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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Oh my god arnav is moving away from khusi

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amsams

@amsams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

Please complete... Desperately waiting ...loved it lot

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Nakshatra

@amfashionista

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

This is a splendid update covering a lot of emotions.

You did a great job.

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@EchTee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Nice update..

i dont want arshi to get separated
khushi in india n arnav in new york i dont want dat

but its ur story i know u will do watever is good for this..

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arshi_1982

@arshi_1982

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

The plot is getting more and more interesting. Anjali's return along with her joining her dad's party seems to be haste to all. I hope it turns out to be fruitful to what she has in mind. You have penned her as a headstrong but broken anjali so beautifully.

The dilemma, well not a dilemma anymore...the sadness and disappointment of making a decision to be away from the current life specially from the people he loves seems to take a huge toll on everybody's life connected with Arnav. You have described his decisions and Khushi's thoughts very nicely.

I loved the way you keep portraying the connection between Manyata n Shyam.

O how i wish that you get rid of that Vikrant asap.