**MY LOVE FOR YOU IS ETERNAL**--sandhir ss.#Updated Chp 9#.... - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fairystar

its was super awesome...update soon :)

n if possible do pm me next time

Thanks a lot for liking it...😊
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❤️CHAPTER 2❤️

FLASHBACK

"Our college is ending, Sanyu! Can you believe it?" said Randhir Singh Shekhawat, holding a soft drink glass in his one hand and Sanyu's hand in other. They were at the final year college fest of FITE.

"Yes, it really seems unbilievable. I'll be really missing FITE, its classrooms, Vardhaan Sir..."
Randhir interrupted her.

"And PKC? How can you forget him?" And they laughed.

"Yeah, yeah, I'm going to miss everyone. Above all, i have got my love here, my Randhir".

She looked at Randhir lovingly and tears started forming in her eyes. Randhir leaned forward and placed a soft kiss on her forehead.

"I love you my princess..."said Randhir.

"I love you too, my Mcp...", replied a smiling Sanyu.

"Anyways, I'll be coming to your home soon", said Randhir, taking a sip from his glass.

"Whoaaht but why"? Sanyu almost screamed out of shock.

"To take you along with me".

Sanyu gave a questioning look at Randhir.

"I really doubt how you come second, Sanyu. I mean look at you baby. You are so dumb...Tch Tch...I really pity you...",said Randhir taking another sip.

Sanyu was hell irritated with Randhir's reply. She gave a tight slap on his shoulder.

'Ouch...", screamed Randhir.

"I am asking you something and you are making fun of me? How dare you, Mcp"? yelled Sanyukta.

"Sshh...We are not in the library Sanyu that you will shout like this. This is not a place to fight. A party is going on here. Sshh..." and he put a finger on his lips.

"Tum bologe"? said Sanyu.

"To make you Mrs. Randhir Shekhawat..." answered Randhir.

"What? But let us first settle down with our jobs, Randhir".

"No way Sanyu..", and then leaning close to Sanyu's ears, "I can't wait any longer to make you mine...".

Sanyu blushed and then said, "Do whatever you like..." and she smiled.

Randhir came back to his position.

'Waise Sanyu, I've not yet proposed to you formally", said Randhir, his eyes fixed on Sanyu.

"There is no need, Randhir", replied Sanyukta meeting his gaze.

"Of course there is..", began Randhir and then pulling Sanyu close to him, "I want to declare you as mine."

"I'm already yours..."

"But I want to propose you, now, infront of the whole college"...

"What? No way Randhir..." began Sanyu but was cut off by Randhir.

"Yes, Sanyu...very much yes..." and handind the glass to sanyu, walked towards the stage.

"Hey friends...can i have your attention please? So i'm here to share a very important part of my life with you, guys. I want to propose the lady love of my life, here now infront of you all. Hey Kastuki, please bring Sanyu on the stage...", Randhir's voice echoed all over the fest ground.

Here Sanyu was hell nervous and was furiously blushing.

Kastuki came, held her hand and started dragging her towards the stage.

"congrats, Sanyu..You are formally becoming Randhir's girlfriend and soon to be Mrs. Shekhawat", whispered Kastu into Sanyu's ears before she began to climb the stage stairs.
As soon as Sanyu came on stage, the claps and cheers doubled. Sanyu came to Randhir. Her cheeks were cimson red. Randhir kneeled on his knees, took out a ring and forwarded his hand to Sanyu.

"Will you be mine forever, Sanyukta?" asked Randhir.

Sanyu was overwhelmed. She looked into his eyes and could only see boundless love for her and she simply nodded a yes.

and the whole ground echoed with claps.

End of flashback

Sanyu closed her eyes to ease the pain of her heart which was craving for his love, warmth...only him and him...
She was brought out of her trance by her phone ring.

"Madam, the car is outside", spoke her driver.

"Coming", replied a teary Sanyu.

Before stepping out she for the last time glanced at the hugging couple and whispered...

"Why are you not with me Randhir? You promised to be there for me, no? 2years without you and maybe you've started a new life but I still love you..i still love you the same..."




THAT'S IT..IT WAS QUITE LONG I THINK...HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...AND PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT...IT MEANS A LOT TO ME...AND PMS AFTER A FEW UPDATES...

WITH LOVE❤️
RAKHI😊
Edited by raksbasu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow
amazing
love the concept and storyline so far
first two chapters were amazing
love it
please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow u wrote it so beautifully :)
do update soon ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: don girls

wow

amazing
love the concept and storyline so far
first two chapters were amazing
love it
please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks

Thanks a lot for liking the chapters😊 and i will start pming after a few more updates as i have some exams coming😒...Once again thanks a lot...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fairystar

wow u wrote it so beautifully :)

do update soon ;)

Thanks dear😊 and maybe the next update will be delayed as i have some exams coming...😊
Edited by raksbasu - 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot for liking it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER-3

Sanyukta was leaning over the railing of the balcony of her apartment. Her apartment was in the tenth floor. It was 5:30 in the morning. The whole Shimla town was in deep slumber but Sanyukta had no sleep in her eyes, no peace in her mind. For her, peace had left her from the day when she got separated from her Randhir.

After her divorce, she struggled hard to find a job outside Delhi for she didn't want to ever come face to face with Randhir again and then she found this job in Shimla. And she came here without telling anyone and cut off all her contacts with her parents and friends. She had changed a lot now. The fun-loving, challenging Sanyukta was lost somewhere, two years back. Now she was a different person altogether- an introvert with no friends and a peace-seeking girl who could bring a fake smile on her lips, who could hide her tears from the world with a false smile.

She loved this time of the morning. She everyday got up around this time and stood in her balcony like this. She was no more a late riser.She loved the view of sleeping Shimla town from here. She loved the cold breeze which swayed her hairs, making them fly in the air. They made her feel somewhat a bit less lonely. They were her only companions of solitude.

But today her health had betrayed her. She had caught severe cold and had fever. She was feeling so weak that she had taken a day's off today from her work. But she hated to do so as break from her work meant his thoughts all the time and today was no exception.

Sanyukta was thinking that there was a time when if she just sneezed once, the whole Shekhawat mansion got busy calling doctor, bringing medicines and now when she had such a high fever, no one was there, just to ask if she was ok.

Sanyu: Life has changed a lot without you, Randhir. I am so lonely now. You promised that you will always be there to take care of me. Didn't you, Randhir? Didn't you?

And tears came running down her cheeks. She remembered the last time when she got a high fever before her marriage.

FLASHBACK

Sayukta was lying on her bed in her room. She was in her home for her third year vacations. But no sooner did she reach home, than she got ill. She was suffering from cold and high fever. The doctor had advised her to take bed rest for one week.

Sanyu's mom: Sanyu, keep lying on the bed. Take rest. I will go and bring some fruits for you.

And she left the room after carresing her hair.

Sanyu: (coughed) Now, what? (snneezed) I will have to lie like this for one whole week? (sneezed) Arrgghh...Why? Why now Sanyu? Aur bheego, Aur bheego barishme. And if Randhir gets to know about your health in anyway, then he will kill you for your irresponsibility. Huh...(sneezed) Ab mai kya karu? I can't call Randhir but I miss him so much. Kya karu mai???But kuch to karna parega na...

Suddenly her phone started. "Kaustu calling" flashed on the screen. She stopped her blabbering and immediately picked up the call. And they chatted for more than 2 hours. Sanyu's mom had come and left the fruits' plate on the table. But she was so deeply engrossed in her convo with Kaustu that she hadn't even noticed it. When she finally cut the call, it was almost 2 hours and there was 11 missed calls of Randhir. She was going to call him when suddenly her mother came in.

S. Mom: Look Sanyu, who's here?

And then entered the most unexpected but the most wanted person of Sanyukta's life-- RANDHIR...

Sanyukta was super-shocked. Here she was lying with fever due to her carelessness and Randhir was standing in front of her.

S.mom: He is your classmate, no? What was your name, beta?

RD: Randhir, aunty...(and smiled which Sanyu understood was fake as she knew how angry he was on her...)

S. mom: Yes, Randhir...Sanyu, he was passing by our house and came to meet you.

Sanyu: Hi, Randhir...(sneezed)

Rd: Oh, hi, Sanyukta. So nice to meet you...

S. mom: (interrupted) You talk. I'll just come...

Rd: (with a fake smile) Ok, aunty...

S. mom went out.

Sanyu: umm...wo...mai...wo...

Rd: (supressing his extreme desire to yell, whispered in an angry tone) Yeh kya hai, Sanyu?What have you done to yourself?

Sanyu: But you here???

Rd: Why? Thought to hide your condition?

Sanyu: (sneezed) No...(sneezed)..I just..(sneezed)...

Rd: (came to her side and caressed her cheeks) Kab bheegi barishme, ha???

Sanyu: How did you know?(started coughing)

Rd: ( placed a kiss on her forehead) Why do you do this, ha? You know na, my heart aches if anything happens to you...

Sanyu: Sorry...(and kissed both his cheeks)

Rd: 11 missed calls. Did you see?

Sanyu: Was going to call...

Rd: I was missing you so much and when you didn't take my call, thought to visit you...

Sanyu: (coughing) Acchha kiya... I was missing you too...

Rd: What did doctor say?

Sanyu: Bed rest for 1 week.

Rd: And you are following it..

Sanyu: Impossible, Randhir...

Rd: Of course possible, Sanyukta...

Sanyu: But...

Rd: No arguments. Taken your medicine?

Sanyu: Yep...

Rd: Good, my princess...

Sanyu understood that randhir's anger had cooled down as her "princess" was back in place of Sanyukta. She hugged him tightly. She knew that the warmth of his embrace was enough to send her cold away.


END OF HER FLASHBACK

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A/N: SORRY FOR BEING SOOO LATE😭...PLZ FORGIVE THIS LAZY GIRL😆...NEXT UPDATE WILL BE MUCH QUICKER...ANYWAYS, I WILL BE PMING FROM NEXT UPDATE SO WHOEVER WANT A PM PLZ BUDDY ME...THANKS FOR READING... 😊

WITH LOVE

RAKHI❤️

Edited by raksbasu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey !!! I am really liking where this is heading !!!
Raf all the chaps...
Please PM me too :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh its just awesome...sooo caring!!!!

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