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Posted: 11 years ago

Simply superb chapter as always...Loved the conversations between Arnav and Khushi, Garima, Shashi and Khushi, Arnav and Nani with their past. It was a painful past for everybody especially for Arnav and Garima. I loved Shashi's character...he is such a supporting husband and father. I still have one question why Ahalya left Garishma all by herself when she is aware of her husband very well. I enjoyed the light moments between ARSHI in the midst of the entire crisis. Waiting for Arnav and Garima meeting...and also waiting for Aman and Anya's wedding.

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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter was like a dedication to all the mothers in the world. There is no love equal to that of a mother for a child. The most unique and beautiful bond that ever was.
Mothers love as exemplified by Garima's love for Khushi, Ahalia's love for Arnav and Deviyani's love for Her 3 grandchildren...awsome.

I specially loved the last part, such a perfect visual of the quintessential grandmother who despite her age is still actively there to support her children with grace and fortitude.
Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏Awesome one again. Loved it.
Once again beautiful morning after. Both of them know they have to face the reality many questions to be asked and many should be answered. But trying find respite in each other albeit temporarily, trying to be each other strength and in the process trying gain strength to face the reality. Arnav as promised trying to be there for her to face the truth of the past assuring her the past cannot change the love that she received and given of her parents. Whoever may be the biological parents Shashi and Garima will always be her parents. She allows him to be her strength and promise to herself to be there for him. Mostly gist of the chapter you present in your awesome writing intermingled with whole chapter. This chapter also it's as beautiful as always. Loved it.👏

'The storm had passed but had left considerable debris in its wake. It was going to take considerable time and manpower to fix the damage. It'll be dealt with. It wasn't a choice but the only way to survive'


Garima Shashi and Khushi confrontation. It was awesome. Garima with Shashi's help explaining the incidences in the past, briefing about Khushi adoption and happy memories of her childhood. When Khushi was confronted about Arnav the little emotional distance which is caused by the past was immediately filled. It's a daughter who has facing the anger of parents for hiding significant part of her life from them. That time she's a daughter who owes explanation to her parents. Garima in that incidence becomes momma bear protecting her cub demanding explanation for Khushi 's falling apart 5yrs back and extend of Arnav 's role in that. She's Khushi 's mom demanding explanation for her Daughter's heartbreak. As Garima says she may be Arnav 's biological mother but mother of Arnav was and will always be Akalya. Excellent writing Sandhya. On lighter side as a baby Arnav was a preemie and Khushi was precocious .

Nani Arnav confrontation amazing awesome and superb. First when he entered Nani 's room like Arnav I almost had a panic attack. His confession to Nani about the length of him knowing about the truth and Nani 's reaction to it was just spot on. When she asked him about his refusal to run the family business in the past and the answer to that question, Nani 's reaction and firmly assuring him that he's as much a Raizada as all other three. In the past when Anjali confronted Arnav about his plans in staying in the US and starting his own business not wanting to be part of mama's business when he said 'orphan child magnanimously accepted '. After that his reaction to Khushi's advice even though I don't accept it now everything makes sense. A guy who's stringent in accepting wealth from the family but generous in showering and receiving their love. More of Akalya 's past how stronger and confident women was finally succumbed to tragic end. Now stronger Nani in past succumbing to Emotional and social pressures. But she acted on the social norms of that time. But usually in reconciliation always what ifs are present. There are people who treasures the second chance they get, try to rectify their mistake and lead a happy life. As a mother Nani hoped and wished that for her daughter and adviced her to give their marriage another chance is not mistake. But it is sad that their hope remained hope and they got tricked and cheated by Arjun Malik. When Nani explained about Garima she trying to assuage of his feeling about his biological mother not wanting him and how much of his birth brought happiness in his mamma's life. How ever mature you handle things and make deals and Sucessful you are in front motherly figure you become a kid that what Arnav did when he asked Nani for assurance about his guilt of being responsible for his momma's death and Nani gives him that assurance and comfort he needs. Just beautiful narration. Take a bow Sandhya👏👏. Even though krishna was Vasuki's son by birth we know only Yasoda as his mother , Arnav situation is like that. Blood ties or not Akalya will be always his Momma.

Finally bickering and complaining between siblings just heart warming. All three of them with person who lost so many things in her life but stood with them like pillar in their ups downs and in between truly Nani is their Hero. Last line almost celestial almost made me scream Nahiii like Old movies. Last when something like this was in chapter in Anjali monologue Anjali accident happen. Please Arnav need his share of Khushi. This guy has suffered a lot past present and in between. Please give him the Khushi he needs.

Again sorry for the late comment (almost 11 th hour comment) and thx 4 d PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago
just finished reading .. updates were superp .. words are not enough for me to describe what i felt .. brilliantly written.. waiting for next .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Anniversary! (Sorry for the late wishes).
Finally read the last 2 parts. Her dried tears, her agony on knowing the truth behind her birth, her emotional trauma - the one he has already gone through were his undoing. His past, his relations, his emotional upheaval - the one she is going through now wrre her undoing. Their love, their longing, their breakdown and their endless suffering were my undoing. I am glad they have their love and passion to themselves.
The hug amidst all the frenzied and haywire emotions was the most soothing and purest gesture, way beyond the words or promises.


Garima had a very unfortunate past, the curse of which continues to tarnish the widespread happiness in her daughter and her first borns life. The storm has passed but has left destruction beyond repairs in its wake. It has left a non-negotiable question on the integrity of the relationships. These questions may some day find answers but till then we will have a disturbing mass of emotions.

If you go with the events, it would be impossible to deduce who was at fault here. Arjun -who cheated and carried on the sham his family had imbibed into him, Ahalya- who did not stand up against the wrong or Devyani who did not have enough courage to get her daughter out of an almost broken marriage. Heedless to that, everyone is facing the consequences hoping they would be out of this soon.

Hope to read see some normalcy in their lives soon. 😊
Edited by sk2405 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What should I say this is such a perfect story all the characters fit in perfectly. This FF has romance , sibling bonding , Family values , social message , emotions perfect family entertainer.
Women are treated as S** toy even in this modern society , there are so many rules and regulations for women to follow , women are the victims but are treated as culprits and men who are the real culprits are treated as GOD. Hate this hypocrisy. The same thins has happened with Garima she was the victim but she was scared of this society as if she has committed a mistake. She could not keep her son because of the society. Ahalya she could not voice against her husband because of the society and her children.
Loved the updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! nice one, and dramatic as well!
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Posted: 11 years ago
gosh!!...tht was some update...
whn he said by d way we r not meant to b!!...i was lyk!!...😭
i think he told everything to anji!!...waiting for tht convo!!...
aww...nk n la!!...😳
n thn in d last, wat a relief!!!...gosh!!!...thank god!!...she stayed!!...
love d way lil tigress took class of arnav!!...😉
jst loved d update bas!!!...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Have been away from IF for some time and don't know when will I be back into the groove ...all thanks to my hectic schedules :(
All I can say is ...I have missed FFsection terribly and it may sound dramatic but life seems incomplete without it.
For chapter 52 , most of their past was revealed In the previous chapters, so stretching my liberty as a reader to its tensile strength I would call this chapter more of a summary, but...but...the astonishing fact is...it didn't feel like that the past was being retold...PERSPECTIVE! It makes all the difference..doesn't it? The close knit Gupta family, the conversation between Naani n Arnav it all leaves you emotionally charged. I think it's got something to do with the author of this story who weaves magic every time she writes, I thank her for giving us a captivating, soul gripping chapter yet again.

I am so sorry I am rushing through my comment, would like you to know that am around even if not actively participating.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 49, 50 - Finally d truth is out so Arnav is Garima's son 😲 Poor Khushi :(
Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 10 years ago

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