Love me or Hate me,A Kriyansh Story(update on Thread 2) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PHASE 1 OF THEIR LIFE: (THE MEMORABLE FIGHT)
Background info:
The weaklings gang ( Called Shiners in this Story) are childhood friends,and Kriya is best friends with Swayam and Neha. On the other side the Dazzlers are also childhood friends and Rey is best friends with sharon and vicky.However there is no such enemity between them,they just study in different sections. the guys play basketball together and the girls also have their dance classes togethr, In this way they know each other😊😊
NOTE: Kriya doesnt know the guys of dazzlers gang,as she is just comfrtable with her own gang and doesnt mix up with people too much😃😊

PRESENT::
Neha: Pata nehi kriya aj princi kya announcement karne waalein hai,kal ke jhagdein ke baad ,koi step to nehi lenge na??😕
Kriya: Mujhe daara maat,mujhe waise bhi bohot tension ho rahi hai,universejee plzz hume bacha lo,ye sab us dazzlers ke waajein se ho raha hai!!! I just hate them!!!😡
Rey: sharon,babe chill,princi koi action nehi lenge,afterall junior college ka best basketball player is gang mein present hai!!😉
Sharon: YA YA RIGHT!! and rolled her eyes
Vicky: yaa lets goo,and lend our ears to our honourable princi🤪
Nil: Vicky tu bada dialog de raha hai,shakespeare ke play dekh ke aaya hai kya!!😆
Both the gangs proceed towards the atrium,remembering about the events which happened the earlier day.😳😳
Flashback:
Amar likes rinni for many days and finally,he gathered courage and in the canteen when rinni was alone,he proposes her.. .. but rinni (a sweet girl but proud of her beauty) blatantly refuses him. Bharat (being veryy short-tempered) apne dost ka ye dukkhi avatar dekh nehi paya aur seedha tapka dazzlers ke table par canteen mein...

Bharat: oi Rinni tu apne aap ko samjhti kya hai,Miss.India ya Miss Universe!!!

Vicky: o hello ye koi tareeka hai kisi ladki se baat karne ka!!!

Bharat: pehle teri ye dosti ko bol tameez sikh ke aaye,fir mujhe kuch sikhana!!

Rey: excuse me,tum apna line cross kar rahe ho,better watch it dude!!!

Bharat: line to main aab cross karunga,and he throws water on rey!!

Meanwhile,Amar and Swayam has also assebled and before swayam cold stop bharat,he has already caused the kurukshetra:food fight,drinks fight,man to man fight kuch bhi baaki nehi raha!!!!
Hearing all this commotion,princi arrived at the canteen and saww a totall messs!!!! princi ko dkh ke saarein maun-vrat pe chale gaye!!
Flashback ends]
Note:The girls were not involved in this fight,they are cordial to each other but hate the guys of the opponent teams as they believe that opponent ki hi galti thi!!!😡

princi: welcome my dear students,as u all are still soo immatured and cannot even take the responsibilty of ur own actions,So in order to make u all a little matured,i will make u face ur problems...So,as u all consider ur opponents as ur problems,u have to face them only..
Vicky: Rey lagta hai princi ka dimag ghum gaya hai,hebrew mein bol raha hai lagta hai...,kuch samaj nehi aa raha hai!!😕
Princi: By looking at ur faces i can predict that u all are not understanding what i am trying to say,so putting it in clear words,i am putting both the teams in one section!!!!😳
Shiners and Dazzlers: WHATTT!!!!!!!!!😲

Precap: Shiners are already sitting in the classrooom,enters our dazzlers...
kriyansh 1st meet...
Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
hey update soon
i will b waiting do pm me
and
i luvd ur concept
start hone se pehle hi itne saare misunderstanding baad mein kya hoga
wauh
superb concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
will read it later n then i'll comment till then thanxx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
superb
muah but chhotu hai next time barra wala and on kr only plzz
next time if u say sdorry or thanx then 3 testy so b careful don't b 4mal
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hey the update was nice...
So kriyansh were no were involved in the fight...
Would be interesting to see their first meet...class mein shayad ek saat baitna padega😊
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awesome update
Update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Amzing stoy
Do continue soon n
Pm me
Love the concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome update...

loved it...

interesting precap..

waiting for the next part..

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
pia that was really really short
though cute one...shiners nd dazzlers...
nyc...
foodfight nd punishment...chalo kr sath me to aayenge...
amazing part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Great going.
but the update was small though lovely.
Give another update soon and try to keep it a bit longer.

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