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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Interesting concept.egarly waiting 4 update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Interesting concept!!
I think bus main taani aur vishesh honge!!
Aur maybe vishesh will die on that bus!!
Eagerly waiting for ur update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Nice concept
Intresting trailer
Looking forward to read more
Update soon
Plz pm me
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wow nice cnspt,i think its gng to b a bit emotnl, plz cntinu soon 😊
Edited by sanjana.sanju - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
hy sana😊
first of all congratulations for ur first ff👏
concept seems interesting
rey confused as usual😆
and taani ka accident????
hope that she is fine...
khi uski memory loss nhi ho jaye...aur vo vapas apne clg k time me chale jaye😉
waiting to read first chapter...update soon

love
Gunjan❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
wow first ff
first of all good luck i wish u get lots of like nd comments

now great start
waiting to know how d things proceedings
update soon
thx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Awesome concept ...
Please continue dear ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
First of all, a BIG thank you to all who liked and commented as it encourages me to carry on writing😃. I replied to some of your comments but was unable to reply to all of them because of the spamming limit thingy😕 however I did read all of them and I appreciate all the feedback🤗. Now, enough of my bak bak and let's get into chapter 1 😊.
CHAPTER 1:

The entire d3 gang sat in Swayam's house doing their usual masti. The house was filled with laughter and enjoyment. After two hours of fun, Vicky turned towards Swayam and said"Swayam, aaj woh naya dance show shuru hone wala hai, T.V chaalu karna taake hum kharaab dancers ki burayi kar sake"he said with a playful smile. Swayam gave him a deadly glare making him change his words. "I..I mean logon se naye dance steps ke baare mein tips le sake."
As instructed, Swayam switched on the T.V which was currently on a news channel. Just when he was about to change the channel, Sharon grabbed his arm and exclaimed "Swayam wait!". Her eyes caught the numbers 3390 which were on the headlines of the news channel.
Reporter on T.V: "Breaking News! Abhi abhi humey khabar mili hai ke bus number 3390 jo Pune se Mumbai aane waali thi ka bohut hi bura accident ho gaya hai. Bus ki aisi haalat hai ke kisi ka bhi bachna mushkil ho sakta hai."
Hearing this, Sharon started weeping, drawing the attention of the whole d3 gang. Swayam sat beside her cupping her face while everyone else gathered around the two, anxiously waiting for the reason for this sudden sorrowful behavior. "Sharan kya hua? Kyun ro rahi ho?" said Swayam, demanding an answer from her. Sharon was unable to open her mouth but she finally spoke after a few attempts from the gang. "T..taani uss bus me thi" she said while letting out a big weep.
Everyone was shaken by this statement by Sharon. Silence grew in the room which was broken by Swayam after a few moments. "What! Yeh kaise ho sakta hai?" he yelled. "Taani toh Delhi mein thi to woh Pune se kyun aayengi" he said trying to justify why she was not on the bus. Sharon stood up and put her hand on Swayam's shoulder who had already stood up. "Swayam believe me. Uss din jab..."

--------------------------FLASHBACK-------------------------

Sharon and Swayam were both sitting in the projector room discussing who is going to do what on annual day. Swayam went to V.P sir to give an important file however he forgot his phone in the projector room. Just then, his phone began to ring. Sharon looked at the caller ID and picked up the phone with a bright smile on her face.
Hi Taani!
Sharon aap! Kaise ho aap? Aur baaki sab kaise hai?
Sab thik hai. Lekin mein tumse bohut naraaz hu. Jab se gayi ho tabse nahin koi phone ya message. Sirf apna bhai dekhai deta hai tumhe? Hum sab ko bhool gayi?
Main aap sab ko kaise bhool sakti hoon. Waise maine yehi bataane ke liye phone kiya tha ke mein kuch dino mein Mumbai aa rahi hoon.
Wow, that is awesome! Ek kaam karo, tum Swayam ko mat batana ke tum aa rahi ho, usse aur gang ko suprise dena aur saari detail mujhe dena ke tum kab aa rahi ho.
That's an awesome idea! Pehle mein Pune jaa rahi hoon Tauji se milne phir Mumbai aaongi . Main aap ko saari details message kar doongi.
Ok! Accha main tumse baad mein baat karungi. Bohut saara kaam baaki hai annual day ke liye.
Ok bye!
Bye! Take care.

-------------------FLASHBACK ENDS----------------


Everyone was in tears by then except for Rey who was too shocked to react to anything. He stood there like a statue with the words Taani uss bus mein thi repeating in his mind. Swayam walked towards the door. "Swayam kaha jaa rahe ho?" asked Nil in a calm tone. "Taani ko lene, mujhe pata hai ke agar woh bus mein thi to bhi usse kuch nahin hua honga" he replied. He took two more steps forward when he was interrupted again. This time by Rey. "Swayam ruko, main bhi chalunga tumhare saath" and the duo walked out of the room to look for their beloved Taani.

Precap:
ReYam at the accident site to look for Taani.
Gang still at Swayam's house praying for Taani's safety.


So how was it??
Please leave your feedback and sorry if I bored you. 😊
Edited by SaNa_sTaR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Amazing update

eagerly waiting for next part

hope Taani safe ho...update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Me second one to comment.. 😃
Comming to the update ...
It was supb...
Taani wanna give suprise to all...
But it turns to a shocking news... 😭
Hope taani is well...
May swayam's faith that taani ko kuch nahi hua hoga become true...
Prcp was confusing...
But waiting eagerly for Nxt Prt...
Update soon...
Thanks for PM 😊
Edited by Aanchal_taarey - 11 years ago

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