Love me or Hate me,A Kriyansh Story(update on Thread 2) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
thaank uuu fr the comment😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshafan94

great work.
the pulling legs was amazingly described.
the way Kria made Rey stand in an unknown territory of being unable to retaliate was amazing.
And then Rey turning the tables was wow.
continue soon.

yaa kriya ne puri baazi palat di😆 but our rey is not some1 to accept defeat so easily😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: trueArShaian

hey...
your work is simply awesome
i mean its sooo lively dude
it's not like any othr work hmmm
how would i tell you
yup this work of yours reminds me of 2011 kriyaansh
may be its much better than that
watever it is
the truth is i loved your work to cores especially last chappy
the way kr are playing pranks on each other is tooo gud
i lovd it please update next part soon



love love love
ria

o my god,riyaa,tumne to mujhe saat ve asmaan par utha diyaa!!!!,thaank uu soo soo much for suchh lovelyy words!!!!! and i love long comments a lott!!!! soo thaankk uu fr that too!!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

Loved this update...It was super fun

Rey tactics with the ball and his singing😆😉

Kriya was super awesome...bechara Rey socha nahi hoga ki koyi usse khud ka medicine piladega...🤣

Ab Rey kaunsa gana gayega😲 agar baatcutter samne ho to I'm sure gane apne app niklenge😆

Their sweet revenge game is super fun...loving it😊

Kriya wakai mein Rey ki sahi partner hai...chahe wo looks mein ho, boldness mein ya smartness mein.

"main sirf ye soch raha tha,that u did pay attention to my singing" Yeh koyi puchne waali baat hai...rey ki har baat Kriya notice karega just like the way he notices her

Lagta yeh dono sirf ek dusra ke bareme sochte hai...reason kuch bhi ho they already rule each others mind.

ab rey kya karega...would be interesting to watch...update soon.

yaa rey nehi janta tha ke usne khud hi apne legs par kulari mari hai!!! kriya ne uusse sahi badla liya hai😆 yaa rey ke samne kriya ko baitha do,gaana apne aap niklega😉 haan tumne sahi kaha,reasn kuch bhi ho,their mind is occupied by the other's one thoughts😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved It...

Kriyaansh Were Fab...
Live Their Fights...

Hayee...rey Tactics To Irritate Kriya Are Nice...
Ball se, then Gaane Gaake...
Par Rey Khud Hi Fas Gaya...

Rey Kriya Ko Kehta Hai Ki vo Kisi Ka Kalyan Karega Pr Usse pehle To Kriya ne Hi Uska Kalyan Kr Diya...

Rey Ne kaha kriya Ko That You Did Notice My Songs...ab Rey Ko Kya Pata...kria Usko Notice Nhi Karegi To Kisko Karegi...

Was Missing Those Fights In D3...
Love To Read It...
Kriyaansh Scenes Are Too Cute...

Waiting For next Update...

Continue Soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: trishikarajput0

Awesome update...

Loved It...

Kriyaansh Were Fab...
Live Their Fights...

Hayee...rey Tactics To Irritate Kriya Are Nice...
Ball se, then Gaane Gaake...
Par Rey Khud Hi Fas Gaya...

Rey Kriya Ko Kehta Hai Ki vo Kisi Ka Kalyan Karega Pr Usse pehle To Kriya ne Hi Uska Kalyan Kr Diya...

Rey Ne kaha kriya Ko That You Did Notice My Songs...ab Rey Ko Kya Pata...kria Usko Notice Nhi Karegi To Kisko Karegi...

Was Missing Those Fights In D3...
Love To Read It...
Kriyaansh Scenes Are Too Cute...

Waiting For next Update...

Continue Soon...

thaank uu soo soo much for the lovely comment!!! 😊yaa rey chala tha kriya ko irritate karne par khud hi faas gaya!!!!!😆 yupp,kriya to rey ko hi notice karegi chahte hue ya na chahte hue😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

PHASE FIVE OF THEIR LIVES: (SMILE A BEGINNING OF FRIENDSHIP)

Later at night,Rey and Vicky were playing basketball for their relaxation,but rey ka attention thoda bhatka hua tha,he missed a basket,when vicky started cracking jokes...

Vicky: kya hua bhai,basketball practice nehi karna kya,gaana practice kare?? and he was again rofling!!!🤣

Rey: shut up yaar Vicky,waise hi aj 440volt ka shock laga hai mujhe,ab tu has mat!!! ye miss.baatcutter aisa bhi kuch kar sakti hai,maine kabhi socha bhi nehi tha😲

Vicky: ab pata chal gaya na,waise bhi ladkiyo ko ab tak bhagvan bhi nehi samaj sake to hum kya cheez hai!!! Ladkiyo ka wo calm and quiet face dekhke dhokha khane ki bhul mat karna,ladkiya toofan hoti hai😛

Meanwhile kriya in her bedroom, was remembering rey's reaction,while getting ready to sleep,and she was laughing her heart out!!!🤣

Kriya: achha mazaa chakhaya us reyansh ko,bachhu mujhe bhi aata hai tum jaise ladkon ko thik karna😛

Rey: wo to pata chal gaya vicky,par mujhe bhi toofan ko tackle karna acchi tarah se aata hai. I am reyansh singhania,uuse pata nehi wo kiske sath games khelne baithi hai,I am the undefeated champion of these games😉

Kriya: I am also kriya ghai,uuse shayad pata nehi,ke ladkiya bhi games khel sakti hai,and I am going to beat him in his own game!!!😉

Next morning in the college,kriya class mein enter honw wali hi hoti hai,that she almost banged into rey.

Rey: good morning miss.baatcutter,o sorry I mean miss.kriya😊

Kriya was wondering how this guy can remain sooo cool everytime😲

Kriya in her mind: iise kya ho gaya,pichle din itna shocked state mein aur aj phirse back to pavilion,arghh, kriya is ke baarein mein sochegi to tu bhi pagal ho jayegi

After completing her thought process,kriya without saying anything to rey, tried to enter the class,but rey blocked her way,she moved left,he also moved left,she moved right, he also moved right,blocking her in her every attempt.

Kriya: wat is ur problem??😡

Rey: are miss.jhansi ki rani,maine tumhe itne sweetly good morning wish karke,tumhari morning achhi kardi,aur tumne mujhe good morning wish tak nehi kiya,not fair😛

kriya : kahe ka good morning,tumhe dkhke meri morning waise bhi bad ho gayi hai😡

rey: aww darling,ab se mera handsome chehra tumhe roz wish karega subah subah,so get ready for that,and he winked at her and went out of the class😉

kriya : badtameez kahi ka,ohh universejii mujhse kya dushmani thi jo is namune ko mere class mein bhej diyaa!!!😡

During the course of the day,the time came for their dance classes,and the dance teacher was pairing them up,bcoz this year in the annual fest,the teacher has decided to showcast the different eras of bollywood,and today she was doing all the trials,of who will look good with whom. The teacher paired Vicky with kriya,Sharon with rey,and neha with swayam,amar and rinni,simmi and neel,vishakha and bharat.😊

The tacher asked them to do ball dance basic steps slowly, (the teacher just wanted to analyse their pairs,all the stuedents here are almost equally good dancers)

Vicky and kriya were dancing and Vicky was striking a friendshp with kriya

Vicky: hey we never got introduced I think,I am Vicky😊

Kriya: hey Vicky,I am kriya,nice to meet u😊

(don't worry guys,dono best frnd ko ek hi ladki pasand nehi hogi,Vicky doesn't have any crush over kriya,but kriya is a sweet girl,and Vicky is friendly with everyone,so he is just being friends with kriya,and kriya and Vicky will be very good friends in future also)

Vicky was cracking jokes,and kriya was also laughing,but her laughter was shortlived,bcoz the teacher changed their partners,rather three jodis had their patners changed... Lets see wo kaun khushnaaseeb hai (u guys have already guessed I think)😊

Teacher: Swayam tum Sharon ke partner ban jayo,neha pair up with Vicky and reyansh,tum kriya ke sath dance karo,lets see some new pairings now

Rey with a smirk came in front of kriya and forwarded his hand ,asking for permission with his eyes to take her hand for the dance (rey flirted with everyone but he was a gentleman too)

Kriya hesitantly put her hand in his. Rey held her waist and pulled kriya a little close,kriya put her hand on his shoulder and they started dancing slowly.☺️

Rey back to his normal form: dekha miss.baatcutter,destiny bhi hume humesha sath le aati hai😉

Kriya: o plzz ,destiny ko is beech mat layo (kriya was already cursing destiny in her mind)😡

Rey: manlo miss.kriya ghai,tumhe meri buri adaat lag chuki hai😉

Kriya; huh,in ur dreams

Rey: achha,to ab dreams mein bhi tum aana chahti ho,not bad,waise bhi tum to humesha mujhe sath hi rakhna chahti ho,isliye singing competition mein bhi mera naam bhi de diya😉

Kriya suddenly remember rey's puzzled face that day,and she couldn't stop herself from smiling,and she looked at other side to hide her smile but rey already has seen it😛

Rey: ahaa kriya caught u,rey ke ankhon se bachna muhskil hi nehi namumkin hai😉

Kriya rolled her eyes and continued dancing

Rey muttered cutee smile😊

Kriya: kya?

rey: kuch nehi

Teacher: Students,I have decided,that this pairing is ur final pairing!!!

Teacher: reyansh I think this time instead of Sharon,ur pairing up with kriya will be fresh,u guys will look good together , Sharon ur dance style matches with swayam,so pair up with him only

Rey: mere jaisa itna handsome ladka agar sath mein ho to humari Jodi to achhi lagni hi hai😉

Kriya rolled her eyes,took her bag and went out...

Rey: such antics,sirf tum hi de sakti ho miss.baatcutter!!😉

NOTE: GUYS DO SUGGEST IN UR COMMENTS,KE TUM LOG KAUNSE GAANE PAR KRIYANSH KO NACHANA CHAHTE HO... MEIN LOTTERY KARKE TUM LOGO KE GAANEIN MEIN SE KOI GAANA CHOOSE KAR LUNGI,,BUT DO KEEP IN MIND THAT KRIYA WILL WEAR LEHENGA FOR THE DANCE,SO CHOOSE ACCORDINGLY😊😊

This update is dedicated to my newly found sweeettt readers Trishika,ramya.reddy and Ria,thaank uu for longg comments,i justt love themm!!!!!😊😊 rajashri,hina and monica,i am a fan of ur comments👏 MD is bar bhi lamba sa update diya,so tum bhi ek khatee peete ghara ka wala comment dena (long one)😆 And ofcourse to all the readers a veryy big thank youuu!!!!!!👏

Sorry to mahnaaz and nivedita tum logo ke unresrve karne se pehle hi maine update kardiya,i will be waitng fr ur unresrved comments,and cngraats for being the 1st ones 👏

Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh u dedicated this part to me😲
thank u so much🤗
coming to this update hayee this is awsmmm
im rofling reading thisss🤣
rey and vicky convo was awsm me rofling reading thattt🤣
waise ye sahi hai ladkiyon ko bhagwan he samaj nhn paaya tho ye rey kya cheez haiii🤣
and then kr covo hayee funnyyy
hayee kria vicky frnds awsmm
then hehehe firse rey kria ab dance partners
gosh kitna ladte hai ye loggg
their fights are funnyyy
hayee saachi u wrote very nice well done
update soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb
kriya & her attitude
maar dala
lund it
kya baat hai
&
rey coolness hmmm..
mazaaa aagaya
both r pairded
yeh to honaa hi tha
kriya that to lehengaa
wauh...
rey to gayaaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome.. Amazing.. perfect...

loved it.

u know what if someone is in sad mode then that person must read ur updates...

amazing...

hehe.. destiny se toh ArSha ki yad aa gyi.. 😃

Vicky is right.. ladkiyon ko to bhagwan nhi smjh paye.. rey kya cheez hai.. :P

superb..

update soon..

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