******** - Page 99

First Previous

Page

103

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#981

Superb update...

Loved the morning after scene... Arnav and Khushi understanding and supporting each other... Loved how Arnav teased her to keep moment light...

Loved Khushi, Garima, Shashi scene... Her parents were so relief to see her... All night they must have been hell worried... Glad that they shared everything with Khushi... They are her parents and their love is bound to any blood bond...

Nani and Arnav scene was so painful... But it has to be done... Nani made many mistakes but her love can never be question... Like many woman she too was bound with society and its rules... Especially at that time when no one blamed man and expected woman to compromise... Now the truth is out but will they tell Anjali and Anya too...??

Loved the update... Waiting for the next update...

Quote

mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#982

Hi.. I had written a comment last week itself just before i posted it, my wifi went down. N it got fixed only now.

Coming to the chapter.. I loved it.

I cud rlate to khushi wanting to know why she was kept in the dark all this long. That why her parents didnt trust her enuf that she wud understand. But wen she hears the truth, she realizes that its not for their lack of trust on her, but the torture of reliving that part of greeshmas life, that they thought it best to forget that whole chapter and start their life on a new leaf. Now this realization must hurt khushi for forcing her mother to recount her horrendous fate..

And in arnavs chapter, wat i liked best was him being torn between how he shud feel for his birth mother and her mama..

"Arnav's breath caught in his throat. How was he supposed to feel? He hurt for that mother who was forced to give up her child. But he hurt just as much and more when it struck him that he would have grown up else where and not in his Mama's lap. Was he supposed to choose whom to feel for? His mother? Wouldn't it have been better if he hadn't come to exist?"

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

sara

@tdtd

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#983

wow 👍🏼

very good one👏😊

Quote

Aathira

@chikkus05

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#984

Nice one. loved the family bondings.

Quote

KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#985

Just caught up with last 4 chapters
And, they've left me speechless
The emotions, the revelations of the past
I'm lost for words, just amazing and too good
Brilliantly written
Thanx for the pm

Quote

sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#986

mai aa gayi dharna me baitne ;-)

Quote

sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#987

Very intense and emotional update.

Quote

napk

@napk

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#988

The last 2 updates have been very emotional for all of them... but this needed to happen but the timing is not right... the good thing is no one is judging anyone and are willing to hear the their story...

For Arnav to know the truth about his birth since his mother passed away and to deal with it all alone is heart breaking... wish he had atleast spoken to his Nani... But Ahalya is the best mother for Arnav... sadly her marriage was a curse... wish she didn't died...Khushi not being told that she was adopted... its a lot for her to take... but Garima and Shashi are such loving parents... she couldn't have wished for more... they needed each other more than any other time...

It must have been really hard for Garima to go thru the hardest days of her life... but Khushi had to know what her mother went thru to understand why and how her decisions were taken... she is blessed as Shashi came into her life and given her happiness...

Nani is a strong woman... she made mistakes but she didn't know they were mistakes at that time and thought those were the best given their situation... but if things didn't happen the way they did... who knows it may be worst now... maybe Arnav wouldn't have had such a loving family and Khushi may have been in an orphanage... so whatever happened in the end it turned out that innocent lives were saved and given a family.

Quote

deepthi laxmi

@deelax18

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#989

an emotional read... the glimpse you gave into each persons life made me put myself in their shoes and think...it was horrible what they endeavored...thank you for writing this amazing update..

loved it :)

Quote

AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#990

Chapter - 53

It's Not Over Till It's Over

"...Give me your hand out of the depths

sown by your sorrows...And tell me everything, tell chain by chain, and link by link, and step by step;...Speak through my speech, and through my blood."

# Pablo Neruda

P.S - Thank you Ruchi, for sharing this poem. It is perfect for the next chapter.

Hey All,

I know I had already given the teaser with the previous chapter. But I hadn't mentioned the schedule. The update will come up on Wednesday the 27th.

You maybe wondering why I'm taking longer to update. It's because it needs little more thought process and it takes longer to write. Each chapter is equivalent to 1 1/2 to 2 chapters that were being written earlier. Appreciate your love and understanding.

Have a fantastic weekend.

Love

Sandhya

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

Quote

1 ... 97 98 99 100 101 ... 103

******** - Page 99

Related Topics

Explore Topics