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rabid52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#951

Yes love can overcome all heartaches. Arnav and Khushi are lucky to have such a loving family.

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#952

Wow is an understatement for this chapter...you have out done yourself with this beautifully written chapter...so emotional and heartwarming at the same time for both sides of her family!!! Next chapter sounds very intrigueing, can't wait. Many thanks.

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amita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

It was a Superb update

Loved the way Arnavv was supporting Khushi and made her strong to face the situation

Their little romance between serious matter was lovely

Loved the way Khushi tried to told him about its Anna's important day and they have to try not to spoil it with bitter past and Arnav understand it without her voicing out

Glad Shashi and Garima shared their past with Khushi. She also got an idea about Arnav and his behavior after knowing about his so called father.

Loved Khushi's conversation with her parents they are really a wonderful family

Loved the way Khushi started to defend Arnav thinking her parents will judge him wrong

Feel good to know that Garima and Shashi accepted Khushia and Arnav's relationship and didn't judge him by his father

And Arnav and Nani's conversation was really nice

Loved the way she was trying make him understand he was not guilty for his mother's death

Arnav come to know about Garima and other disgusting fact about Arjun malik

Wish Nani was stronger to save her daughter from that monster

Anjali and Anna's coming and then teasing Arnav was lovely

Loved their sitting and talking together

Wondering how will Anjali and Anna react when they come to know the truth

I think They will accept Arnav as he is till now for them

As always its beautiful and Lovely update

Waiting for next update eagerly

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ishani97

@ishani97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

amazing this is, and the way you put a twist in with arnav and khushi's lives linking together and gave us all a scare that they were siblings for a bit, thrilling really. and i like how you allowed khushi to grow as a character and become to sexy independent modern woman she is. beautiful scene between arhi after finding out the truth

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#955

i'm glad this talk happened.. loved it...

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IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Beautiful update, Sandy.

It was an emotional roller coaster starting from Khushi's conversation with her parents. How difficult it must be for her to listen to what her mother had to go through! And then, the way they pulled through the dark night all together as a family was just too beautiful.

Arnav's conversation with Devyani was very well done too. I really love Devyani's character here. She 's an embodiment of quiet strength, wisdom and sheer grit and determination. Arnav's ordeal was heart wrenching to read about...and Arjun Malik..the lesser said about him the better! He wasn't fit to be called a father...or even a human.

The last scene was beautiful ...Devyani with those three motherless children under her wings.

Looking forward to the next :)

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rizib

@rizib

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Posted: 11 years ago

#957

A wonderful piece of writing.. The emotions were very well written.. You can feel what each person is going through.. I had tears while reading everyone's perspectives.. And the best thing is that you have planned it out perfectly.. A huge tangle of relationships, but everything smoothed out in the end (not exactly the end though)..

The values of a strong knit family, in spite of not being related by blood, excellent!!

Also I need to appreciate Arnav's character here.. The things he has done ever since he has known the truth.. As Khushi said, he DOES put everyone else before him.. And loved the part where Anjali and Anya join them and have the sweet banter with their brother.. It shows how much they love and cherish him, and I'm sure that's never gonna change even when they come to know about him..

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#958

Dat was so brilliantly n beautifully written...i love all d characters of this story as there is so much depth fr each of d characters...awesome update..n hats off to you for making every chapter of this story so magical for us readers...thanks

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samsung04

@samsung04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#959

Sandya im not good at words to explain things..
U amazed me dear.. I cried along with thm n smiled too..
More over went cazy also..
Such a wounderful writer u r...
Keep going
Cheers,

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#960

Thanks Sandhya for a long, amazing update. It was superb.

Devayani, Garima, Shashi are such wonderful characters. Fell in love with these amazing people, and ofcourse Ahalya too. Such a wonderful story telling on your part... absolutely loved it. I cannot point to one particular sentence or paragraph, I loved it all, every bit of it.

Wonder how Arnav and Garima's meeting would be. I am sure you will do a splendid job at that.. but eager to read it nonetheless.

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