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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

part 56
awesome dear...
lovely...
too good...
finally they came over the fear and past...
oh what a coincidence...
they are one now after 6 years...
cont soon dear...

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manali garg

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

amazing story. loving it. update soon

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

i used to read this story then I became inactive! Today I came back wondering whether this story is still going! Am so happy to find this still going!!!

I shall read the parts all n comment soon!

If ua PM-ing.. Do PM me!!! This is the first FF i have read in IF n I loved this!!!

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MDKSSM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Superb ff i loved it just read alll prts updt soon

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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Just came across your stroy loved everything about it on how you wrote the past and present in one chapter after another, I felt every emotion on what was happing
Can't wait to read more of it I know it's ending soon glad I read this one

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Farwa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Chapter 55

baap rey those rascals lol... they r enjoying and having fun at the cost of their parents... hahaha to get onto each other they no doubt were digging their own graves lol... but I just loved how Amber and Aditiya told the truth when Akash lied n When Arnav like a kid told Akash not to laugh as he himself got caught... so the love birds r off now to spend their private time privately to accomplish their private goals. loved the update

CHAPTER 56

So finally they did it. Both Arnav n Khushi fought with their demons successfully and though Khushi was fighting little more still it doesn't make Arnav's attempts any less... Felt so bad for Khushi when she cried... how both of them must b wishing tht wht happened 6 years back wouldn't have happened at all... really loved the chapter...

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 10 years ago

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just_juhi

@just_juhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Ok, I don't know where to start. I just spent a good portion of this afternoon reading this FF from start till the most recent chapter and... This FF made me laugh, go awww, get emotional, jab at my mobile in frustration and... Fall in love with Arshi all over again!!! I absolutely love what you did with the characters in this fic. You've written them so well, its as if they're real people like you and me. Also, the fact that they're in Toronto right now is an added bonus. 😃 (yayy!!) However long the rest of this ride is, I hope to be here- if there is a PM list I'd love to be on it, otherwise, I'll gladly stalk this fic. Looking forward to all the future chapters!

Edited by juhi611 - 10 years ago

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Wonderful chapter!!!... Great work...
Finally they were able to slay the demons of their past. Arnav and Khushi understanding each other's feelings,their hesitations and them conquering over their fears are scripted really well!!!
Continue soon!! :)

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

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Originally posted by: HUMII10592
Now thats was an awesome blossom update

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: Hina69
Beautiful!!!!!☺️

Thanks!😉

Originally posted by: sfghfj
awesome update.. loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: 1chilly
They did it atlast.
this was needed for them to lay the past at rest.
Khushi was with Arnav all the way and they did this together.
Loved how Arnav took care not to hurt her.
How he was concerned about her comfort all through.
Hopefully now they can lay the past at rest and live a happy fulfilling life together.
Beautifully written, Katie.
Read it on the blog and here on IF.

Yeap...the deed has been done at last! ;) This was the last dagger in the demons' hearts to put it metaphorically...demons slayed, marriage consummated and all but the fact remains that he will always be a tad bit more careful with her and that is something that is never leaving...once bitten twice shy...in this case, once guilty twice as cautious...the demons have been dealt with now...even if the past comes to haunt them again, both of them know they can handle it because they've already done so.😉

Originally posted by: shaferoz18
Pm me the blog link pls

Done!😃

Originally posted by: addictedx53
Khushi took the initiative to bury her & Arnav's demons...to success! This, after 8 years & 2 children...it was like a first time but with loads of apprehensions!
Even though this will not make such a difference to that level of togetherness which they have achieved, yet it will complete their being together again in all ways.

Khushi took the initiative to bury the demons and then following his example, he took the initiative the second time to defeat his own...as of now, only 6 years...if I had made it 8 years, you guys would have killed me.😆...this was simply that last step to become one in all-ways..and you're right...it doesnt change the emotional bond them share much..it add a little more strength to it but that's about it...

Originally posted by: gowri_19
At last arshi fought their demons about that needed that was a single thing that has not left to lead a happy married life in whole sense... Due to their love they were able to forget it

Yeap! at last that last war is over! Physical intimacy is so unimportant but it can make their emotional life a bit difficult if they cant be one in all ways...this just erases all of that tension...they were one mind, soul, and heart long ago and now they're one physically too.😉

Originally posted by: DIYA_21
Awesome Update.. Arnav-Khushi united in all way with each other now... Their life will be like happily ever after story.. Waiting for next.

Thank you! yeap, now they're united mind, heart, soul, and body. I don't know about the happily ever after but considering the past, yes it will be.😉

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#430

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Originally posted by: Snowy8
wonderful chapter..finally both battled against their inner demons & it marked another new wonderful beginning in their relationship..😊

Thank you bebe! Yeap, at last the demons are defeated and the two of them have united...in a way its a milestone crossed and in a way its a new beginning.😳

Originally posted by: aquagal
I read the blog version & I don't know why it couldn't be posted here with a mature warning. Anyways here's my comment (same as on blog 😉)
Loved it. Finally they won over the demons of their past together and with each others support.
It takes gust and determination to not bow down but fight headlong with such deep fears. Khushi is one brave woman. She remembered everything, not only the incident but also that it was the same date. Payal's words worked wonders on her. And the best thing was that the other waited when one was afraid, asking if they were fine, if they want to stop.
Lovely.

Two reasons why I couldnt post it here with a warning...since the blog version had Naina's contribution...she would have to be okay with me posting it here which she is not. she has had issued on IF with people/Mods and she doesnt want her stuff on IF so I have to respect her wishes and the second reason is that I've had some issues with the mods...its sort of the "baaki kare toh raas-leela, main karu to character dheela" issue...I know other writers post explicit stuff here and it passes by but my stuff would get flagged so its better to avoid all those issues.😊

Now my response to your comment: Thank you!😳 it was high time that they reunited in every way possible and just like everything else they've overcome, they had to fight together for this too...Payal's words regarding the dishwasher had a greater impact on Khushi than payal will ever know...Khushi took that extra step to make sure that the "replacement of memories" happened on the same day the horrible memories were created...rather than remembering that day for its negative memories, they will now remember it as the day they defeated their demons.😳

Originally posted by: nano123
Superbe update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Arilip
Awesome 😛...perfect blend of emotions n intimacy... I read it on blog n do think it was needed to be explicit ...

Thank you!! I normally dont write these scenes in explicit detail but my friend made that easy for me with her contribution.😆 the version on IF is what I originally had and the version on the blog is what we got after Naina edited it.😳

Originally posted by: dolly477
awesome

Thank you!

Originally posted by: jpjinadari21
Awesome! And a long update! I loved it. Thankx dear

Thank you! My average chapter length has become longer too...I used to write 5-7 pages per chapter now I usually reach 9-11 pages easily!😆 good to know that you guys aren't complaining that the chapters are "too long"😉