Sandhir ff:Love ki Re-Entry..! Chapter - 20 *updated* page98 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz

nhi nhi apne ss ke ek commentor ko kyun marun main🤣

hai ek meri jaan ki dushmann
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tho usse khilane ke liye bohot sada hua tamatar dungi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Hey I just read ur ss/ff 1st part and I loved it continue soon waiting eagerly and I think u should continue ASAP!!! Cuz 10 pages after 1st part u must contain yaar high time


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Manal
Edited by Thriller123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
will update today or tomorrow😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Hey I just read ur ss/ff 1st part and I loved it continue soon waiting eagerly and I think u should continue ASAP!!! Cuz 10 pages after 1st part u must contain yaar high time


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Manal

hey manal i guess u have mistaken the prologue to be the first part yaa i know 10 pages are highh but i have some reason i will be updating today or tomorrow
Thx for commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
unreserved in pg-4 😆 pm me plz🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: avni775

res
unres 😆
1st of all a big sorry for unreserving soo late😆I am lazy😆 late is better than neveer ree aur sisters ke beech no sorry n no thank u

This is ur 2nd work right? I remember reading ur OS😉 yaa joh TUPKE se hit nikla tha🤣
am too happy that u started to write again 🤣😳bass ishwar ki iccha thi ki main likhun toh likh rhi hun🤣
Randhir running with her diary?🤣y? 😆yeh jaanne ke liye toh tujhe aage padhna padega🤣
i do feel this is intrsting...bery bery intresting...😊ohh boring toh nhi tha na chalo thank gowddd interesting bana prologue🤣
Bandar,Prologue is gud👏ohh saccchi?!! Thank u🤣
update soonish 🤣 or i wil spam 🤣Go for it i'm with u🤣

i have unres...ab meko pm karo -_- hain kyun nhi zarur 🤣blackmailer🤢 🤣 thx for the complement🤣
love
avni 🤗noo u r my Aunty 🤗 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

In R&S company
Rd is working on his laptop when one of his employee, Jignesh comes to him and...
Jiggy: Sir! Aapne P.a ke liye interview rakha tha toh uske candidates aagye hain bhejun?

Rd(still working on his laptop): Jiggy yeh interviews parth sambhal lega uske saath tum lelo main busy hun..

Jiggy:But sir aapke p.a hum kaise select kr sakte hain?

Rd:Jiggy tu mera employee baad mein hai phle mera dost hai mujhe pura bharosa hai tu sabse sahi p.a choose karega

Jiggy(smiles and leaves) (to himself):Bhai aap abhi bhi use nhi bhule ho...

Rd closes the college pics folder in his laptop😃

In a house
A small girl comes running and hugs someone from behind..
Girl: Bua..! Bua..! Aap bolo na dadi ko mujhe dud nhi piinaa..! Main nhi piungi
*sticks out tongue to her dadi*

Dadi comes running from behing..

Dadi: Sanyu beta tu hi ise kuch keh bilkul apne papa pr gyi hai ziddi..!
The girl turns to be sanyu..

Sanyu*smiling* : Maa aphi toh mujhe bhi khti thi
Jaise papa waisi beti*mimicking her mother*

Dadi*pulls sanyu's ears* :accha bacchu apni maa se pange?🤣

Girl is just standing on the sofa and watching the mother-daughter drama..

Sanyu*trying to pull away her ear* :Accha accha sorry abhi mera kaan chhodo aur dud pr focus karo🤣

Girl:KYUNN..!? Aap dono ladte rho na mereko maza aarha tha🤣

Saying so she runs away..

Sanyu: Pata nhi bhai aur bhabhi ne kya khakr ise paida kia kabhi rukti hi nhi hai🤣

Dadi: Sanyu.. Aise nhi bolte beta aur tera toh koi interview tha na?

Sanyu*slaps head*:Ohffooo..! Main apko batana toh bhul hi gyi thi mera no. 1 ghante baad hai toh main aaj Miss.Amisha Aggarwal ko dud bina pilaye nhi jaungi *wicked smile*

Amy was just colouring in her drawing book. When sanyu comes and keeps the milk glass on the bed side table...

Sanyu*picking up amy*: Meri pyari amy kya hua yahain kyun ho?

Amy*struggles to be freed*:Bua main na aaj dud nhi piungi aur aap mereko colour krne doh..

Sanyu:Aaj toh aap bilkul apne papa ki trh bol rhe ho!

Amy*stops*:Sacchi ..! *looks at sanyu*

Sanyu nods in a YES..

Amy:Accha bua kya papa dud pite the?
Sanyu(smiles):Aur nhi toh kya bhai toh ek din mein PAANCH glass pi jaate the..!

Amy:SACCHIII...?!!
Sanyu laughs:Mucchi..aapko papa jaisa banna hai na? Toh chalo jaldi se finish kro milk..
Amy drinks whole glass including the last drop🤣 🤣 🤣of milk.

Amy:Accha bua main aapse ek baat puchun?

Sanyu*sits beside amy*: Ek kya hazaar pucho

Amy*thinks*:Main aapse baaki ke ek kamm hazaar baad mein puchlungi..

Sanyu*laughs*:Ek kamm hazaar nhi amy 999 bolo

Amy:Hain..! Hain..! Joh bhi hai main abhi puchun ki nhi?

Sanyu:Pucho

Amy: Aap raat ko kiske dreamz dekhti ho roz smile krte ho aur aapke room mein bed toh hai bada wala toh window ke pass kyun sote ho?

Sanyu*stops smiling*: Amy... Meri interview ka tym ho gya hai abhi main nikalti hun baad mein answer karun?

Amy*pouts*:Ok..!

Sanyu*pulls amy's cheeks*:Ok my darling..

She goes outside...

Sanyu*to herself*:Aaj yeh amisha kya bol rhi thi..! Main sote waqt smile kr rhi thi. Nhi aisa nhi ho sakta main apne papa ko backstab nhi kar sakti i can't i can't *wipes tear*

She leavess

At the office
Jiggy and parth with some paper enters Rd's cabin...
Jiggy:Randhir! Yeh dekhlo humne kuch ladkiyon ko alag rakha hai inme se ek ko select krlo..

Rd:Jiggy maine tumhe select krne ko bola tha aur parth tum batao abhi ki inn sab*poiting to papers holded by jiggy* mein se best kaun hai

Parth:Dekho Randhir yeh saari hin apne apne tareeke se theek hain pr koi bhi best nhi hai but hain ek candidate nhi ayi hai maybe wohi ho jiski hume zarurat hai

Rd: Toh theek hai uss ka intezaar karlo agr next 2 hr mein nhi aati hai toh tum dono hi inn mein se kisi ko choose karoge

Jiggy: Woh toh theek hai pr Randhir tumhe yeh achanak ek p.a ki kyun zarurat padi?

Rd:Jiggy mujhe zarurat nhi hai but mom ne kaha hai ki ek p.a rakhlo taki main thoda rest kr paun..

Jiggy:Aunty bilkul sahi hain resting ke mamle mein toh aapko chaar p.a kamm paden har waqt kaam karte rhte ho

Rd*laughs*:Hain theek hai abhi tum dono apna apna kaam krne jaoo main bhi kuch..

Jiggy:Kaam krleta hun..!

Rd:Hain..! Wohi...!

They leaves and trio continues their work..

Outside the company

Sanyu:Bhaiya aise kaise 100 rupay apne toh kaha tha ki sirf 60 mein pohonch jayenge..?

Aunto wala(AW): Dekhiye ji humne bass tupke se kaha tha yeh nhi kaha tha ki 60 HI LAGENGE..! Yeh mumbai hai yahain meter se chalte hain auto..!

Sanyu*puts hands on waist*:Hain toh meter se chalenge iska matlab yeh nhi ki humse paise lutoge..! Main 60 se ek paisa zyada nhi dungi..!

AW:Theek hai doh 60 dubara kabhi nhi ayenge aapke liye..!

Sanyu gives 60 to AW and enters the company.

Sanyu:Wow..! Kitni badi hai abhi main kidhar jaun..? Yahain toh kahin reception bhi nhi dikh rha..? Umm*looks side-ways* woh rha reception!

Sanyu(to manager):Excuse me..! I had an interview for the job of p.a of mr...(to herself)Wah beta sanyu jiss job ke liye ayi hai uske baare mein thoda padh toh leti kiski p.a banegi yeh tak nhi pata tujhe..!

Manager*waves in front of sanyu*:Mam..? Mam!

Sanyu:Hain ..! Srry..! Yes toh meri interview..?

Manager:Mam actually woh interviews toh finish ho chuke hain aap late ayi ho abhi main sir se baat karta hun agr kuch ho paye thank u tab tak aap waiting room mein baithiye..!

Sanyu while going to the waiting room to herself..:Late toh ana hi tha wk amisha ki bacchi..! Dud hi nhi piiti hai kal dekhti hun zidd kaise krti hai aaj nokri nhi lagi na toh main use aaj chocolate nhi dungi*pouts*

In rd's cabin

Rd was busy reading a file when his phone started bajing (ringing🤣)

Rd:Hello..!... What... Ok ok i'm coming...ask them to wait...ok bye..!

He rushes out..

Writers note:Imagine rd rushing outside with some employees and our sanyu is busy reading a magazine. A wind blows when he passes her. They both closes their eyes. But within seconds continues what they were doing. He leaves..!

Manager:Sanyukta..? Mam sir asked u to come to his cabin.. Now

Sanyu:Umm? Ohh accha thewk hai can u plz lead me to ur sir's cabin?

Manager:Sure mam there..*he leads sanyu to parths cabin*

Sanyu:Thank u..*smiles*

Manager:Mam now i have to go. U can go in sir is waiting for u *smiles back and leaves*

Samyu takes a deep breathe and turns the knob...


Precap:Parth, Jiggy's reaction on seeing sanyu back..! Abhi sandhir meet baad mein okk🤣


I know i know bekaar tha phla samaj ke maaf krdo next se pakka better ho jayega u know
'Practise makes a man perfect'
🤣 🤣 aur mujhe nhi pata yeh chhota hai ki bada..!🤣

Plz comment lambe karnaa


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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
res
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unress...
yess...😃🥳
i m first one to comment on badar's ff...😆
but bandar it was amazing...
loved it to the core...
the first chappy was jst awsome...
now eagrly waiting for the nxt part...
waiting for parth and jiggy's reaction...
so do update ASAP...
and the first chappy was jst superb...!!!!
awsome...fantastic...!!!!
thnx for pm
love
dhruvi aka dhobi
Edited by dhruvi_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
res
unres 🤣
plz meko maaf kardo... 🤣 i have unres in pg 22 🤣
bye..gnyt sd 🤣 tc...dnt get angry...moi loves u😳😆



Edited by avni775 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Its awesome🤣🤣🤣
^^^This might b the biggest comment on ur FF haina bandar🤣🤣🤣
Edited by panchan - 11 years ago

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