Making Khushi Mine II #30 (Last) ~ Very Imp Note Pg 117

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happypeace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

I have been meaning to comment pr asli duniya has been very demanding.

I read the last chapter of mkm and was almost reduced to tears by the end. I can't describe the range of emotions I felt. I was happy k arnav and khushi finally triumphed in their relationship with each other pr couldn't help but be sad that I'd miss reading their story.

I have come to love this story dearly and only you are to thanks for it. God knows how eagerly I waited for mkm 2 chapters.

Thankyou for letting me part of this amazing journey. You weave magic with words anon. Mkm 2 will be sorely missed!

I hope you write more stories again and let us he part of them.

Thank you once again.

Eagerly awaiting the epilogue!

Love

Happy.

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SA_nimk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

its finally over..still cant believe it

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Russell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

wow thread number 30!!! simply awesome...

p.s- missing NLG ...

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robinhood008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

That was an amazinggg update!!!

I know I'm relli late on commenting but I got very busy and I also wanted to leave a comment before the epilogue and I'm happy that Im getting to do it!!!

Coming on to the last chapter
Seems like a long journey isn't...
If u see it from arnav point of view it like From disliking/hating khushi to MAKING KHUSHI MINE
And what an interesting story it was!!!

From despising even a glimpse of khushi to not waking up without getting a glimpse of khushi...and I've love leading this transition to bits!!!

Hahahaha happy two months anniversary!!!
More than khushi it should've been arnav celebrating it cause he has finally found his MI AMORE as he likes to say

Hmmm so from cooking absolutely nothing to.making slightly darker shade shooo cuteee pancakes...its a huge progress I must say

But still I would relli like khushi doing atleast basic cooking and certainly not something too fancy...please make it happen in epilogue
I know it doesn't relli bother arnav but seriously that person deserve a decent meal...lol

Ahem ahem PDA...clearly not arnavs cup of tea...and an embarrassed arnav is even rare a sight...for the first and I hope the last time, I found him relli cute

Spending time with tara n.vikarant had surely made khushi even.more comfortable with her limp

Finallyyy arnav talked his inner most thoughts n feeling with khushi...and khushi little lie gave him immense happiness...ofcourse khushi did the right thing by being vocals abt her insecurity
At this point I actually wanted arnav to tell her that he actually use to regard her limp as a blessing to himself as it made ppl like shyam and raichand guy stay away from her
Well I hope he does that in the epilogue
This one thing.might actually eliminate khushi insecurity forever!!!!

Coming on to sumer, well after getting khushis bottomless love..arnav should now atleast forgive him wholeheartedly...cause if not for sumer, khushi.may not have been the selfless loving person she is today that arnav has come to love above everything

Well how could I not.mention the infamous blue gown...Hahahaha
Finallyyy she got to wear it and the occasion was perfect!!!

Hope it made sense to you
This is the longest I've ever commented I guess

Loved it to bit

Amazinggg update!!!

Edited by robinhood008 - 11 years ago

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robinhood008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Congratzzz on the new thread!!!

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prpk525

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Congrats dear.. 30 threads!
you deserve it..

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naaza_deen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

bookmarked.

MKM had 30 chapters...MKM 2 has 30 threads...WOW!!! imagine anon...you have so many readers.congrats and it is well deserved.👏👏

Edited by naaza_deen - 11 years ago

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Wow congrats!!!

30th thread ... That's an achievement and a well deserved one for a story like this. 👏

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arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

comment for chap. 47(last)

wow it was a superb update... i cant imagine that Arnav can turn to what i hav read... so loving but still maintaining his character... wow

i always ... appreciate ur work and thoughts that you put in your stories...which make them the perfect.

you make a proper justification with the characters.
i always admire you a a superb writer that hold a very spl. place in my heart.

your updates and story reflect your personality that u are a superb person who have a great knowledge of things and world.

i will miss ur stories... hope u are soon going to come with a new story.

before i proceed to say about the update i will say something about the title of this FF... Making Khushi Mine... this title has now something which give some great feelings and always in past also made me feel something always wen i read the title... and as the story had two seasons with different stories but the passion that the title always depicted make me feel always something unusual and a kind of sensation always get created in me.

i wish if in future , if ever possible please try to pen a third season with same title ... coz this title hold grt charm of its own...

now about the update.

It was a awesme update ... with all the required elements sply the romance, that very rare often they shared in past.. but m happy that Arnav now openly confess his love as a daily dose to her.

Arnav has came over his demons and now has bonded well with her that now he had overcame all his fears and trusted her.

Arnav evn was elder to her but has learnt a lot from his partner.

I liked that part the , most where how Arnav never knew wat picnic can be??

And how she relax him and soothen his pains and embrace him under her love and care... that was really painful to read but yet I felt happy that she brought the man to life , to love and to express his love.

Arnav's character has showed many things to us, from a lost child to , a child seeking for love, to a person who started expressing himself for the love of his life and many other things with the support of a lady who was nave and innocent but yet managed to stea the heart of this man to secure him from his own fears.

Arnav has changed a lot in this past tym and I really appreciate how with the pace of tym u have shown the changes in him that are so genuine and look realistic.

You are a superb writer and I really appreciate and adore every word that you pen...

Khushi , she is the best I read here, wow her characterization was so superb that anybody can fall for her... Her small small antics her naivety her charm her innocence , everything was so perfectly poured that made her character a powerful character being just so simple yet charming.

She being this young then also holded her relations so well sply the one that was on steep to an end. Hats off for ur thoughts that created this all.

Khushi's tantrums made me always smile and laugh... I wen evr feel a bit lot I love to read all the parts of MKM-2 and my face cheer with smile , thanks for this special dose of MKM.

I wish you the best for your future and hope to see more of your stories and thanks for every pm you send.

With love

Arnavini