endure such pains and yet not bowing her head down.

What such or many more burns like this will matter not only in scares but in memory too when you have. A husband like Arnav who would try taking away each and every pain from your life with his caresses like words, touch, kisses, and never dying love.

They both confessed there feeling for other not in words but through not masking there feeling of love for other in there eyes or face, they said it in words too what if tegu were not the same three words. Because the words used and emotions shared was much more that those three words can contained.

There first intimate touch and yet the sat in each other's arms holding other as there life depended on this embrace. Arnav fed her with her sitting in his lap realizing and accepting that it her turn for the day to mend the broken pieces and his care, protection and love will do the required.

His request to not cook and Khushi's reply that she won't stop cooking for him, For Him. It filled any space or corner of his heart with her love for him, soon he too will accept that is is irrevocably in love with his wife, just like she did.

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

i have no words to say any thing..it just awesome...i just hope they heal each other like never before

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Loved this marvellous update
wow asr meets that evil jerk S and threaten him for being flirty towards his wife
and show him his place 👏
😆
mind blowing
and then the answer of khushi wearing full sleeves is also out
loved how arnav called the burnt marks the STROKES OF BRAVERY
Wonderfull
and then the soothing part where arnav comforting and calming khushi
and in return khushi embracing arnav with all her love and care
adorable
👏 ⭐️ 👏
thanks for updating such amazing parts

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