Originally posted by: arnavini
OK.. so now I am done with reading chapter 54...
we are just an update far from end.. aww.. I feel like we want more, but I guess as a writer, you know where the story needs a closure.. so chalalege...
About the update..
So, Anjali is here ... finally A man's life will also gloom like Arnav, getting the love of his life.. I am happy .. In fact, I was feeling bad for Amman, for not getting Anjali yet... but finally I like how Arnav get her here in Canada...
Arnav went to India for the hearing of Priya's case... and again the same sleepless nights and the nightmares.. god. I felt bad, but I guess now it's time that they change it, I really liked how well Khushi always made him feel better and stood by him.. In fact, when I read that how she wanted to accompany him, but being a possessive father , he left her with the kids for their better care.. That was a really nice part to read.
Khushi, she too not only trusted Arnav, bt also the family, for her Kids that they can take better care of her kids in case of her absence... that too much lovely and insightful of her.
The video chat part was also grt.. In fact where should I say that it was not good.. in every line I was awing... really yaar u are splendid ...
Akash, hats off man, he is really a possessive friend... who even after this long days still want to be assured and keep an eye on them just to safeguard her friend... even sometimes that may look odd to others.. bt I like it , as it showed a frd who want to stand by his frd's side in her every step and want to protect her..
Really, you have showed a great bond btwn Akash and Khushi, and Arnav and Payal.
Khushi, I sometym feel is more stronger in them , as she fight back with he demons , in fact with both of theirs demon, while Arnav gt scared, just with the feeling that maybe he may lose her.. I hope now they overcome this fear.
Khushi, is genius , she how well gt the idea to change the things and odds of their life, catching the lines of payal...Katie, you are really brilliant to put the things in an effective way.
I loved, reading the part where Arnav surprise them and Khushi and he without caring for the family... Hug and infact gt all mushy and passionate with each other.. aww... I was insanely blushing reading that sequence.
Aditya and Amber... I missed them in this update , as their part was less this tym.. bt I know it was all needed to show the other things...i feel so distinct to read how this small kids gt tensed to see that their father is out of place.. do again their parents fought.. aww.. pretty innocent kids. how small things occupy a kids heart..
I may have forget earlier to say that , I like no no in fact love to read wen everyone in the family say Amber as the copy of ASR.. I feel elated , reading the girl Amber.Her maturity, her seriousness, her likings.. damn excellent.
I wish , I could read more of amber and Arnav... bt koi nahe .. this was also more than for me.. as to read such a lovely bond.. that was so well written by you that made me greedy...
Katie, you are fantastic and marvelous writer... I really admire the person u are , as ur writing gives a reflection of ur mature thoughts.. u are seriously genius..
I hope I havnt missed anything.. in this lovely , fantastic update.. please bear my typo mistakes.
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