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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Superb...loved this story.. 👏
So many character but each has there own importance.. From kids to elders..this story is not abt Arshi only but each and every parallel leads have their own stories too..

Great work 😊

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Such a beautiful ending...all the families are completed and all of them are having great time with their respective families. I am going to miss this story but excited about part II.

Thanks dear for sharing beautiful story with us.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Such a sweet ending

Aww NK and La had their baby "Sid" (actor Sid)😆

Oh Lord Khushi had all these cravings and she still didn't know she was pregnant, she even did tests and they negative (that happens sometimes for real when you are to anxious)

Ah as the world turns, "what goes around comes around"

You ended this story where it started

Will miss this story so much, but all good things do come to an end, and new ones start

Waiting for more beautiful stories from you👏

Loved your reply to my comment, I am a really good guesser 😛

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imi12

@imi12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

it just amazing superbbb love it

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

very good story...👍🏼

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Loved all of the updates

arhi & prem are so adorable

can't get enough of them

super sad this has ended

hoping you come up with another story just as awesome as this one is

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

beautiful epilogue! just well done overall!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Firstly thanks a ton for completing the story.. even though you were not regular but had this faith in you that you will surely complete this beautiful story started by you.. Faith in our Love was amazing story.. will miss Prem and other kids alongwith our lovely jodi Arnav-Khushi and their beautiful love.. Felt happy to read that you plan to write more.. Hope it is ARSHI story.. will be looking forward to it.. till then Best wishes dear.. God bless. 😊

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munchkinland

@munchkinland

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#229

wowwwawesome

i nvr wanted it to end
i cn read it for whole day long
it was superb
just very beautiful
and soo peaceful
i don't know how cn a story be peaceful but ths really was
i am in awe of ths
and wth ur note i am excited about its second part
can't wait for that...
but i would genuinely like to thank u for a perfect story for a perfect ending
for a perfct everythng...

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#230

Okay so this is my time for Commentwa😉 Be ready!

YOU SAY THAT YOUR WRITING IS CRAP IN THIS FF? Like really? I admit that there are some spelling mistakes but no, This FF was more than awesome!!!

Believe me, just like Shilpa said, I have given my two days reading the FF and not updating my own stories 😆

You have portrayed all the characters well! <3

I love all the kids here, Sam and Prem. Prem is a sweetheart and lovely kid, Sam is naughty 😳 loved the scene where he ran away saying 'susu' and showing his finger 🤣

Prem is so patient, how can a little kid be like that? I'm amazed with his character. It was so natural. Howhe spends time with Arnav when Arnav had no idea, how e deals with all the things single handedly. and that scene was heart warming where Arnav got his memory back, he came to Khushi and they slept at pooside. Prem saw them and went to them and awww such a lovely family time that was ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ At the end, Prem is a small child wanting love <3

That Shyam bas***d did all that? Due to Arjun's death, his family kept Arnav but they shouldnt have kept their mother in dark. Even if he was an orphan and had no family, they had no right to mould someone's life! Felt really sad at that parts 🤔

BUT, I LOVED the Story!!!

Loved it loved it loved it

Meine kehdiya I loved it matlab it was too awesome

Splendid job

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